SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

OM BOTI ...MARVELOUS

YOU WORDED THE BODILY SEPARATION TOO BEAUTIFULLY

BUT THE CONJOINED SOULS ARE DESCRIBED SPLENDIDLY

EXCELLENT EXPRESSION

FANTASTIC EMOTIONS

HEART FELT GRIEF

HAUNTING FEAR OF THE UNKNOWN

TOO GOOD MAN TOO GOOD

THANKS FOR THE PM ...DID YOU SEND ME ONE 😕

ALERT ME FOR THE NEXT

KKKA

Edited by KKKA - 12 years ago

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Manasvy

@Manasvy

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

By the end of the update, I was also as nervous as Arnav waiting for Kushi, thank god she is there, waiting for the convo between them now.

Awesome update as usual.

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Aww she was still waiting! Hope Devi Maiyya
works her magic soon!

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navodhajanu

@navodhajanu

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

It's nice. What'll happen next? You're amazing writer. Update soon. Thanks for the PM.

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

awesome...
loved the update to bits..
very very beautifully written...
she was there... after reading this cant keep my excitement... like arnav it also gave me pleasure and excitment...
continue soon

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

wonderful. Sorry caught up the last 3 chapters together.

So Arnav Singh Raizada royally messed up, yet again. Way to go Raizada!

I guessed Anjali would see the footage of Kushi in his arms and then realize her bro's unrealized feelings. But she is taking too much time. I feel the same as Devimaiyya here. Why hurt kushi so much?

How come she is at the junction? Is she waiting for some one else? Is it time for some Jealousy?

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smiley13

@smiley13

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

😛 First of all big congrats for the new thread...🥳 🥳
again in this chapter also devi maiyya's dialogue was the best...aww I simply loved it...
his lemon is standing there...waow...waow...
the chapter was good...too good...

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Thank you so much for the update !

It is really sad to see how they try to understand each other's view point and still hurt such a lot. I was equally surprised to read that Khushi was standing at the corner waiting for Arnav.

Does this mean she has fully accepted his view point ??

Just cant wait to read the next chapter.

Please,Please,Please,Please update soon !!