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Richa

@richaarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

lovely yaar...

the update was just awesome

thanks for the PM

update soon

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

lovely update... ASR is back.. he will woo her..

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namita11

@namita11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Awesome
I cant believe khushi cares for him so much

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5683ipkknd

@5683ipkknd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

I dislike commenting usually, unless I really HAVE to say something, but every time I read an update from you I am compelled to comment because I am so impressed by your grasp on emotions and how to portray them - its simply amazing!!! Every time I wonder how you will continue, after bringing the story to a no return kind of situation, you cleverly bring it around so that one is laughing and crying and feeling a twinge in their heart for each character portrayed. You really, really should consider making writing a career.

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spilla

@spilla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

Lovely update...can't wait for the next part

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harsha

@harsha..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Khushi is trying to shove away Arnav so that he doesn't harm himself and fall into the dark abyss. It is a sign of true love. If we think more about others than ourselves we truly and deeply love that person. The last made me laugh. Arnav and ASR though different are still the same.You cannot take out ASR from Arnav.

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Jai.Mata.Di

@Jai.Mata.Di

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

FFF!!!
Farah
Fabulous
Fantastic
Fan
Fiction!!!!!

GET WELL SOON

(AND GIVE FASTER UPDATES 😉 )

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

I so love this chapter

No matter what they love each other and really can't stay away

She wants to show him she doesn't need him but she does

And with all his arrogance and pretense that he is going to punish
her for talking back to him and cutting his call
All he really wants is to talk to her and be with her

with all the excitement of your update I forgot to wish
you a speedy recovery

Edited by seeta_naips - 12 years ago

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Aplihs

@Aplihs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

Always the best. Loved the play of emotions and Arnav oh Arnav what can we say...

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upatel89

@upatel89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#430

I love that the siblings gave up their honeymoon to handle the situation. I really have to give you credit for taking the classic dialogs from the story and incorporating them into your story seamlessly. Khushi did a good job of attempting to defend Arnav and I look forward to seeing how he manages to win her back. I hope at this point he does understand the significance of marriage!

Arnav has a lot to prove, not only to Khushi but Rohan as well. Great chapter!