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Imran Khan

@25imrankhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#401

great work

A well written part

Recall the old situations reading the original dialogues

well done

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ankitamishra201

@ankitamishra201

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

y no precap ...dis was so awesome

i love arnav n ASR ...it would be no fun having just arnav !!!!!

n i love d way u use original dialogue ...dey blend into ur story so well !!!

Edited by ankitamishra201 - 12 years ago

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#403

I have been reading the entire bit with bated breath!

Okie Rohan - Khushi convo was not all that awkward like i had expected it to be!

I am so happy abt Rohan being the way he is!

Argh! that ego! will never cease to show up at wrong times! can it!? however hard it was without him!

Good usage of the dialogues from the show ... though i really liked it in the show for its aptness to the situation... the effect nonetheless was of a different kind here and with a different backdrop!

And look at what the mighty ASR has to crib abt ... itna sab kuch khushi ne kaha... and the only thing that mattered to him was she cutting his call! *sigh*

But that was a cute tease Anjali ! :)

No precap? as it cant have one? hmmm wonder whats the case gonna be!

Cant wait to know!

fasta farah!! make the update sooner plsss!! :)

Thanks for the update and the PM sweets!

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

Khushi-Rohan convo was sweet. Obviously, Rohan understands Arnav but I wonder if he knows Arnav loves Khushi coz Khushi did admit that in talks. Just wondering shouldn't Rohan be surprised that THE Arnav was in love?
I loved how Arnav called her and asked first thing, 'Tum theek ho?' So touching!

Lol!! The ending bit was cute :$
Cant wait to read ahead :D

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kuchnaakahoo

@kuchnaakahoo

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

i am so glad tht arnav didn lock himself in his cocoon to isolate himself from the rest of the world,,, i felt immensely relieved to learn tht he is back to his possessive self whn it comes to khushi,,, he hadnt backed off still,,, hats off to his determined demeanor,, a true reflection of his strong love for khushi,,,his words tht '' tum khud ko mujhse alag nai kar paogi'' clearly shows tht he is 101% sure of what he feels for khushi,,

n i also wanna give credit to khushi for explaining arnav's inner turmoil n defending him in front of rohan,,, she may b dejected,, but for the outside world,,, she is all up for arnav,, great going,, waiting for their yet another to m jerry encounter,,😆

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Oh god
Another sad update...
If Khushi understood him so well then she really shouldnt have left him and when he rang and said tum theek ho??
I started crying and thought i really should read SAY updates in the privacy of my room... Cause a lot of time i resemble a blubburing idiot...:)
I really wanna read some more...
Eagerly waiting...
Wishing for precaps too

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Bavari

@Bavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#407

Awesome. Thanks for the PM.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

Great...really loved reading it...Arnav back in action...I loved this update...got things more out in the open...

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

Res😉

--unres---

Hope you feel better soon...take care...

Awesome update!!!

loved the sibling bond in this one...Rohan and Khushi, and Arnav and Anjali...

You really are the dictionary of dialogues of ipk, you twist them around and use them in a totally different aspect... Just love it👏

Can't wait for the confrontation of Arnav and Khushi...

Thanks for the pm...

Edited by Hawa1997 - 12 years ago

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#410

That was an amazinggg update!!!

Starting from the lil journey the siblings shared,have to say rohan is the most understandin n caring bro one can get

And khushi!!! M out of words,selfless is the word!!!! She left him for his own betterment rather his words against her family n herself...gosh she is an angel

Loved how rohan did let out a thing abt what actually happened

And anjaliz note fr khushi was relli what needed to reach khushi n it did

Then comes the call...tum theek hu and the answer he received...very well written..have to say m in awe of your writing

But the part I loved most was reaching delhi was an emergency as khushi needs to be told again that she is not to cut or tell off the ASR...hahahaa

Amazinggg update!!!

Edited by robinhood008 - 12 years ago