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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Awesome update.
Love shree concerns for riya.
He is a true friend.
Arjun is eating chinese food for riya.
Amazing.
Love jealous arjun.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Evryone its party time for ariya lovers...

Arjun is feeling jealous...omg

Im on cloud9...

I think the way he treat riya to not to dance with other guy...soon he will not allow shree also to come ner her

Olo...im feeling so happy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Gustakh Dil..

After 3 days..

It is Sunday..& they don't have case so it's a undeclared holiday for them..so they decide to stay home..

In evening..Arjun is reading some file..while Riya inside her room..

Arjun(in mind):-shit..ghar pe rehana matlab kitana boring kaam he..aur ye Riya bhi pata nahi 2 gante se room me kya kar rahi he..it's such a boring day..

He again decide to concentrate on file..but before that he hear noise of Riya's room's opening door..he look to the direction..& keep looking & looking without blinking his eyes..Riya has ware this dress..& she is looking super..beautifull..

He look her top to bottom..

Arjun(in mind):-oh..god..(he take a deep sigh..)oh..ye ladki ek din muze pagal bana degi..

He take a deep sigh..

Riya coming to him..& sit near to him on sofa..she is searching something in her purse..he kept looking her..she suddenly come to know that he is looking her..she look at him..

Riya(looking to Arjun):-what..?

Arjun(lost in her..& don't know what to speak):-nothing...I mean..you are going somewhere..?

Riya:-oh..god..bhul hi gayi apako batana..(she again starts searching her purse..& he continue to drinking her beauty silently..)ham sab club ja rahe he..

Arjun(come to reality):-sab..?sab matlab exactly kyon.?

Riya:-mein,Shree,Chotu aur Liza..

Arjun:-hmm..(he kept looking her..)hey..one second..tum club ja rahi ho..?

Riya:-haa..wahi toh bata rahi hu..

She take her mobile..& message Shree that she is coming within 15 minutes..

Arjun(somewhat angrily):-tum ye dress pehen ke club ja rahi ho..?

Riya:-haa..kyo..?ye dress acchi nahi lag rahi kya..?

Arjun(in mind):-isase short dress nahi mila tha isse pehenene ke liye..aur ja bhi kaha rahi he club me..

Arjun don't understand what to say to her..

Riya:-kya hua..?batayiye na..ye dress acchi nahi lag rahi..itane der meine tayar hone me laga di...batao na..

Arjun:-dekho ye dress..

Riya:-what ?

Arjun:-dekho ye dress achhi lag rahi he..lekin..

Riya:-lekin..?

Arjun:-nothing..you go..

Riya:-are you sure..ye dress accha lag raha he muzpar..?

Arjun:-haa..

She smiles..& continue texting message to liza..

He is still looking her through corner of his eyes..his eyes are shifted to her smily lips..& he feels just want to kiss her immigiately..he feels to crush her lips by his..

Arjun(in mind):-behave yourself Arjun..
he control himself somehow..& take file in his hand..

Riya:-ok..then bye..aur shayad ham dinner bahar hi kar lenge toh..aapka dinner..?

Arjun:-I will manage..

She goes to open the door to go outside..

Arjun(call her from back):-Riya..?

Riya:-haa..?

Arjun:-don't take drink today..

She smiles..

Riya:-don't worry..I wont take..bye..

She goes out..he take a deep sigh..

He just take a deep sigh..& try to concentrate again to file but after looking her now it's seems to impossible for him to concentrate..

At night..it almost 1:00,she open door of home with her keys..but look that Arjun is still awake..& watching TV..

Riya:-are abhi tak aap soye nahi..?

She come to sofa & sit near him..

Riya:-sorry Arjun ..bahot late ho gayi na..par ab mein bahot thak gayi hu..very tired..

She put her head on back of sofa..

He smiles to her..but before he could say anything his attension get distracted by a news..it was the news related they handled yesterday..he get fully focoused to saw that news..

After almost 10 minutes..when the news over..he look to her..she has rested her head on back of sofa..

Arjun:-chalo..Riya..sona nahi he kya..?

but she don't move..Arjun think perhaps she already in sleep..

he come closer to her..put his hand on her cheek softly..

Arjun(moves his hand on her cheek softly):-Riya..Riya..

She slightly move her head..but don't get up..

He smiles..& take her in his arms..& started walking to her bedroom..placed her gently on her bed..

He look to photo frame on side table on her bed..it's his & her photo in party which Rathod gives for their marriage..(she told Shree to take their photos..)

Arjun(in mind):-sorry Riya..pata nahi tumne kya kya socha hoga apni zindgi ke bare me..aur mein tumhe kuch nahi de paa raha hu..

He look to her..she is sleeping like a innocent child..he come closer to her..smile comes to his face..his face come more closer to her...their lips are just inches away from each other..she feels his warm breath on her face..she slightly move her face in sleep..but this was enough for our ACP to get back to reality..he get away from her..pull blanket over her..but cant stop himself from kissing her on her forehead..

After 2-3 days:-

she get up in morning...get ready to go office..she is standing infront of mirror..

Riya(in mind):-OMG..mein kaise bhul gayi..aaj hamari shadi ko pura 1 month complete ho gaya he..oh..I just cant belive this..1 month kaise chala gaya pata hi nahi chala..(somewhat sadly)par ab tak Arjun ne muze accept nahi kiya..(excitedly)par koi baat nahi..dheere dheere woh bhi karege..

In Office:-

the trio are chatting..

Shree:-are yaar..kya bure din aa gaye he..meri best friend ki shadi ko pura ek mahina ho gaya he ab..par ab tak party nahi mili..

Chotu:-haa..yaar..Ri..tuzse ye ummed nahi thi hame..

Riya:-oh..god..isame konsi badi baat he..chalo..aaj raat hi ham party karege..

Shree:-Arjun sir karne denge toh na..

Riya:-oh..ho..woh bhi maan jayege..

She get up & turned to his cabin..

Riya:-Arjun..?

Arjun(looking to her..she is looking happy today):-hmm..

Riya:-tumhe yaad he aaj kya he..?

Arjun(looking to file):-haa..meri abhi thodi der baad commissioner se meeting he..

Riya(sadly,mutter to herself):-inhe toh yaad bhi nahi..

Arjun:-kya..kaha tumne..?

Riya(trying to give him hint):-aur bhi kuch bahot important baat he aaj ke din ki..special..

Arjun:-haa..woh toh he..(she thinks he get it..& she get haapy)..special day hi keh sakte he..aaj koi case nahi he na..

She make a sad face..

Arjun look her..

Arjun:-kya hua..?

Riya:-kuch nahi..

She is about to leave from his cabin..he call her from back..

Arjun:-Riya..(she turned back with sad face..)waise agar tumhe yaad ho toh aur bhi speciality he aaj ke din ki..(She again make a face thinking perhaps he is going to tell her some another speciality of day from his point of view)..aur woh ye he ke..aaj hamari shadi ko pura ek mahina complete hua he..

She looking him crazily..

Arjun:-what..?aise kya dekh rahi ho..?

Riya(angrily):-aapko yaad tha..toh pehale kyo nahi bola..?

Arjun:-agar pehale hi bata deta toh tumhara ye angry look muze kaise dekhne ko milata..

He smiles..

She also smiles..& sit on chair Infront of him..

Riya:-toh..?

Arjun:-toh..kya..?

Riya:-kyona ham aaj party kare..?

Arjun:-party?..tumhe pata he na I hate parties..

Riya:-par sab log muzse party maang rahe he..aur waise bhi hamne hamari shadi ki party toh di hi nahi...fir kyo na aaj kare..?

Arjun:-sab log matalab exactly kyon?

Riya:-Shree aur Chotu..

Arjun(smile):-Shree aur Chotu..?unhe toh mein dekh lunga..dekhta hu kaise party mangate he..aage se tumhe kya.. kisi aur ko bhi party ke liye puchna bhul jayege..

Riya(in complaining tone):-this is not fair Arjun..they are my friends..they have right to take party from me..

Arjun:-then do party..I don't mind..but don't insist me..

Riya:-matalab aap party me nahi aaoge..?

Arjun nodded negatively..

Riya(she make a sad face):-fir toh party cancel..marriage ki party koi akele deta he bhala..aap nahi honge toh party bhi nahi hongi..(she leaves from cabin..& come to conference hall..)

Riya(to Shree & Chotu):-koi party nahi hogi..sorry..guys..

Shree:-it's ok Riyu..fir kabhi karege..

Shree & Chotu decide to skip the subject as they look Riya is so sad..

Arjun look from his cabin & Riya is quietly working..but still her eyes shows sadness..

Arjun:-oh..god..

He come to conference room where now Rathod & Liza is also present..

Arjun:-so..aap sabko aaj hamare ghar party ke liye aana he..hamari wedding ki party he..

Riya suprizingly gives her dimple smile to him..he becomes haapy to see her smilling..

Chotu(to Shree):-dono bhi dost bilcul same he..party pe aise bulate he jaise order de rahe ho..

Shree(smile):-aur nahi toh kya..?par hame kya..hame toh sirf party karne se matalab he..but Riyu is amazing..haa..Arjun sir ko manana matlab..

Chotu:-ya..Ri is gr8..

At night:-

Arjun is ready for party..he has ware 3-piece black suit in which he is looking dammed handsome as always..

He get message from Rathod that they are leaving for his home..

Arjun:-oh..god..ye log aate hi hoge..aur ye Riya..pata nahi kya kar rahi he..

He turns to her room..she is standing infront of wardrobe..

Arjun:-Riya..what is this..?ab tak tumne change bhi nahi kiya..?woh log bas aate hi hoge..

Riya:-dekho na Arjun..samaz me hi nahi aa raha ke kya pehanu..?

He come close to her..& get view of her wardrobe..

Riya:-kabse soch rahi hu..?ab toh dimaag bhi confuse ho gaya he..

Arjun:itana sochogi toh aisa hi hoga..

He take a baby pink colour sari from her wardrobe..& handover it to her..

Arjun:-ye lo..

Riya:-are you sure..ye sari acchi lagegi..?

Arjun(looking to her..& smile):-bilcul..

She smiles..

Arjun:-ab jaldi karo..

He leaves..

After sometime almost all are arrived..Shree,Chotu & Liza are laughing & chatting..while Arjun & Rathod are busy in talking with each other..Sonali helping Riya to ware sari..

Arjun get a call he turns to corner to talk on phone..while the door bell rings..Rathod goes to open the door..he open the door..& get shocked to see the person standing infront of him..

Rathod(suprizingly,loudly..):-Tummm..?

Due to his loud voice all stared in their direction..they all looking shockly to the person..

In Riya's Room:-

Riya:-are..ye kya sonali..sab logo ki aawaz aana band kaise ho gaya..

Sonali:-sab itane shant kaise ho gaye..?chalo chalkar dekhte he..

In Outside of room..:-

Rathod Finally manage to call Arjun..

Rathod(loudly):-Arjun..?

Arjun who is busy in phone..look to the Rathod..he cant belive on his eyes..he run towards the door..come to infront of the person..

Riya & Sonali come to hall where all are there..Riya look that Arjun is standing infront of someone..but she cant view the person as Arjun is standing infront of that person..

Arjun was very happy to see that person..

Arjun(suprizingly,happily,loudly):-Roshh...(& he immigiately hug her..)

Riya get shock to see the person..& fall on floor..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Superb update dr.

Awww Arjun got totally mesmerised by seeing Riya in tht blue dress.

Wow Arjun invited evryone for the party just caz of Riya's happiness.

Everything is going great but nw Rosh is back 😲 😲.

Wht will Arjun do n wht about Riya?

Arrrghh!!!!! Cliffhanger!!!!

Please dont to ths dr.

Can't we hv one more update please pretty please with cherry on top!!!

Thanks for pm.

Continue today.
Edited by akanksha1371986 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Wow nyc update...welll u know what i love u bcoz u give long updates evrytym...lolz...

But yeh kya abhi abhi to Ariya sahi horhy thy n Rosh is back now...
Cant wait to see what next...
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
what the roshni aise aaegi didnt expect that i thought she will be find as dead uff aage kya hoga...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

W T H...

abhi to ariya start ho gaya tha...aur ab...

arjun and riya kitane cute lag rahe the saath saath...lekin roshani ki entry...

i reaaly cant see this...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
lovely updates gal...read last two updates in one go...awesome...
the way Arjun and riya bonding is nice...slow and strng...
The way he was jealous was lovely...kewl...!!!
Wow Arjun loses himself in her beauty everytime he sees her nice...
Party at Arjun place nice...
What frm were did Rosh cme...
Riyaaa!!ab uska kya hoga...
Jaaldi update karna plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
ohh wow..
Awesome aur should i say dhasu update...
Lovd it..
Wht rosh is back... Uff poor riya...
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
superb update...
wow arjun totally mesmerised with her looks...
awww he was even teasing her how cute...and agreed for party just for her happiness...
but ye kya abhi to unki gaadi trafk pe aani hi shuru hui thi aur itna bada twist/..
roshni back...
ab kya hoga...
continue soon...

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