SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22) - Page 16

Why why why did u stop there OMG the most beautiful update.

fab update once again...its like i can imagine arnav and khushi in front of my eyes...they both r confused souls...and khushi was waiting for him devi mayya is rite anjali have to do something..and the last part made me so happy

Such a breathtaking update! Fabulous. Sent me right back to the early days of IPKKND and the tension and attraction betwern Arshi. Can't wait for the next part.

Fabulous update and just loved it. This uncertainty, attraction, under currents, tension, confusion, being in each others thoughts, not accepting their feelings, missing each other is what all ipk about and you have written it very beautifully.
As I always say, even here devi mayya's monologues took the cake for me specially "why should I do everything"
Cant wait for next update

This SS is one of the most beautifull piece I read in the forum.I was recommended this to read long time back,finally I decided to give it a read after putting down for long.
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I am glad i got to read this SS,Its like IPK #2 .The scenes ,dialogues recreated,reused to be woven in same IPK magic.Kudos to u dear👍🏼Its SO beautifully written.

The intial attraction betn. These two.Arnav was bewitched or what with Khushi fragnance of lemon.Whenever Arnav got the lemony smell ,here While reading I used to imagine him breathing in Cinthol fragnance,ONLY lemony smell I can recollect.😆

My fav character ,has to be Devi Maiyya ..She is just SO AWESOME.Her interventions where all so cool.😆loved the humor you put in with her,its refreshing,just like the lemony smell.😉


I also love,loved the way you recreated,improvished the scenes .Like the Jaadu hai Nasha hai,followed by complete Kiss☺️[thanks for putting in Aman's phone call,]then Arnav dropping her off to home,he dint had to search for her like in show ,[I hated this scene,and heartbreak that followed],but ths part here in the story is my fav,later him asking her about her earring ,❤️smile,blush,smirk I love it all.

Liked La character here too.She was just like the way she had to be strong.To walk away with hurt bt head held high,nt before giving advice to Arnav.

The fashion show accident was handled well by ASR.Khushi misintrepretd the whole thing.But I loved the way he held her,and she letting him hold and soothe her.

The last part of the update was so well written-first his fear rising with thought that she wont be waiting for him,,with each passing second as he was nearing the spot,the conflict in his head ' she will be' she wont .Finally the relief seeing her there waiting for him as always.❤️

Beautifull

Awesome they both love each other soo mch
Hope they confess soon

What a lemony update O...😛

Aww when they will realize that its LOVE and release Devi Maiyaa from this stressful work??? 😆😆 Fantastic update dear, beautifully written!

you made my day. All the nice ff s i read due to some or other reason they are not updating. I was also feeling sulky then yu come up wit this awesome chap nice. It was very well written i love your writing.

The last 2 chapters were beautiful and melancholic. You can almost feel the deep chasm between their 2 worlds but then love has no border right? Matters of the heart cannot be controlled and you do not pick that person as they have already been picked for us and we just simply need to find him or her. We have to fight all odds and make a way to turn the you and I into us. They are fighting themselves too hard trying to stay true to who they are. They need to do that but to move forward, one has to adapt and integrate and this is what they have not realized yet. He keeps saying he does not believe in marriage and she needs nothing but marriage. There is a middle ground there if they get rid of all the feelings that they know and embrace the newer feelings. Devi Mayya needs some help to get these 2 to see reasons, will it be Anjali who will act as Cupid? Evil of you to leave the story with him seeing her at the cross road. Is she going to talk to him and get in his car? Pls update soon!