T2-ariya ss-tu meri jaan hai. part18 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow... ariya hospital scene too good.

ariya living their best moment seeing the baby...



loved ur update.. continue soon...

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved ur update...


the flow of emotions was damm goodd... the story is taking the best turns nw...



wating for ariya wedding


awesme wrting...


fabulous dialogues
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow dear...wo maan ka pic dekh ke i asume arjun and the look at his baby...that one is awesome...

arjun i love you ... i know u will truly love riya and your child

i really want to imagine ariya and baby a happy family
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
ariya emotions are nicely described
i dont think it creats rift because ria understands well all arjun is doing is for their baby only na
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Posted: 12 years ago
Saarey parts ek saath padhe... 😊
entertaining story ... mujhe bachcho wali stories padhne mein mazaa aata hai 😛
I'm just waiting ki kab ye baby duniya mein aayega 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
NAHI ariya phirse dur maat karna plz
arjun is so caring
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow dear nice concept dear
love al the parts
how sweet arjun cares for riya !!!
riya's reaction after watching hotel lolz
hmmm arjun was hiding his feelins ...
riya savf him, and arjun does not remember anything...
ayesha and rathod was so caring for her...
finialy arjun knew the truth ...
its so happy arjun is ready to accept riya...
arjun baby se baat kar raha tha so sweet
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
chalo story age badhate hai ariya ki happy wedding karate hai...

(hey marnali u gave me a beautiful song for this ... bt i wnt use it here it will be used in pehla pyaar..)

part 9


Arjun calls rathore to meet him and asks him to make wedding


preparations for them..


Rathore: ek baar riya se bhi baat karle aur tum dono rahoge


kahan?


Arjun: mera ghar hai rathore.. bas shree aur chotu ko bhejke safai


karva de warna meri cleanliness freak biwi behosh ho jayegi..


Rathore: bohot khush hu tereliye.. riya ka khyaal rakhna..


Arjun: ha tu arrangements karke bata de mujhe thoda aur bhi


kaam hai..


Rathore: rj?


Arjun: ha bol sam..


Rathore: riya tujhse bohot pyar karti hai uska dil mat thodna..


Arjun: kabhi nahi sam apne dil ko kaise tod sakta hoon. mein bhi


riya se pyar karta hoon uske jitna nahi par karta zaroor hoon..


Arjun completes some work and reaches riya's house..riya dressed


up in long halter's and tracks..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Arjun: tum thik ho na?


Riya: ha mein thik hoon,, apka kaam ho gaya?


Arjun: hoon..


Riya: dinner ready hai..


They were having dinner.. when arjun asked riya that he wants to


get married soon…


Arjun: mujhe galat mat samajna mein bas ab har baat ke liye waqt


gavana nahi chahta.. aur mera ghar hai ek.. mein safai ke liye bol


diya kal dekhne chalogi..?


Riya: aap joh bhi kar rahe hai wooh hamare liye thik hi hoga.. aur


agar apko apna aur roshniji ka ghar I mean agar aap chahe toh


hum yahan bhi reh sakte hai shadi ke baad.. janti hoon bohot si


yadein uss ghar mein..jo aap har kisike saath share nahi karna


chahenge..


Arjun: tum koi gair nahi ho riya tum meri honewali biwi ho.. aur


mujhe koi problem nahi hai roshni ki yadein ko aur uss ghar ko


tumhare saath share karne mein.. tum wahan thik rahoge na?


Riya: aap jahan chahe hum wahan rahenge mujhe koi problem


nahi..


Arjun: thik tum apni packing start kar lena.. ayesha ko help ke liye


bula hai.. shree aur chotu toh honge hi..aur meri kuch help


chahiye toh bata dena…


Riya: jee..


Arjun: riya tumhari medicines..???


Riya: meine le li hai..


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Posted: 12 years ago


Arjun wanted to stay with riya bt couldn't say it to her..


Riya: arjun agar aap aap chahe toh yahan reh sakte hai.. aap logg


jayenge toh bhi apko meri and baby ki tension hogi …


Arjun: nahi wooh mein mein..


Riya: I understand arjun aap yahin ruk jaiaye..


Arjun stays back and asks for a laptop from riya for sme work.. ria


gves him his bedding and go to her room..whole night arjun was


slowly monitoring whether riya is comfortable or not.. and


watching their baby in the laptop..


Arjun has sanctioned leave for them and so aftr the breakfast both


went to arjun's house.. riya loved the place.. they went inside the


house.. bt the whole house was empty… no furniture no photos nothing,,


Riya: arjun apne saara saman store room mein rakha hai?


Arjun: nai riya tumhe jo bhi chahiye, jaisa bhi chahiye iss ghar ko


saja sakti hoon..


Riya: apki aur roshniji phots?


Arjun: wooh storeroom..


Riya: aapne usee nikalva kyon diya? Apki life mein jo bhi jaise hai


waise hi apnana chahti hoon…please mere liye change mat hoiye..


Arjun: ab kuch bhi tumhare ya mere liye nahi hai humare liye hai


riya…


aur poocho toh baby apko apna naya ghar pasand aya ki


nahi.?


Riya: baby aur mumma ko bohot pasand aya.. mein kuch


furniture aur necessary chezon ki list bana deti hoon.. aap arrange


karva denge.?


Arjun: ha riya tum decide karlo par tum yahan rehkar kaam


monitor nahi karoge wooh mein dekh lunga…


Riya: thik hai…


Rathore had made all preparations for wedding at his house…he


called arjun…


Arjun: ha sam.. thik hai.. hum pooch jayenge..riya rathore ne


shaadi ke arrangements kar di haii toh kal hamari shaadi hai aaj


tumhare haldi aur mehendi hai.. rathod ke ghar jana hai iske liye..


Riya: aaj hi? Par arjun apko toh yeh rasme pasand nahi hai na toh


phir?


Arjun:par tumhe toh pasand hai na..tumne apni shaadi ko leke jo


bhi sapne dekhe unhe pura karne ki mein puri koshish karunga


riya.. kyon tumhe koi problem?


Riya: nahi nahi chaliye/..


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