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Posted: 12 years ago
Friends,
I'm back with a new part. Thanks to all of you for the lovely comments 😊
I have replied to them in my clubbed comments. Please see these:
And before I post this part, there is something related to this part that I want to share with you all. Definitely we all have a little impact of Bollywood on us in a way or other. I'm no exception. 😳
Till now we have seen the Arjun style action was seen with Rajhsri Films Family and Relationship drama.
With this part, I'm starting the romance track of the story and when we think of romance, how can we forget the master of on screen romance Late. Mr. Yash Chopra. So my this part is dedicated to him. Nothing is original in the following section. It is more or less a combination of many romantic bollywood movies concepts.
The intention to post this note is to set the stage for the romance in the action drama so that it doesn't look odd and out of the place 😛
And please don't look for any logic in it. It is not logical... it is Dil-logical... Dil ka apna alag hi logic hota hai ;).
So presenting the first banner of the story to introduce the romance in it:
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Jaise dil hai, dhadkan hai...
Jaise aankh hai, darpan hai...
Jaise barkha - saawan hai...
Ek sajni - ek saajan hai...
Ek Dooje Ke Vaaste
Kahin suna tha ... ki Upar wala humein jodiyon mein banata hai... hum jab is duniya mein aatey hain to humein sare rishtey janm se hi mil jatey hain... par wo ek insaan, jo humare liye sabse special hota hai... uska humein kayi saalon tak intezaar karna padta hai...
Fir usi ka intezaar karte karte hum apni zindagi mein kitne logo se miltey hain... kayi log humari zindagi mein aatey hain... kuch humari zindagi mein apni jagah bana lete hai... aur kuch humare dil mein... kuch humari zindagi mein humare saath reh jaatey hain... aur kuch humari zindagi chale jaatey hain... par jaane wale log apni yaadein humare dil mein chhod jatey hain...achchhi, buri, khatti, meethi... har tarah ki ...
Aur itney logo mein wo bhi hota hai... jiska humein intezaar hai...sirf koi ek ...jo sabse khaas hota hai... jo humare dil ke sabse kareeb aa jaata hai... wo ek chehra... wo ek naam... jo humesha ke liye humse jud jaata hai... ussey humari pehchaan ban jaati hai... aur humse uski...
Par hum usey pehchaaney kaise?
Kayi baar humein pehli mulaqat mein hi ehsaas ho jaata hai ki haan yehi hai wo jiska humein intezaar tha... kuch log kehtey ki usse milne ke baad dil mein koi ghati bajne lagti hai... kuch log kehtey hain ki usey dekhtey hi aankhon ke camera mein "CLICK" hota hai aur uski Tasveer dil ke photoframe mein transfer ho jati hai...
Sun-ne mein kitna ajeeb aur funny lagta hai... hai na? Par har baar aisa ho ye zaroori bhi nahi hai...
Kyunki kayi baar wo insaan humare aas paas hota hai par hum usey pehchaan nahi paatey... Aise mein dekha jaye to sab waqt ke haathon mein hota hai... kyunki sahi waqt aane par humein khud hi ehsaas ho jaata hai ki wo insaan humare liye ka maayne lagta hai...

Par zindagi ke apne kuch alag rules hotey hain... haalat har baar humara saath nahi dete aur us insaan ko pehchan lene ke baad bhi humein haalat ke badalne ka intezar karna padta hai...
Is kahani ke main characters bhi isi tarah ki situation mein uljhe huye hain...
Sameer ne Anwesha ko party mein dekha aur uske dil ki ghanti bajne lagi... Par Anwesha? Wo jab Sameer se milegi to kya uske dil ki bhi ghanti bajegi? Ya Sameer ko intezar karna padega ki kab Anwesha ko ye ehsaas hoga ki Sameer hi uska wo Prince Charming hai jiske sapne har ladki dekhti hai? Uski zindagi mein bhi ek chhota sa hadsa hua that jisne usey depression mein daal diya tha... kya wo us depression se bahar aa kar agey badh payegi aur Sameer ke pyar ko pehchanegi? Aur usey depression se bahar nikalne ke liye aur usey apne pyar ka ehsas dilwane ke liye kya Sameer kuch kar sakta hai? Aur agar kar sakta hai to kya wo karega? Par kaise? kya uski koshish kamyab hogi?
Riya ne jabse Arjun ko dekha hai tabse wo bechain hai... usey Arjun se miltey hi ye ehsaas ho gaya tha ki Arjun hi uska Prince Charming hai... wo Janti hai ki Arjun ne apni zindagi mein bahut kuch sahaa hai aur ab wo uski zindagi ke har achchhe aur bure waqt mein uska saath dena chahti hai...WO usey samajhti bhi hai aur usey poora waqt de rahi hai... Par Arjun? Kya wo taiyar hai? Uske liye uski Special Roshni thi jo uski zindagi se jaa chuki hai... aur baki reh gayi hai to sirf kuch yaadein... kuch bahut khoobsurat aur kuch bahut daravni... Pehli baar Riya se milne par Arjun ko uske baare mein kuch special nahi laga... par kya waqt ke saath usey ye ehsaas hone laga hai ki Riya hi uski sachchi humsafar hai? Kya wo Riya ke pyar ko samajhne laga hai?
Ab ye saari baatein to waqt hi batayega...
Par is waqt kya hai in charon ke dil mein?...kya inki love story shuru ho gayi hai?..So ab kahani ke is part mein hum in characters ke dil ki baatein janenge ...
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I know bahut bakwaas ho gayi... and agar ab jaldi se update nahi mila to mujhpar sadey huye egss aur tomatoes aur jooton ki baarish honey lagegi...
There is a surprise for Ariya fans ... I didn't mention it in the pre-cap because even I didn't know I would be able to present it so soon.
I have taken a big risk... I just hope you all like it...
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 4A
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5:00 PM

Riya's phone beeps. SMS from her sister.

"operation successful. will be taking 8:00 PM flight, will reach at 10 PM"

Riya replies.

"OK, will plan to pick u up"


She again gets involved in the case. Case is solved. They find out that the victim's friend killed him because he thought the victim was having an illicit relationship with his wife, which was not true. The friend was just trying to help his wife to make him realize that he shouldn't be doubting her love and loyalty.

Arjun(to the culprit): Kisi bhi rishtey ki buniyad hota hai vishwaas ... agar tum apni patni par vishwaas nahi karte to iska matlab tum usse pyar hi nahi kartey... tum sirf apni zid ki khatir usey apne saath baandh ke rakhna chahtey ho... tum to pyar ka matlab bhi nahi samajhtey...

Sameer: Aur nahi tum apne dost ko samajh paye... tumhara dost sirf tumhari patni ki madad kar raha tha tumhare is shaq ki aadat ko mitane ke liye... jisse ki tumhari shadi-shuda zindagi khush-haal rahey... wo to tumhe khush dekhna chahta tha... afsos tum in dono rishton ki ahmiyat nahi samajh paye... tumhe tumhare gunah ki sazaa milegi... Chhotu... arrest karo isey...

After the case is over Sameer goes to commissioner office for some urgent meeting at around 7:00 PM and rest of the team goes to ETF office to file the records.

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At ETF office, Around 9:00 PM.

Arjun after he finishes reviewing the records that team has updated, gets up to leave.

Arjun: Maine sab check kar liya hai... sarey records theek hain... der ho gayi hai... mai nikal raha hoon... tum log bhi nikal jao... Shree, Riya ko safely ghar drop kar dena...

Trio is shocked to see Arjun "Akdu" Rawte leaving early today (Yes, 9:00 PM is early for him ;) ) They were not even in a position to react.

Shree barely manages to nod to his instruction about dropping Riya.

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Around 10:00 PM Arjun reaches lodge, freshens up and orders for food.

While waiting for food he is lost thinking about the events since morning and how it all started with what happened previous day. He was a little restless when Sameer told him that he is going to sports club and also told him the time.
Arjun pretended to ignore but he couldn't. In fact it added to his anxiety with his past moments of the game flashing in front of his eyes. And Riya added fuel to it by trying to mediate between him and Sameer frustrating him further. And in his frustration he snubbed the poor girl.

Flashback begins*

Previous day, on the way to Riya's home.

Riya strikes the conversation.

Riya: Sir, Thanks a lot...

Arjun(his usual plain and rude tone): Kisliye?

Riya: Wo aapne bataya tha na ki Rathod sir ko Gajar ka Halwa pasand hai... us liye... aapne bataya is liye hum unke liye ye surprise plan kar paye...

Riya stops to observe if Arjun reacts to it. But Arjun is quiet without giving any reaction, continuing the drive looking staright at the road.

Riya: Rathod sir bahut khush huye... unhe Halwa pasand bhi aaya... aur unhone Thanks bhi kaha... (a little pause)... aapko...

Arjun is snapped at this and gives her his usual glare.

Riya: wo... matlab... humne unhe nahi bataya ki apne humein gajar ke halwe ki baat batayi... unhone to bas itna kaha ki... jisne bhi humein ye bataya hai... usko Thanks bol dein... isliye...(stops again)

Arjun looks back to the road.

Riya: waise... pata nahi mujhe aisa kyun laga ki... shayad unhone guess kar liya tha ... ki ye baat aapne hi humein batayi hai...

Arjun gives an annoyed look to indicate that he is bored of her talks, but she continues.

Riya: Sir... mujhe lagta ki... aap dono ek dusre ko jitna achchhi tarah se jantey ... hain utna kabhi dikhate nahi... agar aap log ...

Arjun(snaps her short in his usual attitude, without looking at her): Riya, Mujhe aur Rathod ko kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi... ye hum dono achchhi tarah se jaantey hain... tumhe ye sab sochne ki zarurat nahi hai...apna dhyaan kaam par lagao to zyada behtar hoga... door raho in baaton se..(shooting his glare towards her)...ye baat tum samjhi ya... samjhaun?

Riya understood that his SYS meant he wants her to shut up. The remaining drive to her house was quiet.

Flashback ends*


He closes his eyes and in a few seconds he hears a voice... Roshni's voice calling him.

(Note: Roshni in present whom Arjun talks to is not Roshni's spirit. It is Arjun's happy mind voice. It is his happy self hidden somewhere back of his mind.
He had all happy memories with Roshni so everything that gives him happiness, his mind associates it with Roshni and tells him that it is Roshni telling him. He talks to her in mind with closed eyes and not aloud)

Roshni: Arjun...

Arjun(surprised): Roshni...

He opens his eyes and looks here and there. He thinks he is hallucinating due to stress. He again closes his eyes and the voice calls him again.

Roshni: Arjun... mujhe bahar kahan dhoondh rahey ho... mai to tumhare andar hoon...tumhare dil mein... tumse milne aayi hoon

He looks at her photo kept on the table once again closes his eyes and goes into the trance.

Arjun(with pain): agar tum mere andar thi to ab tak mujhse milne kyun nahi aayi tum?

Roshni(smiling): dekho... ye hi wajah hai ki mai tumse milne nahi aayi... mai tumhe takleef mein nahi dekh sakti... par aaj pata hai mai kyun aayi hoon?... aaj tumhe kitne dino baad maine muskurate huye dekha...tum bilkul pehle wale Arjun ban gaye they aaj... kyunki aaj tum akele nahi they... tumhara Sam tha saath mein...kal shaam se dekh rahi thi... bahut bechain they tum, jab se Sam ne tumhe ye bataya ki wo sports club jaa raha hai... nahi rok paye na khud ko...pahunch hi gaye Sam ke bataye time par... aur ek baar jo wahan pahunch gaye to court ke andar bhi gaye na... aur wo basket ball ka match (giggles)... tum dono ab bhi waise hi ho... sirf ek dusre se ball cheentey rehtey ho...ek baar bhi basket nahi kar paye

Arjun: kya matlab? hum dono to aaj khele hi nahi...

Roshni: achchha...tumhe kya lagta hai? wahan court mein wo Shree aur Riya khel rahey they? maan lo is sachchayi ko... wo tum aur Sam hi khel rahey they... unke moves to tum dono ke control mein they...

Arjun(smiles): baat to tumhari sahi hai...

Roshni: waise Maan-na padega Riya, Shree aur Chhotu ko... Riya ne Sam ki kal ki baat yaad rakhi... aur Chhotu kya keh raha tha? Sam ne kaha ki Shree alsi hai...zaroor un ki bhi kuch baat huyi hogi... Aur ye baat in teeno ne ek dusre ko batayi aur andaza laga hi liya ki tum dono aaj saath mein waha zarur aaoge... aur isliye wo teeno bhi pahunch gaye... achchha plan banaya uhnone tum dono ko wapas saath mein laane ka...tumhare saath reh kar kaafi smart ho gaye hain tumhare team members...

Arjun(chuckles): wo to honge hi...

Roshni: ab aagey ka kya?

Arjun: kya matlab?

Roshni: Riya...

Arjun is taken aback at her mention and doesn't speak up

Roshni: arrey... usko basket ball sikhana hai na? achchhi player hai... tum sikhaoge to jaldi seekh jayegi... waise uska naam sunkar ekdum chup ho gaye... kya sochne lagey?

Arjun(relieved): nahi kuch nahi... haan sikhaunga na usey...

Roshni: waise achchhi ladki hai wo... mujhe to bahut achchhi lagi... aur tumhe bhi to wo achchhi lagti hai na? kitni khoobsurat aankhen hai uski... tum to jaise kho hi gaye they na?

Arjun(surprised): kya matlab? nahi... aisa kuch nahi hai...

Roshni: ACP Arjun Rawte... maine kaha na ki mai tumhare dil mein hoon... isliye tum chaah kar bhi mujhse apne dil ki koi baat chhupa nahi saktey... mujhe to waise hi sab pata chal jata hai... aur ye baat kabhi mat bhoolna (chuckles)

Arjun is quiet.

Room service boy comes with the dinner. The door is open. He comes in, keeps the food on table as usual and leaves closing the door.

Roshni: chalo... khana aa gaya hai... aaram se khao aur so jao... mai jaati hoon...

Arjun: Mat jao na Roshni...

Roshni: abhi tumhe khane par concentrate karna hai aur uske baad thoda rest bhi karna hai... mai fir aungi na tumse baat karne

Arjun: Kab aaogi?

Roshni: jab jab tum muskuraoge... khush hogey... dusro ko khushi dogey... Sam ke saath rudely baat nahi karoge... apni team ko bhi bina wajah nahi daantoge... unhe ye apna "Akdu" attitude nahi dikahoge...tab tab mai aaungi tumse baat karne...

Arjun: tumhe bhi lagta hai ki mai "Akdu" hoon?...

Roshni: haan... ho tum ekdum Akdu...kal Riya ko nahi dikha rahe they apna ye attitude? bechari tumhare bhale ke liye hi to bol rahi thi...aur kuch galat bhi nahi bol rahi thi... tum pareshan they... Sam ki baat sunkar...aur apna frustration us bechari par nikal diya...

Arjun is quiet remembering how he snubbed Riya.

Roshni: par pehle tum aise nahi they... mere jane ke baad kyun ho gaye tum aise... mai tumhe aise nahi dekhna chahti... please mere pehle wale Arjun ban jao...

Arjun is again quiet.

Roshni: achchha theek hai... ye sab baad mein sochna... ab khana kha lo... bahut bhookh lagi hai tumhe... hum baad mein baat karenge...

Arjun comes out of the trance.

He has the dinner and goes to sleep. After so many days he was feeling a little lighter. Though his revenge was yet to be taken and Sikandar was yet to be punished, but still he felt as if a burden was taken off his shoulders.

There were two reasons for it - First, after a long time he was with his friend Sam today and not his chief Sameer with whom he is always at loggerheads and second reason, today he took a little step towards a new beginning. He had developed a liking towards Riya for a last few days but was in denial of this feeling.

He always liked to see her with Chhotu and Shree. She always used to smile and laugh with them. He never failed to notice the dimple on her cheek when she used to smile. He never felt like taking his eyes off her when she was smiling. But he always avoided looking directly into her eyes, because it used to give him a guilty feeling.

But today he looked into her eyes. She had beautiful eyes and for a few seconds he was lost in them. And he couldn't say no to those pleading puppy eyes. He agreed to be her coach.

Somewhere while talking to the happy voice inside him, he accepted the first reason to himself, but was still scared to accept the second reason though his happy voice accepted it without any guilt.

He sleeps peacefully that night.
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Few hours back.
Around 9:55 PM
Sameer too is on his way back home after his meeting. He remembers that after 2 days, they have to present a crucial video recording in the court. He calls up Shree to remind him to keep a copy of thar recording ready.

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Shree is to drop Riya back home. They are close to Riya's home when suddenly Riya remembers that she had to pick up her sister from Airport at 10 PM. Shree tells her that it will take another 40 mins for them to reach airport. She tells him to turn back to airport. She tries calling Anwesha, but her phone is still switched off.

Riya is exteremly upset with her stupidity and curses herself.

Suddenly, Shree's phone rings. It's Sameer calling. He receives the call.

Shree: hello sir

Sameer: Shree, tumhe yaad hai na... wo dancer ki jal kar death ho gayi thi... uski video recording and baki ke logo ke recorded statements humein parso court mein dikhane hain... wo tumne taiyar kar diye?

Shree: Haan sir... wo sab maine ready kar diya hai... aur aunthencity certificate bhi hai uske saath...

Sameer: Good...office se nikal gaye tum?

Shree: Haan sir... Riya ko drop karne aaya tha ... aur hum almost uske ghar pahunch gaye they... par tabhi usey yaad aaya ... ki uski didi abhi 10 baje ki flight se aa rahi hain... to abhi hum nikle hai airport jaane ke liye... abhi uske ghar ke paas hi hain...

Sameer: kya? par tum logo ko to bahut der lagegi aane mein? aur flight to almost pahunch gayi hogi..(looks at his watch)..kyunki 10 baj rahey hain abhi...

Shree: haan sir... par kya kar saktey hain?

Sameer: ruko... mai airport ke bahar se hi nikal raha hoon... tum Riya ko wapas drop karo... mai uski didi ko receive karne jata hoon aur usey Riya k ghar drop kar doonga...(he turns his car to airport)

Shree: ek minute sir...(to Riya) Riya... Rathod sir keh rahey hain ki wo airport ke bahar se hi guzar rahey hain abhi... wo tumhari didi ko pick up karke tumhare ghar drop kar denge... lo baat karo sir se

Riya takes the phone.
Riya: sir... aap?

Sameer: haan Riya... mai almost airport pahunch gaya hoon... tumhari didi ka number bhej do... to mai unhe contact kar loonga...

Riya(embarrassed): I'm sorry sir... wo aapko pareshan hona pada...

Sameer: That's fine Riya... don't worry...

Riya: sir wo didi ka phone switched off hai abhi...

Sameer: to theek hai... unhe mera number aur meri gadi ka number SMS kardo... phone on kartey hi unhe mera number mil jayega aur wo mujhe contact kar lengi... don't worry...

Riya: ok sir...

Shree turns the car again for Riya's home and drop her back and leaves.

At Riya's home:
Riya sends the SMS.

" My chief coming to pick u up ACP Rathod 91XXX45, Black Mahindra XUV no MH04 LY 3XX8"

After 5 mins

Riya's cellphone beeps "message delivered". She is relieved. After 2 mins she calls her sister.

Anwesha: Chinki... kahan ho tum... aur ye sms... tumhare chief?

Riya: sorry Annu di... poori baat mai aapko baad mein batati hoon... aap Rathod sir ko call kar lo...

Anwesha: ok...

Call disconnected.

Riya calls up a near by restaurant and orders food for herself and Annu and watches TV.

After 10 mins, she gets a call from Annu that she had met Sameer and left the airport.

After another 15 mins, she gets another call from Annu which surprises her. She follows what Annu told her to do and calls up the restaurant to change the food order. Luckily the delivery boy had not left, so they accomodated the changes.

Riya is surprised with Annu's instructions but quickly snubs it. She switches off the TV and goes to the balcony.

Riya while waiting for Annu remembers her conversation with Arjun previous day. She already had a little discussion with Sameer regarding the abnormal reationship between Arjun and Sameer. She took a chance and tried to talk to Arjun too, but failed. Arjun still flaunted his "Akdu" attitude.

But she was satisfied that she at least gave a try to it. She didn't mind Arjun's words because she knew that something was already bothering him and moreover she was used to his rude behaviour now.

Later in the evening, when Shree and Chhotu told her that Sameer and Arjun used to play basket ball earlier, she decides to take a chance. She tricks Shree and Chhotu to convince them to go too the club next day. She couldn't directly tell them about her discussion with Sameer and Arjun. Her trick works.

In the morning she was happy to see that both Sameer and Arjun got involved in the game forgetting their differences. She also convinced Arjun to be her coach. And she knew Shree would have done the same with Sameer. She planned to make Sameer and Arjun to show them a demo game, but the case came up and they had to leave.

She was a little surprised when Arjun agreed to be her coach after the attitude he had been flaunting right from their first meeting. And after what happened previous day, it was a big risk talking to Arjun. But she took a chance looking at his passion towards the game and she succeeded.

She remembered the moment when their eyes met. He never looked into her eyes earlier, but today was something different. She was always attracted towards him since the day she saw him for the first time. Even after he used to snub her, she knew he was actually hiding his pain. She couldn't understand what exactly was in his eyes today, but definitely there was no anger for her. She felt a little better.


Her chain of thoughts were interrupted by sound of Rathod's vehicle entering her society. She looked down and saw Annu and Rathod getting out of the vehicle. She sprints towards the door to open it.

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Part 4B in the following post.
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Part 4B

(Tried to pick up a social issue. I do not intend to hurt people living in Delhi. It is all based on the incidents that are highlighted in media.)
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Her chain of thoughts were interrupted by sound of Rathod's vehicle entering her society. She looked down and saw Annu and Rathod getting out of the vehicle. She sprints towards the door to open it.

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Around 45 mins back.

10:05 PM Mumbai Domestic Airport, Parking lot.

Sameer parks his vehicle, comes out of the car and waits for Anwesha.

Anwesha calls Sameer.

Sameer: hello... ACP Rathod!

Anwesha: ACP Rathod, mai Anwesha bol rahi hoon... Riya ki behen... aap kahan hain?

Sameer: Dr Anwesha...hi! mai parking lot mein hoon.. ground floor par... aap kahan hain?

Anwesha: wo maine abhi apna luggage collect kiya hai aur bahar aa rahi hoon... aap wahi rukiye... Riya ne aapki gadi ka number diya hai mujhe... mai aati hoon wahan...

Sameer: OK... I'll wait...

call disconnected.

Anwesha pushes her luggage trolley and goes to parking lot ground floor and searches for Sameer's vehicle with the number that Riya sent.


She spots the vehicle and a tall, fair, handsome and dashing man standing close to it. She guesses this must be ACP Rathod. He is looking in another direction.

She comes closer.

Anwesha(very soft and polite voice): ACP Rathod ?

Sameer turns to her and is shocked. He couldn't believe his eyes. Yes, its was "HER".
Sameer is totally blank and cannot think of anything. He barely manages to nod his head in "yes" while lost looking at her.

Anwesha: hi... I'm Anwesha... Riya's sister...

Sameer(still lost): hi, Dr Anwesha!!!

He stands there like a statue without saying a word looking at her. She feels a little awkward. She continues

Anwesha: Chalein?

Sameer(snapping out): ohhh... haan chaliye...

Anwesha: wo mera saaman...

Sameer(embarrassed): I'm sorry ... laaiye... aapka saaman andar rakh deta hoon

Anwesha : Thank you

He comes forward to help her with luggage. He keeps her luggage inside and opens the door for her. She gets in and he too gets into his driving seat and they move on.

Sameer(thinking): Dr Annwesha... Annu !!!!! (there is a twinkle in his eyes)

She calls up Riya:

Anwesha: Chinki, mai aur Mr Rathod airport se nikal rahey hai ab... khana khaya tumne?

Riya: nahi... maine order kar diya hai...aap aoge tab tak aa jayega...

Anwesha: achchha theek hai...

Call disconnected.

Anwesha strikes a conversation with Sameer.

Anwesha:(confused) achanak ye Riya ka sms aaya ki wo nahi aa rahi hai... sab theek to hai na?

Sameer: arre.. dont worry... sab theek hai... wo ek case ke investigation mein hum sab busy ho gaye aur uske dimag se baat nikal gayi... usey thoda der se yaad aaya... wo aa rahi thi par usey aane mein aur 40 minute lag jatey... mai us waqt yahi airport ke paas se hi guzar raha tha... aur by chance meri baat huyi to maine ussey kaha ki wo ghar jaye... mai aapko saath lekar aata hoon...(smiles) wo kya hua na... aaj Sunday tha... aur sab chhutti ke mood mein they aur achanak se ye case aa gaya...to sabhi ka mood thoda sa kharab ho gaya... par kya kar saktey hain... duty to duty hai... (smiles)

Anwesha: ohh... i'm sorry... Riya aur meri wajah se aapko pareshani huyi... i'm really sorry... agar wo mujhe bata deti to mai taxi se chali jati...

Sameer: Dr Anwesha, mai janta hoon mumbai waise to ek safe jagah hai... par fir bhi ek akeli ladki ko ...raat mein ...ek anjaan sheher mein ...taxi se jane dene ka risk lena theek nahi... (smiles)

Anwesha smiles.

Anwesha: aap kahan rehtey hain?

Sameer: mai... aapke Wadia hospital ke ekdum saamne...

Anwesha: ohhh...wo to Riya ke ghar se bahut door hai... matlab sirf mujhe drop karne aap itni raat ko itni door aa rahey hain ? iski zarurat nahi thi Mr Rathod (embarrassed).

Sameer: arre Dr. Anwesha... please aisa mat sochiye... its perfectly alright.

Anwesha: aap din bhar ke thakey huyen hain... aur humari wajah se... aapko der bhi ho jayegi... aapki family aapka intezar kar rahi hogi...

Sameer: mai yahan akela rehta hoon Dr Anwesha... mere parents Udaipur mein rehtey hain... aur ...(stops)

Anwesha: aur..?

Sameer(chuckles and jokes): aur shadi maine ki nahi...to mujhe ...koi darr nahi hai... kisi bhi tarah ke mushkil sawalon ka...

Anwesha(confused): mushkil sawaal?

Sameer: Haan!!!! I mean ..."der se kyun aaye?", "itni der kiske saath they?", "phone kyun nahi utha rahey they?", ... is tarah ke mushkil sawaal poochhne wali koi hai nahi... (chuckles)... jab chahu ghar jata hoon... jab chahu bahar jata hoon... koi rok tok nahi

Anwesha also chuckles with him

Anwesha: ek minute...

Anwesha calls Riya.

Anwesha: Chinki... Mr Rathod humare saath dinner karenge...unke liye bhi order kar do...

Riya: kya? (surprised) .. achchha theek hai...

Call disconnected.

Sameer: arre... ye aapne kya kiya?

Anwesha: relax Mr Rathod... abhi abhi to aapne kaha ki koi ghar pe aapse mushkil sawaal karne wali nahi hai... fir ghar jatey jatey aapko aur der ho jayegi... aur der ho jayegi to aap theek se kha bhi nahi payenge... kyunki koi khilane wali bhi nahi hai... (smiles)

Sameer is a little embarrassed but feels good that she cared for him

Sameer: aapki flight kaisi thi? koi pareshani to nahi hui?

Anwesha: flight was ok... koi problem nahi huyi... ..

Sameer: aap bahut thaki huyi lag rahi hain?

Anwesha: haan... wo 3 din se ek patient ki haalat bahut kharab thi... uski ek complicated surgery karni thi isliye jaldi gayi thi hospital...wo aapne Delhi ke journalist rape case ke baarey mein suna hoga...usi ladki ki surgery karni thi... 4 ghantey chali surgery... uske baad kuch der patient ki halat monitor ki... jab wo out of danger huyi tab socha ki mai nikal sakti hoon... aur seedha airport ke liye nikli... ghar bhi nahi gayi... bags bhi subah hi pack karke hospital le aayi thi...

Sameer: ohh... haan us case ke bare mein suna maine... very unfortunate... good to know that she is out of danger now...

Anwesha: haan unfortunate to hai... par Delhi mein ye bahut aam baat hoti ja rahi hai...(disgusted tone) pata nahi kya mil jata hai aise logo ko ek ladki ki zindagi is tarah se barbaad karke... they are psychopaths... mansik rogi hotey hain...

Sameer: kuch hadd tak aapki baat sahi hai Dr. Anwesha... par ye jurm log poore hosh mein kartey hain... unhe pata hota hai ki wo kya kar rahein hai... wo sirf ek kamzor ladki par apni taaqat dikha kar khud ko mard samjhtey hain...isey apna haq samajhtey hain...


Anwesha: sahi keh rahey hain aap Mr Rathod...aisa isliye hota hai kyunki humare samaj mein bachhon ki parvarish hi aise ki jati hai... ladki aur ladke mein bachpan se discrimination kiya jata hai...ladko ke dimag mein ye baat bhari jati hai ki they own a girl and a girl is told that whatever wrong happens to her... she is only responsible for it... chahe uski koi galti ho ya na ho... zimmedar wohi hai... men are not told "Dont rape a girl", instead girl's are told "don't go out if you want to save youself from being raped"...

Sameer: Right Dr Anwesha, and that is very unfortunate... ladki khud ko galat samajhti hai...aur badnaami ke dar se kai aise cases to report bhi nahi hotey... aur kai baar us ladki ki shadi karwa di jati hai us ghatiya insaan se...jisse ki wo insaan bach nikalta hai... kaash hum aise cases mein kuch kar patey... aisi ladkiyo ko insaaf dilwa patey... unhe ye ehsaas dilwa pate ki galti unki nahi hai... unki zindagi yaha khatam nahi huyi hai... unhe jeene ka... khush rehne ka.. apni zindagi mein aagey badhne ka poora haq hai... aur ye haq unse koi nahi chheen sakta.. (speaking very seriously and passionately against crime against women)

Anwesha looks at Sameer with respect. There is silence for a few minutes.

Sameer: BTW Dr Anwesha, aap DPS mein padhti thi na?

Anwesha(surprised): aapko kaise pata?

Sameer: wo last month maine aapko Alumni meet mein dekha tha... is liye andaza lagaya

Anwesha: ohhh... mai bhi soch rahi thi ki shayad maine bhi aapko kahi dekha hai... par yaad nahi aa raha tha... maine bhi aapko dekha tha wahan...Par aapko yaha dekhne ki ummeed nahi thi... is liye pehchaan nahi paayi... what a coincidence... hai na?

Sameer smiles.

They reach Riya's house.

Sameer: Lijiye... pahunch gaye hum...

Sameer parks the car and takes her luggage out. Riya is seeing from window and opens the door.

Sameer helps her take the luggage inside the building, they get into lift, reach 5th floor and come out of the lift.

Riya is happy. Sameer and Anwesha enter her house with luggage. Riya hugs Anwesha like a kid.

Riya: Annu Diii... i missed u sooo much..

Anwesha: arre haan... i missed u too chinki...

Riya: tum mere liye kya laayi?

Sameer looks at this re-union of sisters and is amused to see the tough cop Riya behaving like a kid.

Anwesha: arre haan baba ... batati hoon... pehle Mr Rathod ko to attend karo... unhe baithne ko kaho... pani pilao... 10:45 baj gaye hain... wo bhi din bhar ke thakey huye hain... aur unhe der bhi ho rahi hai... isliye bina time waste kiye dinner bhi kar lete hain...already hum inhe pareshan kar chukey hain... humari baatein to hoti rahengi...

Riya is a little embarrassed that she forgot that Sameer is there. Anwesha washes her hands and heads to kitchen.

Riya(sheepishly smiles): I'm sorry sir... mai didi ko dekh kar sab bhool gayi... Thank you so much sir... and sorry again... aap baithiye na...

Sameer(smiles): its ok Riya... tum akeli rehti ho?

Riya: nahi sir... meri roommate ki shadi hone wali hai... to wo abhi ghar gayi hai... usne abhi ghar chhoda nahi hai... next month wo apna saaman le jayegi... aue isse pehle ki mai dusri roomate dhundh pati... Di aa gayi... to ab ye hi meri roommate hongi (smiles)

Anwesha serves the dinner. They start eating

Anwesha suddenly remembers something and opens one of her bags and opens a box of Laddoos amd Mathris for Sameer. Riya feels jealous that she will have to share her favorite Laddoos and Mathris with Sameer.

Sameer is happy to see homemade snacks. It reminds him of his mother. With this he also noticed Riya's kid like expressions that she is not very happy sharing this stuff with him.

Sameer: Dr. Anwesha, ye sab aap Riya ke liye lekar aayi thi... usse poochh to lijiye ki kya wo ye sab mere saath share karna chahti hai ya nahi ? (gives a naughty smile)

Riya is shocked and her eyes are wide open. She feels embarrased thinking that Sameer his really reading her mind.

Sameer: wo kya hai na... aaj subah hi maine iske against Shree ko basket ball ke game mein help ki thi

Riya makes a funny face. Anwesha chuckles

Riya(sheepishly): aisa kuch nahi hai sir... Wo Arjun sir bhi to meri help kar rahey they na...

Sameer gets a little serious at Arjun's mention but changes the topic.

Sameer: Laddoo bahut tasty hai... aapne banaye?

Riya(chips in): haan... itney tasty laddoo sirf meri Annu di bana sakti hain...

Anwesha and Sameer smile.

After having food, Sameer leaves for his place. Its 11:15 PM.

After Sameer leaves, Anwesha and Riya chit chat for sometime. Anwesha gives her favorite chocolates, and other gifts she got for her, some clothes and accessories.
Riya is happy to get all this. She again hugs her and sleeps keeping her head in Anwesha's lap. Anwesha runs he fingers in Riya's hair till she is asleep.

After that, she carefully lifts Riya's head and rests it on a pillow and sleeps next to her thinking about Sameer.

She finds him very caring, responsible, mature and a perfect gentleman as a human being and a cop. There is something in him that touched her heart. She had already heard a lot about him from Riya. One more thing about him that unknowingly got registered in her mind - He was single. She was single too. Se blushed a little at this thought but snubbed it remembering her past events and the guilt attached to it. Yes, she felt guilty for that one incident that changed her life. Though her mother and Riya never blamed her and tried their best to make Annu move on, she still couldn't get out of that guilt.

She drifts into sleep remembering the past events.

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Sameer reaches his place at around 11:55 PM and sleeps thinking about Anwesha.

He couldn't understand why he was dumbstuck in the parking lot when he saw her. Obviously, he didn't expect "her" to be Riya's sister but he never expected himself to behave this way. He is again reminded of the alumni meet party. He noticed that though a little tired but Anwesha was looking lovely wearing a green saree. Her hair were carelessly and loosely tied with a clip and a few flicks coming on her face and she attemptimg to tuck them back of her ears again and again. Something tickled him and he smiled to himself. He got the similar feeling that he got when he saw her at the party. Yes, he was attracted towards her. There was something in her eyes and in her smile that was pulling him towards her.

He finds that Anwesha is completely opposite of bubbly, chirpy and a little loud Riya. Anwesha is quiet, soft spoken, speaks in a very soft and low volume.

She cares a lot about Riya and almost like a mother to her. She has a beautiful smile and twinkling eyes which have hidden some pain in them. She is mature and sensible.

Thinking about dinner time, after a long time he felt like being with a family. He didn't have to eat his dinner alone. Though food was not home-made but still the feeling of being with a family made him a little happy. And the Laddoos that she got were as sweet as her smile. He remembered how He used to have dinner with Arjun and Roshni most of the times.

He picked up his cellphone and went to the call list. Last call was from her number. He saves it in his contact list.

Sameer(confused, thinking): us din party ke baad to usey dobara milne ki koi ummeed nahi thi...aur aaj achanak wo mere saamne aa gayi... samajh mein nahi aaya ki kaise react karoon? kya kahoon? sirf usko dekhta raha... pata nahi kya soch rahi hogi wo mere baarey mein? stupid Sameer (scolds himself mentally)... par pata nahi kya tha un aankhon mein... us chhoti si muskaan mein jo mujhe apni taraf kheench sa raha tha... pata nahi... kisi aur ladki ko dekh kar kabhi aisa nahi laga... kya ye koi ishara hai? koi signal? jaise Roshni kaha karti thi? ya fir... pehli nazar ka pyar? what rubbish ACP Rathod ... ye kya teenagers ki tarah soch rahey ho? grow up...(again scolds himself mentally)... par achchhi ladki hai wo...uska number bhi hai ...us din soch raha tha ki usey kaise contact karoon? kabhi call karunga usko... lekin call karke kahunga kya? DAMN ITTT... ye sab kya soch raha hoon mai? sirf ek baar mila hoon ussey... aur ... nahi... forget it for now... kal duty par bhi jana hai...

Still he couldn't control his thoughts and drifts into sleep remembering her.

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Monday, 4 March

Anwesha joins her project. Riya joins her duty.

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In ETF dicussion room.

9:30 AM

Rathod: Team, jaise ki aap sabko pata hai ki humara naya Forensic lab set up ho chuka hai... aaj ek nayi forensic expert humein join karne wali hain...

Shree(whispers in Chhotu's ears): team mein ek aur ladki... chalo Riya ko company mil jayegi gossip karne ke liye ... waise bhi ladkiyan aur karti kya hain?
Shree and Chhotu chuckle inviting a glare from Riya.

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So how was it?
Please excuse the spelling mistakes...
Let me know your views...
Pre-cap : A new entry in ETF...A new Forensic Expert...
No, it is not Liza D'Cruz... Friends, I know I might disappoint Liza-Shree fans... but I really really really don't have time to write Liza-Shree nok-jhok scenes... and there wouldn't be any fun without that... So this is a new character... my imagination...
Those who wish to receive the PM, please add me to the Buddy list and don't thank me for the PM 😉
Regards,
Bhavna
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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di ur note..was nyc
yc ji hv a different charm
my fav sng
yup dil ki batein dil hi jane ;)
bner was awesum di 🤗
Part was awesum
ariya fans r happy fr sure
nw arjun bro part was nicely writen..
rosh bhabi o o is it realy easy to move on ?
ariya part was gud
oye hoye anu di...
sam bro ke sath drive nt bd
ps. me 1st..
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haye samanu ke liye ek sng
pehli nazar me kaisa jadu kr diya
mushkil sawal 🤣
Awesum part di
haye anu di ab to blush kro long drive pe hokar aye ho...
haye!
case was omg hate d 🤬
Samanu pov was superb for case
nw riya jealous are hone wale jeej h..
lol
sam bro pov was excelent
waiting for more di
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update bhavna ...was waiting to read the update yaar
now gotta start work
the lines on love are so beautiful...can i pls copy it n FB ...its so beautiful yaar
my hindi is very poor since i am frm blore ...i can understand well can speak ok ok ...cant wrie at all
so so so beautiful yaaar the wordings in the note were ...feel like believing in love
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Posted: 12 years ago
yea i think it is riya's annu di.. very nice update dear.. we want more sameer-anwesha & ariya scence.. plz plz plz i mean what more romance from both of the couple..
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Originally posted by: marnali04

yea i think it is riya's annu di.. very nice update dear.. we want more sameer-anwesha & ariya scence.. plz plz plz i mean what more romance from both of the couple..

Thanks dear... but no... remember?... Annu di is coming for a research project... in a hospital opposite to Sameer's flat...
And she is not a Forensic expert 😉 ...
And romance... wo to abhi shuru hua hai...😉 ... it will be a fun ride of romance...
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Posted: 12 years ago
SIGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Though don't believe even for one moment in the concept of life long love, soul mates & matches made in heaven still your prologue for the love stories was very heart warming😃 Written straight from the heart by one deeply & hopelessly in love😳😆 Touched! Awesome.

I had tears in my eyes when I read the moving scene between Arjun & Roshni.Don't have words to describe it touched the heart in a myriad ways.He actually smiled & chukled!😲😃 Beautifully written! Only a man from a storybook will love his dead wife so much!😭 They don't make em any more like em!😳

Anwesha is a real hukum shah haan!👍🏼 Aaj Mr Rathore dinner humaare saath karenge! Poocha bhi nahi Sameer khana chahte bhi hai ya nahi!😆You go, girl!👏 Superb!

Loved the sisters bonding.Me too have two older sisters & they love me like Anwesha loves Riya.When they are not busy ordering me about or lecturing that is!😔😆

Awesomely written,Bhavna! Waiting for moreee...
Edited by -Carrie- - 12 years ago
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wow both updates were awesome dear... Loved it... Thanks for pms...

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