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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updt
taani getting jealous
really wanted to see taarey faaling for each other
updt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Edited comment on page 37! =)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum chap👏 loved d update 👍🏼 lykd d kria n rey angle thy wr only frndz nufin more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
superub update
Taani jealous 🤣
loving this taarey bond
Rey kissed Shilpa 😲
Rey is sharing his secret with Taani while he is kissing Shilpa 😕
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow ... Really Amazing Chapter ...
When I saw Kriya's name in the start, I was like Oh No ! Kriya ! Like bummed thinking about Kriya and Rey's equation !
But it didn't really complete though at the start so I kinda chucked it!
The the truth and dare situation, Taani really feels for Rey ... Wow! But what's with Rey and Shilpa, Just Best Friends I hope!!
Taani and Rithvik 😊 ... I really find Vrinda and Rithvik cute so when you mentioned Rithivik I was like awww ...

Then Rey and Taani becoming closer even though Taani wanted to avoid him as much as possible!

Long Drive 😉😉 ... Nice!!

But their relation with each other is totally different from the rest ... It's special and unique!

And I found it sweet that Rey trusted Taani and told him about Kriya.
Thank God they were just really close friends, nothing more! Though it's a really sad for Rey since he lost his BFF forever.

My favourite part was when Rey said that Taani had kinda filled Kriya's place ... I was like ! Woah !

Great Great Great Update ! I totally loved It !
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear
i just loved that rey trusted my taani and told him everything about kriya
and i also loved the long drive
it was a superb chapter
really amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
taani n reys convo awsum😆 so cute<3 taani is jealo haan...wowww😳 nice one..upd soon dr
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anju101

What a cute chapter! Finally some awesome rey and taani moments. Amazing work!



Thank you so much!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tareyfan

cute chapter yaar..luvd it ❤️



Thanks!
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Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Res! =)

-Edited-

Oh gosh! Di! 🤗 This was such a beautiful and magical update! Haye! I simply loved it! Okay, so starting from the start.. 😆

Aww...thanks dear!!🤗 hugs back at you!

I have already said it and I am saying it again... I so so so so so love Swayam-Taani bong here.. I mean seriously.. They are way too adorable and lovely! Thanks...I want their bond to be strong just like Tayam from the show...And... I was kindda right! Kria was Rey's best friend! 😃 Yeah you were!😆

And wow! I so so so love how Taani gets all sad when she notices Rey and Shilpa together.. Not that I love seeing her like that. Oh no! It just shows that she is falling for him.. Harder and harder as time passes.. Haye!
😳

AHAH! Yeah...

His hands were on her waist and she grabbed onto his arm. I looked at their close proximity and turned to leave for the kitchen.

Ermmm... 🤔


"Oh my choco chips...atleast tu toh mera saath kabhi nahi chodega,"


🤣 🤣 🤣 I seriously can't stop laughing at this line... 🤣 Wow di! That was hilarious!


Thanks...that's my chocolate chop cookies for you😉

Rey looked at Shilpa and smiled. She placed her head on his shoulder and looked at Sharon for an answer.

Some more of 'Errmmm'... 🤔

Haye! Rithvik was Taani's boyfriend? Haye! ☺️ And wait! For 4 years? 😲 That's LONG! Woah! I would love to see Rey's reaction on it.. Just a suggestion you know.. 😉 😳

No...I'm not going to include Rey being jealous of Rithvik but you will see him jealous and angry again...

Rey smiled widely and without even thinking or hesitating gave a kiss to Shilpa on the cheeks.

More and more - 'Errmmm'... 🤔

Guys...let's eat!" Swayam said and then very peculiarly looked at me.

"What?" I ask but he just gives a knowing smile and walks away.

Oh my gosh! I so so so loved this part! <3 I seriously completely loved it!

That Saturday was terrible. I had to see Rey and Shilpa's public display of affection and also feel loveless and partnerless.

Awww.. Poor Taani! 😆 But Rey and Shilpa... Errmmm!

And oh! I completely love the way Rey calls Taani Ms. Tsunami. That is so cute and so apt too! 😆

And after that came the whole long drive and cliff scene.. Gosh! It is one of the most beautiful and magical things I have ever read! It was just so so so pure.. So magical! Can't find any other word to describe it!


Thank you sooo much!

"I mean you are a walking talking disaster but you are a cute disaster. You have mingled so well with everyone that it's hard for me to say that you are new to the college. Not to mention how much everyone adores you for being so real. You're always smiling and mind you, are pretty low maintenance for a girl. But, still it seems that you have been through a lot...what it though I don't know."

Awww! That's all I can say.. I feel a rush of emotions when I read that.. Every time.. Gosh di! Wow! This was so touching!

I absolutely loved it when Taani told him about her childhood and he gives her a side hug. And then he told her that Swayam told him that she asked him about Kria... I was surprised. I wasn't expecting that too. And then I read that he asked her teasingly. Wow! I wasn't expecting that either! And then he told her all about Kria. I never thought that she was.. umm.. dead. I just thought she had left or something. And my! Rey took 3 years to get over the sadness? Well, that isn't that surprising, right? He lost his best friend, that's... tragic?


Well, I was like it's his best friend so why not just let him tell Taani about it. Also, I didn't want to ruin the moment by making Rey mad. I think that it would show that he is mature enough to handle the situation...not go off like a siren each time...also its time to show he moved on from Kriya.


I felt my eyes moisten and my heart feel heavy. I took Rey's hand into mine and reassured him that I was there. He scrubbed his eyes dry

When you imagine this part.. Wow! It is just so beautiful, di. I don't know how many times I have told you this today but.. Seriously! It's just so beautiful!

"I am not going to say I understand Rey, because I really don't. I will never feel the gravity of that situation unless it actually happens to me but I will say that if you need anything your Tsunami will be there for you."

He laughed at that, "Be there with me by always falling."

"Hey! I don't ALWAYS fall!" I laugh but try to defend myself.

"Oh no no...how can I forget that you never fall...you just like licking the floor," he burst into laughter as I gaped at him.

"Rey! How mean!" I yell but still smile.

"Hey...Taani...thank you," he says in a soft voice.

"Thanks? For what?" I ask

"For being a Tsunami. After you came I began to laugh and enjoy my social life more. Somewhere you filled up the space that Kriya left behind."

I cried.

I literally cried out of joy!

"You are terrible Mr. Khadoos Singhania! Making me senti and emotional...do you know how bad it is for my image?" I said smiling and crying at the same time.

I just cannot tell you how much I loved these lines. It was just so.. Comforting. Yeah! It was.. Sigh. Way too good. It was.. Wow! You know.. It kind of showed how deep their relation had got. And believe me.. It's amazing. It is so so so amazing!

And the end.. It was... Perfect! Seriously! This was the best part of this FF so far.. I so so so loved it, di!

AWWW!! THANK YOU SSOOO MUCH!!! I love your comment!!! I love the way you react as a reader and makes my absolute blabber seem so meaningful!
And di, please update soon this time. I know your school has started and I completely understand but please do try and update whenever you can! I am completely falling in love with your FF. Not that I wasn't in love with it.. But I am just falling deeper in love with it! Hope you get that! 😆

HAHA! I really appreciate that you fell in love with it even more!

And oh! After many "Ermmm's' ", here are my views about Rey and Shilpa.. I am, umm.. confused. I really don't think they are dating. I don't know why but... But maybe they are.. Or... Gosh! Are they? Or aren't they? DI! You need to reveal this now... And even about the Armaan-Shilpa thingy... I thought you were going to make Taani ask Shilpa about it! But nevermind.. Maybe next update mein we get Taani asking Shilpa or Rey about it. 😳

Yeah...I kind of got the meaning behind your errrmmmsss😛😆 and for sure, the next chapter or maybe the next two chapters I will focus on this Rey-Shilpa thing.


PS: I will continue to annoy you with my 'Ermmms' till you don't reveal Rey and Shilpa's equation. 😆

PPS: I don't hate Rey and Shilpa together.. I am just confused. 😕 😆


PPPS: Don't forget Armaan in the next update, di! I need to know about his and Shilpa's equation too! 😆


Oh don't worry...Armaan will be there😉




Thanks so much Shreya! I adore your long comments and it makes me feel sooo bloody special!!! 😳

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