New TR SS: Pain of Remorse:Ch2:pg11 updated - Page 7

Originally posted by: kikia

DEBU IT SEEMS REALLY INTERESTIG...PLEASE PLEASE DO PM ME ALSO AND YES ALL THE BEST WITH IT <3

Bharu, can't believe my eyes, you are commenting..I am feeling so so happy..love love ya so much for it🤗

Originally posted by: aria_taarey

Just one word.. WOW..

Excellent work..

Loved the quotes u used, they were beautiful..

I'm sure im gonna love it cuz it already touched my heart..

Do update soon..

Thanks Aria, for your comment..surely gonna update it soon😊

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

Beautiful! D midl agd men reminiscing hs memories spnt wit hr lv ws wndrful.D flashbck of ctng ck tgtr on hs bday,thn d scn undr tree wr al mesmerizng.

Yes Asha, he is recapitulating some past memories of his life- some are good, sum r bitter, part of life

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

one more Debu 😃

oops wrong emoticon...this is a tragic story so 😔

anywayz enough of my stupid jokes 😆

hmm so tragedy this time...now I've got one more reason to call you an amazing writer

VERSATILITY it is 👏 fortunate to have such a talented writer like you in this forum, keep up the good work 👍🏼

so coming to this story...superb beginning

very very very well written...loved how you portrayed Rey's emotions

so TR aren't together anymore...and it has obviously affected their lives in a bad way

dono zindagi jee nahin rahe...balke zindagi kaat rahe hain

wanna know what made these love birds part their ways

will they re-unite or not?

looking forward to read more parts

continue soon nd thanx for the pm 😊

@bold - Sanu, for this line muuuaaazzz to ya!!! so beautiful, so meaningful..lovely

Truly you are one of them, who really very good at analysis of my stories, characters. Sometimes, I also feel surprised that is it so?? i have never thought like this..😊

No dear, they can't - they are not made for each other😭

Originally posted by: raddhi

oh man its something really interesting

i am waiting for nxt prt awsm i luv it y taarey

not together thanks for PM

Glad that you liked this concept🤗
TR are not together due to very common yet important conjugal factor..kya kare..life sometimes throws challenges at us

Originally posted by: nithi_newlife

hey hi,

Sorry for reading it so late...

Am so sorry!

Awesome yaar!

Loved it...Looking forward for your pm...😉😉😉

Plz don't say sorry yaar..
Glad that you read it🤗

Originally posted by: taareylover14

Superbbb loved it alot...

Plzzz pm me.

Am really sory for late rply.

But seriusly it was amazinggg

Abb, you pls don't say sorry yar😡😡😡
Glad that you have liked it😊

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi

awesum cncpt .. 👏 👍🏼

luvd it alot .. ❤️

update soon ..

n pm me plz ..

Thanks Aditi for commenting for the first time in my thread😊
ll PM u for sure

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Debu, wow I dont know how u come up with such fabulous concept but I love it 😊
Aww Taarey are separated for ten long years... Love Rey flashback, their moments was so beautiful and him always wanted to stare at her is so like him lol. Amazing first chapter, I love it. I cannot wait to read more

Glad that you have accepted this with a so warm welcome Nats..I was lil apprehensive as here TR ll nt b together..but now I am happy by reading ur comments😊
Love ya so much Nats

Originally posted by: samiha_taarey

hav commented 4 the teaser in the previous page... nw coming to chp-1
reading this i was just lyk😲😲😲 45!!!!!!! ... cant even imagine hw my pc would luk at 45!!! m damn sure same dashing & hot lyk at the age of 18😳


just the flashback... taarey were sooo cute

😲😲😲 why taani is lyk tht!!! wht happened to her!!!!! & why they decided 2 meet after long 10 years!!!! so many questions yet to get answers ...
at last i just can say awsome starting my rosogolla...👏 hats off 2 u again 4 starting something so different yet amazing... eagerly waiting 4 the nxt parts... so my dear debu dont b lazy plzzz & do post the nxt part soon... waiting eagerly

Yes Yes Misti, ur PC (personal computer 😉😆)..ok ok Prince Charming..will be look like evergreen..I am damn sure that you never read an old man realisation in this forum of D3..

eita khub taratari ses hobe, request work from sneha, so, 3 to shots max😊