T2-ariya ss-tu meri jaan hai. part18

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys i m up with another story that hit my mind.., dnt worry pehla pyaar pe kaam chalo...
this topic will be a common one in the beginning bt vl take different turns later.. hope u support me in this one too...


here is the character sketch and prologue..agar achcha lage toh agee likungi...jaroor...

acp arjun suryakant rawte..: same as in the show.. bt has soften a bit hids it in anger though..

riya mukherjee.: same in show... bt she loves arjun even more and more...


prologue:

ariya sent for an undercover mission...😉 romantic hoga😉 ya emotional.😭.. ya phir surprising...😲...
think abt it...

will ariya relation take a new step or will it shatter everything?????????


index:

part 1---pg 3
part2--- pg 5
part3---pg 7
part4---pg 11
part 5---pg 13
part 6---pg 17,18
part 7---pg 22,23
part 8---pg 26
part 9---pg29,30
part 10---pg 33,34
part11---pg 37
part12---pg 41
part13---pg 44,45
part14---pg48,49
part15--pg 52,53
part16---pg 56
part 17---pg 60

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice cs...
prologue is interesting...!!!
continue soon...!!
eagerly waiting for the first part...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yaar...prologue to bahot achha hai

update soon dear

and add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice prologue... continue soon... nd plzzz send me PM... thanks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice cs and prologue.
Continue soon.
Eagerly waiting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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looks intersting...
plz do continue...
Will be waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice continue soon please pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great concept i love the concept very much please continue soon.
i can't wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
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prologue seems interesting :) loved it
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey friends thank u for the support.. so here is the part 1... begining parts story will be ordinary.. and common too. bt in future very special parts will be there with different feeling of ariya...
Etf conference room:
Rathore: team we have an undercover mission(it is a back ward area where some illegal activities and attacks are taking place.. it's a cold one too).. and commissioner sir ne rawte aur riya ko choose liya hai is mission par jane ke liye..
Arjun: riya nahi riya kuch nahi kar payegi rathore.. mein akele hi thik hoon..
Riya is hurt hearing this'that arjun doesn't trust her a bit.. bt the fact is something different..
Arjun(to himself): mein tumhe saath nahi le jana chahta riya kyonki tumhari jaan ko khatre mein nahi dal sakta.. pata nahi kyon par tumhe agar kuch ho gaya toh mein ' nahi riya tumhe kuch hone nahi dunga mein..
Rathore: tum dono ki problems ke liye waqt nahi hai.. case ki files yeh rahi.. aaj sham ke flight hai. So be ready '
Riya packing was dne..arjun called her to pick her up..
Arjun: riya wooh mein .
Riya: jee sir apko kuch kam tha.?
Arjun: kam hai isliye toh phone kiya hai..wooh ek red file hai leke ana..aur tum kaise ariport aa rahi ho?
Riya: sir wooh shree.
Arjun: ha tumhara driver.. time pe aa jana..
Ria(slowly): hadd hai is insaan ki.. khud toh pick ke liye kaha tak nahi aur mere dost ko driver keh diya..akdu khaddooos'
This is heard by arjun'he smiled to her thoughts and his nicknames,
Both got ready and reached the airport .. riya had a huge bag.. so again..
Arjun: riya tumhe wahan basne nahi jana hai..
Riya: pata hai sir.. mujhe bhi kis kheede ne kata liya joh inse pyar kar baithe'
Shree: ishq ke keede ne..
She gave him a shut up glare..
Flight announced.. shree hugged riya and cried ..
Arjun: shree riya aa jayegi .. tab tak yeh tissue paper roll se kaam chaloa..
Riya: sir mera dost hai aapko jealous ho raha kyonki .. chodiye.. bye shree take care..
Both settled in their places..riya slept aftr few minutes..and arjun usee kahan neend ati hai..aftr sme time her head fell on his shoulders.. and he was slowly admiring her .. her innocence, her beauty and her sweetnes'
Arjun: pagal hai puri ki puri..
Flight landed and they came out of the airport .. it was a small town.. they took a taxi and reached the area where they were supposed to be and had to leave in a small hotell.. riya made face seeing the place.. both went their rooms..and retired to beds..
Arjun: riya iss jagah mein 5 star hotel nahi milega..
Ria: pata hai mujhe.. khud toh ese jagah mein rehte hai hey bhagvan kitna unhygenic place hai.. mujhe infection na ho jay.. meri skin , mere baal,
Arjun: riya agar khud se bate ho gai ho toh room mein jake so jao.. yeh rahi keys..
She took the keys and went to her room door.
Arjun: riya kal subah 9 baje yahin milte hai kal hume jungle mein jakar tribals ki movements ko track karna hai'
Ria: ok sir'
She goes to her room and gets the bed' prays for their wellbeing and happiness.(yes she always used to pray for him and her bothe..) finally she smiledd. Akdu .. bt my akdu,.

Edited by pinkerbell - 12 years ago

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