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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome start

so Annu is already known to Sameer..he is in fact smitten by her already!

and why cancelling her plan? ab kaise hogi meeting?

Arjun in his usual gloomy form and Riya is after him..cool...got reminded of the old episodes!

cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Start !!
So our Rowdy rathore finally noticed a girl ...but he should search woth his office collegues na ..it would be easier 😉..
Arjun is same brooding ...and Sam POv through the Song was very nice...
Men will be men na ..never will take the first step😆😆
Shree I absolutely adore in the serial and of course ur FF shree is also good ...please keep him this way
P.S- Continue soon and thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome job...
love it...
rathore notice annu...gr8. ..
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update :) loved it
loved riya and anwesha's conversation :)
wow anwesha is coming to mumbai :)
riya was really so happy hearing the news :)
loved riya and shree's scenes and their conversation in car :) they are just so adorable
sam saw anwehs's pic in the party pic
flashback was lovely
sam already attracted to annu <3
can't wait to read more
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 start ...plz continue soon
bgargate thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks to everyone who responded to the story...😊

@shona14 ... Thanks... Anwesha - Riya ki bonding ki abhi shuruat hai... there is lot more to come... wait n watch 😛
@Payal... Dua ki link kahan milegi? ... BTW... mere opinion Arjun Bhai Dabangg nahi... Singham hai 😉 ...
@Aisha.Vashishth Thanks... Sorry Sweety... ... but I can see in my Outbox that a message was sent to u 😲 ... not sure how it happened 😭 ... Sameer is a lovable character ... 😉
@BlazingWater ... Thanks... hee hee hee...😃...Riya hai hi aisi 😉
@Vidya.anand ... Thanks... yes... this was necessary for Sameer... he should get a surprise when he meets her ... and itni bhi kya jaldi hai ...😉 ... bina twist ke mazaa nahi aata 😆 ...
@shah10... Thanks ..😊
@Sips_crazy ... Thanks... ummm... he is the ETF Chief ACP ... a strict disciplinarian in office when at duty... wo apni office ki ladkiyon pe line martey huye thoda ajeeb lagega 😉 ... And moreover ... I had a little different idea...remember "Kalki Desai Missing" episode ... Shree had said "Rathod sir ki shadi ki umar almost dhal gayi hai" ... to office mein unke age ke hisaab se jo ladkiyan hai... wo to shadi shuda hain ... aur jo single hain... wo sab abhi nayi hain and comparatively young bhi 😉 ... to mera gentleman Sameer aise flirt kartey huye ajeeb lagega...
But don't worry ... Ab Annu aayegi na... first step to Sameer hi lega...😉 ... but he needs some time...
Yes Arjun is same brooding, but I will try to portray different shades of his character from my POV in flashbacks and present.
For Shree... I have planned a love story for him too 😉 ... not a bickering kind of story the way it is in serial... but a sweet one... for him also I have created an imaginary character ...
@amanvirdi ... Thanks..😊
@fatima15 ... Thanks... wait n watch... 😊
@rkomal... Thanks 😊 ...
Working on a surprise ... 😛 ... Hope u all will like it 😊
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Bhawna di pls go to my scrap book priyaB posted d link of dua
in btw update dis
i m waiting
n waiting fr ur cment on dua !
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...!!!
wow so annu coming to mumbai... loved their talks...!! aww riya was so happy to hear that...!
sree riya scenes were lovely...!!! lol the way he told her to stop thinking about arjun 😆
fb was lovely...!!!
wow so sameer already smitten by annu...!!!
can't wait for them to meet...!!!
song was beautiful... and sameer ke thoughts wow...
precap is very interesting...!!
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Friends... time to move ahead... before I post the next part, I would like to introduce the new characters appearing in this part.
You already know the main characters of the story. Now time to meet the family of the hero 😉.
So please meet The Rathod family :
Mr Daam Singh Rathod:
Sameer's father and a retired Army officer. Loves his wife and children. He is a jovial person by nature and loves flirting with his wife inviting her ire. His antics and his wife's responses to them are often source of amusement for their children. He knows that since both their children are away, his wife misses them badly. He teases her all the time to keep her busy and smiling so that she doesn't feel lonely.
Mrs Suman Rathod:
Sameer's mother a very sweet and caring woman. She is a house wife. She loves her children and husband a lot. They are her world. She is hell bent on getting Sameer married but every time he succeeds in evading. Though she loves her husband's antics but doesn't often show this. She is embarrassed at her husband's public display of his love and flirting.
Mr and Mrs Daam Singh Rathod live in Udaipur, Rajasthan. Like any other parents, they want their children to be well settled in their life, get married and have kids (So typical na 😉)
Maanyata Daam Singh Rathod (Mona):
Sameer's younger sister. A software professional working with a leading Software company in Mumbai. A chatterbox but a sweet natured girl. She loves living life to the fullest. She lives near a gym and loves looking at handsome boys who come there. Being the youngest in the family she was always pampered and got all her wishes fulfilled and she never had to adjust or compromise. She was dependent on her family for getting all she wanted. But after meeting Roshni and seeing how being independent makes one strong, she was inspired to make an identity of herself. She didn't want to be known as Daam Singh Rathod's daughter or Sameer Rathod's sister. She wanted to make her own identity. Her parents were a little sceptical about it but she got full support from her brother Sameer who understood her urge to something on her own. So in spite of being in the same city, instead of living with her brother, she opted to share an apartment with her colleagues who were from different backgrounds to learn to adjust with different people and different circumstances.
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I have tried to respond everyone who have commented.
Please see the comments:
So ... how was it? 😊
Part 2 coming soon.
Please excuse the spelling mistakes.
Regards,
Bhavna
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres
bhawna di jor ki jhappi 🤗
pm se pehle
again me first
sam bro father cool..
mother cute
sis mona like me
yahoo!
rosh se inspired wow
grt family
hum sath sath types
yay
waiting!
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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