SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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darya20

@darya20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Awww arnav was sooo cute in the whole update loved it sooo much

And khushi was standing at the cross road waw but y ???

I have a feeling she will not go with him 😒

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

It was amazing farah! I still cannot get enough of this SS. I absolutly love it. I was waiting for today since u told that you would update today and what an update!. Thanks for the pm hope we get a quicker update like this!

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Nisha

@NishaAP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

OMG she came to the spot after all that? Why? he needs to know that he can not live with out her right? Then if he did not feel the loss how he going to come to terms?

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Awesome update

Loved it

Why can't just arnav change his opinion about marriage

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melonie

@melonie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Hi,

Wonderful update. Khushi was waiting for him at her usual place and that's all I wanted to read 😃 There is still hope and there is always hope. Anjali please use that dialogue you used in the show otherwise your brother is going to keep hurting and poor Khushi also, such a happy girl is being all sad and gloom.

Devi Maiyya kuch toh karo na 😳

Pl cont soon..

Edited by melonie - 12 years ago

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Wow that was amazing and awesome update, yet so emotional.

So brilliant and written exceptionally well,

Before the confrontation loved the way Arnav said his "His lemon, His Khushi" was back.

Loved the confrontation between Arnav and Khushi, it was so intense, heart breaking and emotional, especially when Khushi asked Arnav about marriage.

Poor Khushi finally cried whilst Arnav hugged her, that was so sad. When is the idiot Arnav going to wake up and realises his feelings!

The Anjali and Arnav encounter was brilliant, Anjali has realised that something is wrong with Arnav, hope she does her own investigations.

Awww the last part was awesome, Arnav was thinking Khushi will not be waiting for him, but he was genuinely surprised when he saw Khushi waiting for him, I'm so happy Khushi was there.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and Thanks for the PM xx

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tsultana

@tsultana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

What a fantastic update!! Brilliant work! I can just feel explosion to happen! Much as Arnav denies, he will definatley change for Khushi!! And i cnt wait! I cnt wait for Arnav to say how beautiful she is n what more to realise that HE LOVES HERRR!!!