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Posted: 12 years ago
loved ur update...

arjun riya's coach too good
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Posted: 12 years ago
i like the real virtual game its awsome kahu toh main reveal karun isme main maahir hun... Lol... Anyway i lov it di...
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Payal ... Thanks ...mai to show mein yehi sab dekhna chahti thi... isliye likh rahi hoon 😉 ...arrey... tumhare Sam bhaiya bahut naughty hua kartey they bachpan mein... ab bhi hain ... bas dikhate nahi hain 😉 ... aur haan... ye wohi flat hai jo Annu di ke hospital ke theek samne hai 😛
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@AnjuRish ... Thanks 😊
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@Annu ... arrey... Arjun pehle se bata deta to Sam uski jaan khaa jata... kam se kam shuru ke naye naye dating k din Arjun ne mazey kar liye... ab to GF 6 months purani ho gayi 😛 ... punishment nahi... Sam Arjun se zyada der tak naraaz nahi reh sakta... 😉 ... isliye to khud se bataya ki sports club ja raha hai... matlab indirectly bola ki tu bhi wahi aaja... 😛 ... smart hai Sam 😛
Roshni achchhi teacher hai... aisi naubat shayad nahi aayegi 😉 ...Haan... dono padosi hain... 😉
Yaar ... ETF officer huyi to kya hua... wo bhi ek aam ladki hai ...😛
wohi to game ka mazaa tha... khud se directly khelne ki pehel nahi kar saktey they... to bechare Shree aur Riya ko hi nacha diya...😛... aur tumne bilkul sahi samjha... game R-R hi khel rahey they... 😉
Shree ke basket ball ke mazey to abhi baaki hain... wait and watch...jab Sam usko basket ball sikhayega...😆 ... aur ye ETF hai... emergency to kabhi bhi aa sakti hai ... aur ETF hi jayegi na emergency mein 😛
And don't worry... Kanya aa rahi hai agle part mein ... uski flight miss nahi hogi...😎
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@surprising Thanks 😊
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@unishaz Thanks 😊
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@zebbie ... Thanks ...good... so whatever I wrote about instructions was sensible... 😉...Riya is a sweety pie... padhne do usko comics 😛... as for the coach... I guess Arjun ko bula lo Sam bhai ki jagah... dekha nahi kaise eye-lock hua Ariya ka 😉 ... pehle to usko dekh bhi nahi raha tha...😛... yes... trying to make next part more interesting 😊
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@Leki Thanks ...😊 ... yes... when I was writing this part... I found it difficult to make them directly play... so I thought that they can be involved this way... 😊 and trio masti has to be there 😉
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@Naina ... Thanks... abhi nahi... direct match ke liye thoda intezar... abhi mujhe Sam ki heroine ki entry karwani hai... aur Ariya ko bhi thida close laana hai... 😉 ... to direct match fir kabhi... par ye match hoga zaroor... I promise ...😉
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@Fatima ... Thanks... the intention to go back in past was to show Sam-Arjun past bonding ... which needs to be revived...😊 ... teachers and their punishments... Sam ki jaan nikal jati thi 😛
Yes... Riya ka bhi koi secret hona chahiye na 😛 and even I love this trio masti 😊
yes... there will be some very small but interesting parts on the basketball coaching...
And is baar Annu pakka aa rahi hai... koi gadbad nahi ...
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@Zuby... Thanks... yes... the proxy game... the purpose of the game was to kick start the process of reviving their friendship... 😛
Teachers ka hate to ho gaya... 😉but call it a coincidence or what... but yes, a clothes salesman is also going to feature in the story... and playing a very short but interesting part 😉
Comics...that was the purpose... I have tried to add these little things to the different characters with which a reader can connect with... be it experience of teachers punishments, comic books, game of basket ball, little pranks, kite-flying, coming home after playing an outdoor games with all bruises on knees and elbows... this has been a part of our childhood... our supercops too have experienced all this... they are like us...and we are like them ..😊
And I hope u liked the little part of "your man" in FB ... the happy go lucky and romantic style...😉
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@Aisha ... Thanks... FB is one of my favourites too 😛 ... i'm happy that u liked it... trio is always fun😉 ...the game was on but they are ETF and have to be prepared for any emergency 😊
lil Sameer... he is my favourite too and the grown up Sameer to... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I'm trying to maintain the pace... just a little scared that the story should not lose the track... and that is what bothers me a little ... Thanks again for encouraging me 😊
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@Christee... Thanks... 😊 ...Sam ko teachers se bahut darr lagta hai ...😉 ... Shree - Riya were dancing on R-R's instructions 😉... that was the fun
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@kunchu ... Thanks for liking it and encouraging me😊 ... actually I wish to see this in serial for so long... and that is the reason I thought of putting it here in this story 😊... Shreetu and Riya rock 👍🏼 ... And Annu is coming in next part... I have to make it beautiful...and working on that...😉
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@MVKohli007 ... Thanks ... actually isse pehle 2 stories start ki thi...par koi logical sequence nahi bana... dono ek point par atak gayi...but this is going good... I have a logical framework for this story till the epilogue... I know how to shape the story... now just developing the sub-plots, connecting them with the story and a little polishing work 😛
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@Pihu ... Thanks 😊
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@Shona ... Thanks 😊...yes... basket ball ka idea mujhe KKHH se hi aaya hai... maine upar Zuby kko jo reply diya hai wo dekho... comic books, teachers... ye sab hum bhi experience kar chuke hain...😊
yes... the trio is the best... ab to mazaa shuru hua hai... 😉
Ariya eye lock is the beginning of the new relationship ... maine direct Ariya love stories bahut padhi hain yaha forum mein... aur mujhe wo repeat nahi karni... Mai Arjun ke past ko dhyan mein rakh kar Ariya ke beech mein chhote chhote moments rakhna chahti hoo... jo Arjun ko move on karne mein help karenge...I hope ye Ariya fans ko pasand aaye...
ETF hai dear... Emergency to kabhi bhi aa sakti hai... 😉 .. ab wo call aa gaya 😛
aur Ab Annu aa rahi hai ... to humari main love story bhi kick off hogi ...
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@Sips_crazy ... Thanks ... that's a very big compliment 😳 ... you know what... I have always wanted to see these characters this way in the serial... all i'm writing is my unfulfilled wishes 😉 ... I have always wanted to see this kind of bonding between R-R, the trio ... now Aisha and Sakshi in place of Riya 😛 ... and the entire team ... specially something that happened in the basket ball court... R-R making Shree-Riya dance, Sam helping Shree and making fun of Riya today... previous day he made fun of Shree 😉 ... Shree-Sam bonding Ariya bonding development ... (now Sakshi) ... very soon there will be track of Chhotu too here 😛
The fear for teachers...😉 .. all of us have experienced this... 😛 and the other little things too in different variations... See my reply above to Zuby ... have elaborated a little more in that 😊
And finally Annu is coming... Dhamaka or not ... that is up to you all readers have to decide...
But we have had the Rajhshri films tadka in the beginning and now its time to pay a tribute to Yash Chopra the master of on screen romance ...
Annu's entry and Annu - Sam romance will be in Yash Chopra style... Hope readers like it 😉
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@pinkerbell ... Thanks ... wait and watch for some Ariya moments 😉
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@Ila ... Thanks hee hee hee... this part was almost same that u have read... not much changes
Friends,
Trying to update soon... but Annu's entry is something i'm very nervous about... so still some re-work and polishing is being done... hope u all like it...😊
Regards,
Bhavna
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...
lvd it 😊
fb scenes were awesome..
yeah dats true i've expected direct match b/w two... bt you're right purane jhagda ek din mein toh teek nahi hoga... phir bhi d match was interesting ... riya and shree playing on RR's instructions...
bt atleast both agrees to train riya and shree..
precap sounds interesting...
update soon...
Edited by nakshatra92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

One qostin:

The house, I mean the flat is it where Roshni was murdered?😲 Sam still lives there next door? And has Arjun been preserving the murder scene even now?😲😭 Wouldn't put it past the man if he did
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update..waiting for next part 😊
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
The fashback was awesome!!
Sam shocked to hear I' love you jaan'😆
haila 6 months se affair chal raha tha..:O :P..Arjun ji toh baare chupe rustam nikla😉😆
awwwiee Sam ka teacher wala flashback, bad teacher😳😆
ohh Roshni's mom died and father was in the asylum

Great!! So they bought apartments next to eachother, so that they could always be together <3 *sigh*


Riya's fav hobby is reading comic books..haila mera bhi same hai, ghar mai bait kar tintin parte rahte hoon😆😆
Shree played games at his i-pad..iss bande ka na kuch nahi ho sakta😆

well I agree with the trio, sportsmanship is the spirit and one of the best ways to solve fights..hope the trio succeed 👍🏼

Sam arjun are surprised to see the trio's name in the list.
.and Riya Shree ko nacha rahi thi 😆😆betaa saara din apne lappy par he kheloge toh aur kya hoga?? :P😆
Ohhh man Sam and Arjun ne toh bechare Shree Ri ko video game k jaise khelana shuru kar diya😆
So Sam will be Shree;'s coach and Arjun Riya's..btw Arjun ne smile kiya :O Ok that's an improvement :P😆
uff iss case toh bhi abhi aana tha... :|
Yayy so Anwesha is coming..awesome!!


Awesome awesome part dear..I am loving the team's bonding with each other <3
Do contd soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome post!
loved little Sam and his teacher! cute

FB scenes were superb...getting the adjacent apartments was adorable...thick friendship indeed!

but the cherry on the cake was the basketball scene...
Riya , Shree...and Chotu kitne chaalaaki se RR ko apna coach banaaya...
and indirectly unn dono ko hi khel mein shaamil kiya!

cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
The trio's masti is always refreshing & to top it was the basket ball match.Uske upar RR guiding them.Superb.😊 The showstealer being the flashback😃.Sameer scared of his teacher😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Nakshatra92... Thanks 😊 ... I knew many of you expected the direct match... but while writing I found it a little difficult... so I used Riya and Shree.. 😉
Updating soon...
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@Zuby... ummm ... Roshni was not killed inside this flat... this flat actually holds a lot of her memories... she chose the color of walls, the curtains, the other stuff in the house... she decorated personally... everything in the house reminds Arjun of her... so he just tries to run away from this place...
And yes, he is yet to catch Sikandar... and those visions still haunt him... not only in the flat ... but everywhere...
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@Zoyal... Thanks...😊... update coming soon...
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@SilentSilver... Thanks 😊 hee hee hee... friends mein to sab chalta hai... and waise bhi Sam ko pehle pata chal jata to wo Arjun ki jaan khaa jaata...
Riya... haan... uske ghar mein bhi TinTin hi hai 😊... wo bhi tumhare jaisi hi hai...
Shree... actually uska kuch nahi ho sakta... aur uska asar doosro par bhi padta hai... keep reading for more on this...😉...
Sports... that is why I chose it to start breaking the ice between Sam-Arjun... it is the best way to do it...😊
Sam-Shree ka basket ball coaching ka fun ka bhi ek part aayega...😛
And Arjun ki smile ... next update dhyan se padhna... uski is smile se uska hi faayda hai...😛
ab kya karein... ETF ko to emergency mein kahi bhi jaana padega na...😉
Yes... Anwesha finally aa rahi hai...😊
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@vidya...Thanks...😊 ... yes... whatever the circumstances may be... they are BFF...
And the trio are smart... specially Riya...she is supersmart... it was mainly devised by Riya... read the next update carefully to know more about this...😛
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@Farheen... Thanks 😊
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Update coming soon... but a surprise Note before it... 😉

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