IPKKND OS - A Ritual Rewritten [Romance] - Page 10

Just read the OS! :)

it was very nice n emotional too...

Originally posted by: pinkly

Nice story' They both care so much for each other. I liked so many things about this story. Khushi supporting Arnav's opinion about inviting only close family and friends for Baby shower' Arnav helping her wear the sari' Khushi telling him the story and reassuring him that he is going to be an awesome father' Arnav's laughter when Khushi asks him is he a magician :-)'. And their love making in the end' You write beautifully and create nice stories. Please write next one soon.

Originally posted by: Tia_0810

I... I Dont knw How u did this, but you actually read my mind. I always wanted to request you to write where ARSHI are doing a slow dance and to my surprise u wrote the very same. Arnav & Khushi slow dances are always epic!

As I always say Ur writing has always created this SOul stiring pull that I just cant resist and have tears in my eyes. Aww don't cry!! 🤗

The scene was a the Flashback khushi tells Arnav and then a kiss followed by her small request to him to apologize to Nani jee, was so beautifully written that I was moved...

SO Lovely, Full of PUre True Love and Passion that one cant stop ut imagine all of it and feel it through and through.

ThankYou so much for always giving me something to cherish, IPK ended But U have kept it alive thoroughly.

Love u Love you too!! 😳

Originally posted by: sweet_5

Okay...you got me, this one was really emotional for me.I mean these two were just so unique to me, this makes me miss the show so much and to think the second anniversary is coming up. I love how these two had their own way of going about things. They did what everyone did but they did it Arhi style. I mean it made no sense to marry these two off in a simple manner, we needed that Arhi touch to it. I completely agree!!

So many cute moments, the sari scene! Why the heck was that not in the show. I had fantasy of mine where Arnav would dress Khushi in a sari on her first day as a Raizada Daughter in law Aww, I know. I wish we could've seen something involving Arnav dressing Khushi somehow, especially since he owns a design house! At least you got to read it. I thought to myself Arnav is an extremely capable man, why wouldn't he know how to drape a sari?! 😉

The scene where she asks him if he's a magician...aahhahahahahahahahahhaah, that is so Khushi! I imagine Arnav always has to make love to her while she's just having a complete convo with herself hahahahah Lol. Well I don't know if she's always having convos with herself as I'm sure her Arnavji can be quite distracting. 😆 But yes, even in the middle of *ehem* I had to let Khushi's sanki flare shine. 😛

beautiful...i love your story...it always bring back memories of ipkknd ..sometimes what we wanted to see or sometime what we saw...you are a wonderful writer

Thanks for the PM. It was romantic with a just the right amount of spice. Good work. Love your style

lovd da hot update...beautifully written...
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thnxxx 4 da pm dear...

Originally posted by: srat

You are rewriting the serial with your stories, this was so lovable and something we all wished to see in the show, Arnav and Khushi about to become parents and Arnav oh so perfect and overprotective...

Originally posted by: ara_000

U truly r a magician who can create magic with her writing...!
Yet again another mindblowing piece nd trust me i loved evry bit of it...!👍🏼
The way u have showed anji nd khushi's relationship nd her bonding wit the raizada family is simply adorable...the way u have made arnav think about d horrible incident of anji's godbharai is simply awsum...u knw wat u truly r fantastic writer who keeps up evry thng in mind nd who writes each nd evry story wit a proper story line nd i love to read it...u alwaz have a story to tell,u alwaz potray the eternal love btwn arnav nd khushi...
Awsum shot yet again...
I love it how u have shown arnav thnking dat his khushi is surely his protector who alwaz protects him nd give priority to him nomatter wat...
Loved it sweety...
I will b waiting for ur nxt shot...!
I am loving how u r writing these shots on pregnant khushi nd how arnav is taking care of her...!
This whole series till now is truly awsum...
Loved all of them...
Cant wait to read the nxt shot from u...!😃