SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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swat.g

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Everyone thinks he scolded hr but the reverse happened... why is he so stubborn? why cant he say it...n come on anjali do somthin

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ashw99

@ashw99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Beautiful update.
Loved their counter at parking khushi charging, he shocked and speechless, hug tears and pain, their unspoken words, both unaware how to deal, then parting... it was perfect.
I loved your lines for Arnav
"He was a man who needed to be heard; he was a man who needed someone to understand his silence" so true.
Hope Anjali may help Devi Maiya somehow.
Oh... she was there at the spot waiting, why i feel she is spoiling him either.
will wait for next update come soon thanks.

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thulasi_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

congrats for ur new thread🥳

"Stop feeling and do something," Devi Maiya scowled, "Why do I have to do everything?"🤣🤣poor devimayya😆

"it was not desire, it was not dancing blood cells, it was not butterflies in the stomach.It was sheer peace and pain."...well said❤️❤️

awesome update..thks for pm..

waiting for next update😉

Edited by thulasi_arshi - 12 years ago

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KushiArnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Yipee ...thx for such a lovely,cute and awesome update :-))

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Amrita

@Amti4u

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Beautiful update...

Cant believe that this SS is going to end...but, I really wish it wont...

Hope Arnav will realize his love for her, and confess his love soon...😊

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Disha

@dishashah4176

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

nice update bt i couldnt fathom the reason of khushi still standing there??!!!!!

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namita11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Awesome update.
Hope anjali will b able to diminish the distance between them

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aashi12

@aashi12

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

wow she was there waiting for him

hopefully anjali do something even dm cannot do everything

loved it

waiting fr next update

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

oh such a lovely ending...even my nerves were dancing waiting to know whether she would be there..Btw, I love your devi maiyaa..and her monologues..

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nehaarshi

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Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Yayy u updated soon!! :) amazing chapter!

Sooo sooo sooo happy that she was there waiting for him, HIS Lemon!!!

and lol I love DEVI MAIYAA :)

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