IPKKND OS - A Ritual Rewritten [Romance]

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Mahnoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

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This was amazing. ._.

Y U write amazing things which make my body shiver. ._.

^Okay that sounds wrong, VERY wrong. :P

I LOVE Arnav in your Os's. He is so caring and all. Lovely. :* I need MOREEE. ._.

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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

That was beautifully written.

Loved it.

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Saniya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

The love between them is so obvious and you show that very beautifully! I couldn't help myself but read the others all in one go. I absolutely love your way of writing! The passion and love between them is amazing. I love this bold Khushi, if only the one in the show would move forward instead of backwards and then ofcourse, I absolutely love the caring side of Arnav! They are a couple truly in love. I like the fact that it's not just about sex but their emotions, their understanding and I really loved how Khushi supported and defended her husband in this one!

A pregnant Khushi is what I think everyone wanted to see except that we didn't get to witness it in the show but thanks to you, we get to read them! Thank you so much for that. Keep writing, I'd love to read more from you! :)

You're a flawless writer & thank you once again for the link! 🤗

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bahi.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

I always forget to post a msg here, but that does not mean I ignore your pms. I do read your OS, and I must tell you I love them all, you have a unique way of writing your stories. I'm off to read this one on your blog.☺️

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blayde

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: melonie
Hi,

Beautiful update. You are such a wonderful writer. Their married life looks so beautiful when you write it :) I loved the Godh bharai rasam and in the show if we had the fortune to witness it then surely Arnav would have made sure to attend the function ;) Why do you need loads of people, close family and friends are more than enough. Laad Governor not be there? Yeah right! Not an option for him 😛. And I agree. In my head I couldn't imagine Arnav allowing all these random women into the house to "bless" his child. He's way too protective of Khushi to let that happen!

Loved how Khushi stood up for her husband, loved the way Arnav supervised the function, loved their talk in the bedroom and finally LOVED the passion and love they both share. I think that talk was important to write because when the show ended, Arnav had just begun to share his insecurities about things in life. And I feel that having a baby would be another moment for him to express his fear!

Waiting for the next installment :) Pls cont soon...

Forgot to mention...Thanks for the PM also :D

And I also wanted to add. I love how you call us all "My Lovely Bliss Babies" that's so cute. I always smile when I read that 🤗 Aw I'm glad someone likes the endearment! I do consider you guys my beautiful little Bliss seeking Babies. 😉🤗

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Snoowfall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Wow, this was another wonderful one, thanks for giving us this

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Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

They had incredible chemistry on the show and you have magnified this through your OS. Their love, their ability to sense each other and understand what the other is feeling is incredibly well written. Make everyone wish for such a loving and possessive hubby. I love the fact that you use the protective term 'his' Kushi or 'her' Arnavji. It makes it special. Pregnancy sex is amazing for a woman and he went out of his way to make the act itself ethereal for her. It was pure bliss. Too bad we did not get a pregnant Kushi on the show.

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blayde

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: sakhter90
Omg that was awesome! You have written is so beautifully. The emotions was describe so well. I felt like this was continuing from the serial. Right from the beginning where Arnav is arguing with nani and then khushi came and supported him but also dealt with the situation so well.

Really liked the trio Arnav, NK and akash. Loved them in the serial when they got together. You bought it all back! NK as usual was hilarious. Making Arnav Jealous without even realising it!

It was so nice to see them both so in love with eachother. Arnav is the perfect husband and father to be. The way he was caring for her was so sweet and romantic. And khushi is having such a positive effect on him. The way she asked him to go to nani and apologise shows how much in synch they are with echother. She knew that he knows that was the right thing to do. Just needs that small push.

Their love making was so passionate and romantic. And her comment about the magician was jut so typical of Khushi.

Love reading your work!

I thought it was about time NK made an appearance in one of my stories. 😛 He always added that touch of humorous flare to situations, even if it involved making Nannav mad. 😉 And I totally agree that Khushi was having a positive effect on him. I always like to think that the romantic/loving Arnav I write about is the man that Arnav/ASR from the show would've eventually evolved into.
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blayde

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: golpokobita
what a lovely story!

It feels like IPK is continuing from where it ended.. and you make it even more graceful!

loved everything.. the pure family bondage,Anjali and khushi's bond, adorable nani, NK's funny hindi and arnav's possessiveness.. and of course, your trademark romance!

all in all, absolutely stunning!

I usually reread my own stories a few days after I've written them, because I'm usually in a different mind set than when I'm writing them. And I can see why you and other readers feel it's like an episode continuation, and I have to agree! I hadn't realized that I had written in almost every character from the show, which gave it that episodic vibe.

And trademark romance? Haiii! 😳 Kaisa label diya mujhe, yaar! Love it!! Thank you so much!!! 🤗
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