||~Something About You~||#11 *COMPLETED*

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Farah dear, I stand guilty for not commenting the last two updates!

Things have been hectic and with the mood of the story I too needed time to write but never found it! I know how much time you spend to give us a beautiful narration but it was beyond my control! My apologies.

Loved the way Rohan took care of Khushi and made her open up!

Loved the way Rohan took care of Arnav too leaving Anjali behind!

Loved the way Anjali found time to insert the chit in Khushi's bag.

Loved the way Rohan handled the people at home without sullying Khushi.

Loved the way Rohan spoke about Arnav without any vengeance even after the fist fight.

Loved the way Khushi told Rohan the reason for her keeping away from Arnav even though she loves him a lot! It showed both Arnav and Khushi are trying to protect the other from their genetic disorder as they presume!! I should say, What the! What a pair!!!

Loved the way Samiya came to meet Khushi and after listening to her story was stumped!

Loved the way Khushi gave Arnav a tight retort only after noticing he called her Khushi and not Red! It showed she craved for the earlier camaraderie.

Loved the way Arnav thinks about Gupta women, the latest addition too included! Wonder now what he thinks of Payal!!!???

Loved the update.

Hope to see Arnav-Khushi confrontation!

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meem17

@meem17

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

The last part was hilarious. .
Rofl..thanks for the updTe

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scarlet2012

@scarlet2012

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Rohan & Anjali are really understanding siblings, nice update

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kriti_angel1819

@kriti_angel1819

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

Haha Khushi's outburst was cute
I feel terrible for Arnav though

I love how your updating so soon
Please keep going

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Great update Farah
Kya baat hain itne saare updates, not that i mind obviously
Hehe arnav going back because she cut his call

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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Hi,

Get well soon

Beautiful update. I am just irritated with both Khushi and Arnav. "They should be making love not fighting" 😆 (dialogue courtesy "BBB") I loved Anjali letter and also loved how Rohan and Khushi had a talk on the way back. All I want to say please make Arnav land in Delhi fast and set everything alright. Somebody tell them they don't look good being apart from each other!

Pls cont soon...

Edited by melonie - 12 years ago

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Loved it!!! Beautifully written...so good portrayal of emotions! :)

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723461

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

Why is ASR so adorable?

Sometimes it's even cuter than Arnav. Arnav is intense, pushy and shows emotions. Thae only thing ASR knows is to not show emotion! We think he has that power over Khushi because he can be cold, manipulative snd cruel, but small, small things; and your update reminded me of that... like not looking at him when he's talking to her or cutting the phone on him; it gets him so worked up, much more than Arnav ever ould be.

So, now summoning the chopper huh, ASR?

SAY is one FF which makes me love Anjali so much...sensible, motherly, playful and loving; all at the same time!

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

Hey Farah,

Please rest and get well soon...

I feel and I had not get a chance to comment on the last chapter and you already updated...

It was so good, I was waiting to see how you would handle the aftermath of what was their most serious fight so far and you did just a brilliant job...I loved now Anjali stayed back to be with him and Rohan deserves credit for not asking her to choose between Arnav and him...says a lot about him too...

Rohan bringing Khushi jalebis and their conversation in the bus...not what I had expected but so much better ...loved the maturity with which the brother sister talk, I liked that he asks her that if this is how she felt about him then why was it so easy for her to leave him? And Khushi's response ...just proved that in spite of her heart break and pain...she understands him and what her love does too him, she as faith he will never hurt her but its because she loves him that she had to leave...

Loved the part where Anjali realised that she was the Khushi he was referring to literally at her Bidaai ...and was curious to know why he did not tell Rohan just how much he loves his sister ...loved that she writes a note for Khushi to read later about Arnav giving a little insight into him...his true self...

I loved how she cannot control herself and is crying away all her pain...and then Samiya's surprise at Khushi s revelation at what really happened and that it was not. rohan and Anjali but about her and Arnav...I loved how Samiya says that his love for and how happy he was with her was so evident and obvious...and once again the brilliant use of the original dialogue...

I have always been in awe of your ability to use the dialogues from the show but in your own context fitting them in so brilliantly ...this chapter is no different in that respect...

I loved how everyone is assuming that there is some problem with anjali and Rohan and that guilt is biting away at her...loved how she picks up the phone and after the initial silence the " tum theek ho? " I can always picture him saying that but not without going weak in the knees.,! And I loved that just hearing him ask that made her feel at home but then she remembers all what happened and lashes out at him in frustration and anger.

..Tum theek ho?' Toh sunn lijeeye, hum theek hain! Aapke wajah se nahi.. Aapke bawajood bhi hum theek

I loved when she used this in the real show but today you brought new meaning to the same dialogues...something I did not think possible.!

Take a bow ! Seriously!

I love how you turned a completely serious situation into one with some amusement by his ranting at her hanging up on him and the way she spoke to him...only him at such a crucial time can be bothered about something like that...he has declared it an emergency one for which all reinforcements are being called in for him to go and confront her...

I loved it,...eagerly waiting to see what happens when the two shall meet...I have a feeling it's going to be Rohan who will realise that these two are going to suffer without each other and do something., ...

Farah, get well soon and thanks for updating inspite of your fever, but we would have waited!

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sulu_123

@sulu_123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

Wow Farah !

That was super. Loved ur lines , rather Anjali's

So we have to hop into a chopper, so you can go & punish her for cutting ASR's call, is that it?"

And then ofcourse Arnav thinking

was it something to do with the Guptas, that each Gupta women seemed to have a few of their brain screws lost, the latest addition to that being his own sister?

So, Anjali is probably happy that the great ASR has probably met his match. So far, it was the girls running after him, with him being least bothered about any of them. This is the first time, a mere girl has succeeded in making him so flustered and impatient that he cant think of anything else other than going after her and making sure she listened to him.

So the mighty ASR doesn't know what has hit him, but His Di has understood.

Great going Farah.