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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: --coco--
It was beautiful, loved Rey's flashback...
Gosh they were so close, they even got married !!!!!!
Then what happened why were they separated ?????? 🤔
Well I will get to know that later 😆
But I must tell you your storytelling is superb...

Thanks Nicky🤗
BTW what happen with your signature..I didn't know anything😕

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Debu

@crazy2012

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: sangeeta_taarey
Debu is it u who wrote dis story? Sachi..omg do i ve a frnd who write so flawlesly, lovely,emotionaly...debu i lovd it yaar.mast fadu tha...ayo including past in present memories , rey's inner feeling gravity, u ve caught it yaar...nd y always my taani get hurt?kyun kyun kyun...;(...hmm its k.but debu, u r super versatile writer.take my bow..k...haha jyada kush math ho jao..jaldi se update karo k..aur jab fre hojata toh bath karo yaar.kab tak intezar karna hoga..lovd dis update..hehe.bye dr

Sangi..u r so motivating person..thanks sweetu for this sweetest words
I love ya loads for it🤗

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

@1st bold - OMG😲..is it so?? some one said that it is easy to make you cry, but it is tough to make you laugh..you think so too kya?

no i don't think that way...for me its the other way around i.e its easy to bring a smile on other's face and really difficult to make someone cry, making other's happy is a very good thing so we should thank God that he has made this good deed easy for us...we should try to make other's happy as much as we can!

waise i am a weird person...in real life even in the most difficult and sad situations i don't cry but the sad scenes in dramas, movies and fiction stories make me cry...i remember once i even shed tears when one of the villains in a show (whom i used to curse a lot) died in fire accident 😆

@2nd bold - har baar zaroori nahi hota, jo ek dusra ke liye bane huye hote ek dusre ko mill jaye..God writes our destiny, we are just puppet of his hand

yes no one can change destiny...but i am a firm believer of "Jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai"

i have experienced this many times in my life, but here TR are not happy after getting seperating but lets see...may be when i get to know all the reasons of their seperation, may be i'll myself say that its good that they parted their ways 🤔

@3rd bold - I just love it..superb line..how could you find this girl!!! so true..jab tum sath hote ho toh har subah khubsurat aur har sham suhani hoti hai..aur tumse bichar ke kya pata raat kaha aur din kab hota hai (this is my thought and my line, sorry for any grammatical mistake as i am not good at Hindi and Urdu😳😃)

i read it somewhere...i actually like such philosophical lines so mujhe yaad rehti hai and i love using them 😊

hmm nice line Debu...tum se bichar kar teri deewani bhul gaye raat aur din ka pata

@4th bold - I also think it, but there are few group of ppl who think flowers are only for gal..😛

hmm we still have a lot of stereotypes around us

@5th bold - not exactly , One of the reason..not career choice but their diff of opinion, diff of ambition etc

that means unke dil to mil gaye magar unke dimag nahin mil paye...means their different ideologies are the reason of their seperation

@6th bold - actually can't blame Taani too..after all ek ladki sab kuch chod ke chali aate hai uske saath aapni puri zindgi bitane ke liye jisko wo chahti hai..trust karti hai..

yes a girl deserves financial security...but after marriage a person should consider his/her partner's views before taking any decision as their lives are inter-dependent on each other...Rey shouldn't have rejected that offer or Taani should have tried to understand Rey's pov...but i think they didn't tell each other their opinion..you see in that flashback Taani gave a confusing answer to Rey so usse pata hi nahin hoga what she wanted

@7th bold - hahahahaha well said, but I don't know if you have understood the irony of the line or not, pls do let me clear this. I wanted to mean that Taani is less cautious about her health now, she has lost so many things that turned her life into a cactus, no artificial thing can influence her now😊

yes i did understand the meaning...but i deliberately gave that reply to make the atmosphere a bit lighter after that emotional speech of mine 😆

again i'll use that line...jab insaan zindagi kaat raha ho to usse apni fikar nahin hoti, when she was with Rey she was living her life so she was cautious of her health but now... 😒

nahi nahi, itne bhi suspense nahi😳😊..just diff of opinion..kuch hum kahe jo wo suna nahi aur kuch wo kahi jo hum unsuna kar gayee

wow..another awesome line Debu...hmm lack of communication ruins the relationships, baat karne se baat banti hai...waise kabhi kabhi baat bigar bhi jati hai 😆

btw when are you updating???

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Prasanna

@PRASSI

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Amazing and mind blowing SS dear...👏👏

loved it to the core...😊😳

Do update soon and PM me...😊

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Hash

@-Dreaming...

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

where's the third chapter????

update now!!!!!

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-GoluGudiya-

@-GoluGudiya-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Wow Debu Dii !! Amazing Piece of Work !! Really a Tragic love story !! Both Chapters were just amazing !

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Debu

@crazy2012

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: wow-taarey

where's the third chapter????
update now!!!!!

i know behena ke u joined IF for this FF
I will update soonish😳😃

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Debu

@crazy2012

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha
Wow Debu Dii !! Amazing Piece of Work !! Really a Tragic love story !! Both Chapters were just amazing !

Thanks yaar Neha🤗
I just need one more chapter to finish it

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vibhaaa

@vibhaaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Debu read both capter...must say n i said it before n i am saying it again you are brilliant wrriter...beautifully written...concept is so different... the treaser line attracted me the most... what to say about story speechless.. didnt thaught taarey were married...but y the sepration... both lives are not good without each other... most beutiful moments left behind on both memories... feel the love both have 4 each other... plz wanna see taarey togather at the end.
Plz update soon
Thank u 4 pm me.