SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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meshas

@meshas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

what a beatifull FF, came across your wonderfull FF yesterday and read it till chapter 20 till 1.30 am in the morning, couldn't give it up inspite of having to get up at 630am to go to work.

Both fighting with their feelings and love DM playing cupid.

looking forward to your next update and will certainly read your other works.

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Preethi

@blackdove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Hey...

The update was very nice...

Why don't they just open up...n this Arnav he could have said yes nah...for the marriage thing..He knows how much Khushi believes in it..n if he had said yes...he could have made her understand that she mattered to him very much...Devi mayyia is also busy i guess...i think Anjali should also help her ...

The last part was the best !! Aww...She is waiting for him!!!! But she was sad the next day nah...

Can't wait for the nest update...

Do continue soon !!!!!!

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

the 'silent and struggling with words' Arnav here is just so adorable...feel like giving him one big hug😊

his lemon standing there waiting for him...and he feeling relieved that all is well in his paradise again...awww...but arnavji...dont be this dead slow...come on...do something...how much can devi maiyaa help you...

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

mind blowing updatewa

pls updarte soon wanna know what gonna happen

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Claire0206

@Claire0206

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Farah that was amazing update.

Thanks for letting me re-live Arnav Khushi saga again.

Edited by Claire0206 - 12 years ago

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riti4u

@riti4u

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Hey Farha,I know I am a bit late .I just finished last 2 chapters...and you got me all nostalgic. Chapter 19- Epic Fall again...and here we had a better Arnav in place.. I loved how you depicted whole walk of khushi...where she was walking on ramp just seeing him...And in the start you explained Arnav's delimma quite well...Chapter 20- The Hug and her breaking down on his chest... I cud feel vulnerability on both sides.. One who wud have been last person to hurt her again cudnt save her from hurt.. He can not commit ..indeed he is misfit in her world...and with previous chapter you very well portrayed how she is misfit in his world...This is what makes both of them complete...isnt it.. Differences in their world...What is missing from Arnav's life is provided by khushi...and what is missing from khushi's life is provided by Arnav.. I cud feel completion in that hug..even if it lasted for few minutes..Loved how you brought Anjali in picture...I hope she will be little help to Devi Maiyya who is handling such a difficult task on her own...Really well written chapters Farha..You transported me to beautiful world of Arnav-Khushi...and increased my URGE for more...🤗love you n keep updatin...😃

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Ahh she z der but why n how i also thought she won't be there but dis z arshi always gv us unexpected
loved it n thx to u

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shruti

@shruti46

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

oh devi maiyya is right..

anjal madam go n give some piece of ur mind to your dearest CHOTTE cant believe in marriage.huh...

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Lemons..n limes..!!

Uhmmm!!!

So as he ran afta her..

Wt happnd wsnt xpcted..

He dint let her enter d room..!!

N she was struggling..2 b out of his hold..

Bt Arnav k pass toh Shaktimaan ki power h..!!

Lol

He dint let hr mov..

N dey went out..

N every1 saw..dem..

Evry1 new 1 thing wud happn 4 sure..dt she wud cry..

Aisa kon sa din hoga afta d Jhola day..dt she dint cry..

Batao bhai!!

Okii..

Soo dey went out...4 d ..talk..

he questioned her..wts wrong..

n she said..

"What's wrong? You are asking what's wrong? Everything is wrong. Everything starting from my working in this company is wrong. You. Me. Everything."

no...4 me dts d only ryt thing tht must hav happened in her lyf..😳

she asked him..Y he insulted her lyk dt..

y did he demean her..

Y he clld her..n avg Indian grl..infront of so many ppl..

N he was blank..he thot she was upset abt sumthin else..

Bt dis was wt..she ran away 4m him..

He said coz he wanted 2 control..d mmess..

So bas..

Khushi ne uska beautiful bolna nai suna..

on a serious note..evn i dint pay heed 2 dt..d word average ..overshadowed it..

sachhi..

D way he hugged her..

Said it ol..

Nomttr he says things or nt..

Dt meant ol..

He's der 4 her..

She questioned him..y dint he believed in marriages..n he juz said..dt he dint..

she askd him wil he evr..n he dint no..

iska ans mere pass h..yes..he wud..Khushi..yu bth r meaant 2 b wid each othr..

shaadi honi h toh tmse hi honi h..

mei sacrifice krne ko taiyaar hn..Arnav ko..4 my Khushi..:D

😭😭

Khushi ko kisi k weddin pe jaana tha..

n he said he wud drop her..

bt she dint let him..he said he wud ask d driver to..

bt she dint let him do soo..

she wud manage..

bas thode din aur Khushi..

den Arnav ka toh haqq hoga..to drop yu evrywhr..n Khushi cn nt evn refuse..:D

(shaadi k baad)

d dont spoil me part..!!

he has alrdy spoiled her alot..

i wont pay attention 2..

I cannot give you that, Khushi," he murmured.

"I am not your type, too."coz dese 2 lyns..wud change..has 2..bhai..!!warna mera Arshi k pyaar se bharosa utthh jaega..jo iss janm me nt possible..:Dsunday..haye..!!!meant 2 rest..bt bth cudnt..it was tuff 4 dem..n Anjali's questions..n his answers..n her suspicion..well..i hope she wud find abt Khushi sooon..herself..i hope sooo..may b she wud b able 2 change Arnav's prospec.stop feelin n do somthin Anjali..Devi Maiyaa aapke saath h..Arnav went 2 office..n on his way..he recalled wteva happnd d dy b4..n he thot she wud nt..not today nt tomorrw..neva wud w8 4 him..bt againKhushi Kumari Gupta proved him wrong..only she cn..nothin more 2 stay..i loved d updte 2 d core..P.S.i read d updte d momnt yu posted..or may b afta a min or so..n i was desperate.as alwz 2 commnt..bt my fone dsnt allw me so..i mean..d forum codes..n my writin styl..fone ko gawaara nai..so had 2 w8 2 log on 4m lappy..sooo tooo late..upar bole gaye shhabdon ka sirf ye arth h..k may b i missed sumt points,,,bt i did read it..wid my heart.:Dlolloved it..thnx..:) as alwz..:D