SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Oh my god now you have left us waiting!!!!! When can we expect the next update??? Coming to the update... It was amazingly beautiful... Every single line had a depth that pulled us along... I felt so sorry for both Arnav n Khushi... I don't understand why, but I just love this Arnav... What makes me love him is his vulnerability... He is the most vulnerable Arnav that I have come across...

Again I can't believe that this going to be the last thread... Please no... Please don't end this as yet... Please...

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irene

@rennie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

loved it. really want anjali to play match maker.

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Snoowfall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Wonderful update...

You left us at a cliff hanger...

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Lovelyday

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

This ss has kept me glued...totally..all I did today was to read ur work along with this ss completely in one shot...how I wish this could be another series with our beloved arshi init...every sentence u wrote..I gladly imagined them and felt so right...fabulous writer u are...I really do think someone should take a look at this and do something with it...with arshi...with ur permission of course:) ...I am new here..and am glad I came across ur work...fantabulous work...now waiting for ur update...eagerly...very unique title...loved it...magical connection between them just drew me in and am in a haze...I'll stop now:) as u can see I m loving ur writing ...and can go on...

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Supab update..
Their conversion is emotional as well as little irritating...
Why just can't arnav open his feelings to khushi??
Not only Devi Maiyya but I'm also very happy for that now anjali can play a cupid role in their L-Story..
I have a doubt...
Really was khushi there at the crossing??
Or was arnav day-dreaming??
Hope it wasn't dream..

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

he still cannot fathom ... can he ... that its love

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Poor Devi Maiyya, surrounded by idiots! 😆

Arnav is too stubborn and Khushi is too understanding...not Anjali's words would help Arnav. The man has an emotional IQ of zero...it's gonna take time for him to realize that love doesn't care about 'types' and suitability...

Looking forward to the next part - thanks for updating so quickly!

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Absolutely beautiful to read,

That was fantastic.

Love the way you portrayed Arnav's confusion, his inability to clearly voice his feelings, Khushi's dejection, it was all mind-blowing!!!!!!

This chapter was def one of my favourites! So happy his lemon is still waiting for him <3 And loving this new 'strong' Khushi.. I hope she continues to stay strong!

Please update soon :)