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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awsome update... .😊
Really like it... 😊
Now looking forward for nxt part so update soon.. .😊



Thank you...glad you liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Dipu_taarey

its super awesome chapter dear...love jealous taani...she try hard not to think about rey but she cant help it. i love the last scene of taarey...cute lovely update...



Thank you Dipu! Glad you liked the update!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

awww...

so cute update...
loved their bond and taani's jealousy.
and abhi tak i dint gey why is rey is so close to shilpa???
and pls update soon with a promising
and blooming love story ahead...
love you, and
update soon!!



Thanks Hima.
I will try to disclose more about rey shilpa in the coming updates!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

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Gosh! Kitne dino baad aapka update mila! Bola tha na jaldi update karne ko? 😡 Acha now daro matt i'm just kidding here 😆 U know na paagal me 😆 Actually thi mai aapse thodi gussa for not updating 😡 but saara gussa paani mein dhul gaya 😆 after seeing this super fabulous heart skipping beats wala update 🤗

Haiyo rabba! Meri maa ek week ke baad hi toh update kiya tha! Uff...tum sab na meri class lene ko ready rehti ho...but accha I will update soon this time😆
And thanks so much Shivu...at least kuch toh accha hua iss update se...tera gussa paani paani ho gaya😳

Acha now, i'm loving Swayam and Taani here! And I guess i know why Swayam smiled at her before going to the kitchen to bring food 😆
Smart girl huh

I hate Rey's and Shilpa's equation! Ho kya rha hai yeh? Waist pe haath rakhna and use cheeks pe kiss karna! mujhe rona aa jayega 😭 😡 😆 and also shoulder pe sar rakhna 🤢 acha yeh chodo. Shilpa or Rey ke equation ke baare mein i'm totally conbhused 😕 😆 paagal me 😆 🤢

🤣 Kya karun...ab SS ka naam hi aisa rakha hai toh story bhi ultpatang hogi na

Acha, I'm loving my Taani's POV! So so so much! 😳 In love with Ms. Tsunami now! 😆 And not to forget Rithvik You put him here in the best possible way! 😃

Thanks for that! Love VD and RD!

I completely loved this part but this makes me even more conbhused! 😆 😕

"Tsunami...long drive par chalogi mere saath?" I stared at him.

"Rey are you mad? Sham ho chuki hai...the sun is almost setting!"

"Haan toh...long drive ka maza sham ko hi aata hai. Chalna please!"


Rey shilpa ke saath inta.. You know 🤢 and now he is asking Taani to come with him on a long drive! 😕 Lols 😆 Jo bhi ho I loved their entire conversation!
Now i know why u have named this SS as " Convoluted " coz everything is so convoluted! 😕

Hahaha! Rey is a very very conphujed soul! 😆 Ek taraf Shipa toh dusri taraf Tsunami!

I loved the fact that both of them shared their secrets with each other! WooHooo they are so good friends now. I simply loved this line too

Somewhere you filled up the space that Kriya left behind

But I am still confused about Shilpa and Rey. Gosh i literally want Taani to ask Rey about it! 😆 Poor me! i'm burning inside now coz of Rey-shilpa 😆 I'm in love with this Rey I guess 😆

Acha now please update soon coz I'll keep irritating u like this with my lambu comments! I love doing it! 😆

And haa.. Take this for this lambu update ( aap bologe ki paagal ladki baar baar aake pappi de jati hai 🤣 ) update soon and do pm me 🤣 this monkey is way too funny 🤣 haa haa now i know u are banging ur head on the wall coz of my comment 🤣 so tata bye bye see ya soon 🤗 coz i'm not going to leave u alone for long na 😈 🤣


🤣 Bilkul pagal ladki hai yeh! Tu aise lambey comment degi toh mein hamesha late update karungi 😆😛



Thank you soo much Shivu!!! Love you very much my lil sister!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PRASSI

Amazing update dear!!!!

It was really vry cute n sweet at first!!!
Nthen at the point where they shared their feelings!!!!
It was emotional!!!
But loved the way their bond is growing!!!!
Thanx for the PM n do update soon😃



Thank you very very much! 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nithi_newlife

"I am not going to say I understand Rey, because I really don't. I will never feel the gravity of that situation unless it actually happens to me but I will say that if you need anything your Tsunami will be there for you."


This was the best part for me cozzzI always personally believe it...We can never understand the intensity of a situation unless we feel it...Ecxited to know I have a buddy who actually portrayed my feeling...It really made me feel good..Thank you!!!
And the update was neat and perfect...Loved it!!
You are really an amazing writer!!😊
Just loving the ff after every passing chapter...



Wow! I'm glad that someone else also believes in the same thing! I guess we share a lot of common interest and thoughts!
Thank you so much Nithi for commenting and for the compliments...though I still can't be a better writer than you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

awsum update dear...

taani is jealous of rey and shilpa friend ship...
i was scared by thinking that rey like shilpa...
but u give us nice taarey scene...
hope soon rey fall for taani...
and i also want to knw rey pov...
pls update soon with rey pov...



Thanks for commenting and reading
Glad you liked the update
and aww...don't be scared of Rey and Ships

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: so2102

awesome updt
taani getting jealous
really wanted to see taarey faaling for each other
updt soon



Thanks a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: XxMevKhanxX

awsum chap👏 loved d update 👍🏼 lykd d kria n rey angle thy wr only frndz nufin more.



Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cuppypie121

superub update

Taani jealous 🤣
loving this taarey bond
Rey kissed Shilpa 😲
Rey is sharing his secret with Taani while he is kissing Shilpa 😕
continue soon



Thanks a bunch dear!

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