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anju101

@anju101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

What a cute chapter! Finally some awesome rey and taani moments. Amazing work!

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tareyfan

@tareyfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

cute chapter yaar..luvd it ❤️

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-CussTheWorldUp

@-CussTheWorldUp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Res! =)

-Edited-

Oh gosh! Di! 🤗 This was such a beautiful and magical update! Haye! I simply loved it! Okay, so starting from the start.. 😆

I have already said it and I am saying it again... I so so so so so love Swayam-Taani bong here.. I mean seriously.. They are way too adorable and lovely! And... I was kindda right! Kria was Rey's best friend! 😃

And wow! I so so so love how Taani gets all sad when she notices Rey and Shilpa together.. Not that I love seeing her like that. Oh no! It just shows that she is falling for him.. Harder and harder as time passes.. Haye! 😳

His hands were on her waist and she grabbed onto his arm. I looked at their close proximity and turned to leave for the kitchen.

Ermmm... 🤔

"Oh my choco chips...atleast tu toh mera saath kabhi nahi chodega,"

🤣 🤣 🤣 I seriously can't stop laughing at this line... 🤣 Wow di! That was hilarious!

Rey looked at Shilpa and smiled. She placed her head on his shoulder and looked at Sharon for an answer.

Some more of 'Errmmm'... 🤔

Haye! Rithvik was Taani's boyfriend? Haye! ☺️ And wait! For 4 years? 😲 That's LONG! Woah! I would love to see Rey's reaction on it.. Just a suggestion you know.. 😉 😳

Rey smiled widely and without even thinking or hesitating gave a kiss to Shilpa on the cheeks.

More and more - 'Errmmm'... 🤔

Guys...let's eat!" Swayam said and then very peculiarly looked at me.

"What?" I ask but he just gives a knowing smile and walks away.

Oh my gosh! I so so so loved this part! <3 I seriously completely loved it!

That Saturday was terrible. I had to see Rey and Shilpa's public display of affection and also feel loveless and partnerless.

Awww.. Poor Taani! 😆 But Rey and Shilpa... Errmmm!

And oh! I completely love the way Rey calls Taani Ms. Tsunami. That is so cute and so apt too! 😆

And after that came the whole long drive and cliff scene.. Gosh! It is one of the most beautiful and magical things I have ever read! It was just so so so pure.. So magical! Can't find any other word to describe it!

"I mean you are a walking talking disaster but you are a cute disaster. You have mingled so well with everyone that it's hard for me to say that you are new to the college. Not to mention how much everyone adores you for being so real. You're always smiling and mind you, are pretty low maintenance for a girl. But, still it seems that you have been through a lot...what it though I don't know."

Awww! That's all I can say.. I feel a rush of emotions when I read that.. Every time.. Gosh di! Wow! This was so touching!

I absolutely loved it when Taani told him about her childhood and he gives her a side hug. And then he told her that Swayam told him that she asked him about Kria... I was surprised. I wasn't expecting that too. And then I read that he asked her teasingly. Wow! I wasn't expecting that either! And then he told her all about Kria. I never thought that she was.. umm.. dead. I just thought she had left or something. And my! Rey took 3 years to get over the sadness? Well, that isn't that surprising, right? He lost his best friend, that's... tragic?

I felt my eyes moisten and my heart feel heavy. I took Rey's hand into mine and reassured him that I was there. He scrubbed his eyes dry

When you imagine this part.. Wow! It is just so beautiful, di. I don't know how many times I have told you this today but.. Seriously! It's just so beautiful!

"I am not going to say I understand Rey, because I really don't. I will never feel the gravity of that situation unless it actually happens to me but I will say that if you need anything your Tsunami will be there for you."

He laughed at that, "Be there with me by always falling."

"Hey! I don't ALWAYS fall!" I laugh but try to defend myself.

"Oh no no...how can I forget that you never fall...you just like licking the floor," he burst into laughter as I gaped at him.

"Rey! How mean!" I yell but still smile.

"Hey...Taani...thank you," he says in a soft voice.

"Thanks? For what?" I ask

"For being a Tsunami. After you came I began to laugh and enjoy my social life more. Somewhere you filled up the space that Kriya left behind."

I cried.

I literally cried out of joy!

"You are terrible Mr. Khadoos Singhania! Making me senti and emotional...do you know how bad it is for my image?" I said smiling and crying at the same time.

I just cannot tell you how much I loved these lines. It was just so.. Comforting. Yeah! It was.. Sigh. Way too good. It was.. Wow! You know.. It kind of showed how deep their relation had got. And believe me.. It's amazing. It is so so so amazing!

And the end.. It was... Perfect! Seriously! This was the best part of this FF so far.. I so so so loved it, di!

And di, please update soon this time. I know your school has started and I completely understand but please do try and update whenever you can! I am completely falling in love with your FF. Not that I wasn't in love with it.. But I am just falling deeper in love with it! Hope you get that! 😆

And oh! After many "Ermmm's' ", here are my views about Rey and Shilpa.. I am, umm.. confused. I really don't think they are dating. I don't know why but... But maybe they are.. Or... Gosh! Are they? Or aren't they? DI! You need to reveal this now... And even about the Armaan-Shilpa thingy... I thought you were going to make Taani ask Shilpa about it! But nevermind.. Maybe next update mein we get Taani asking Shilpa or Rey about it. 😳

PS: I will continue to annoy you with my 'Ermmms' till you don't reveal Rey and Shilpa's equation. 😆

PPS: I don't hate Rey and Shilpa together.. I am just confused. 😕 😆

PPPS: Don't forget Armaan in the next update, di! I need to know about his and Shilpa's equation too! 😆

Edited by ShReya_TaaRey - 12 years ago

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Awsome update... .😊
Really like it... 😊
Now looking forward for nxt part so update soon.. .😊

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#255

its super awesome chapter dear...love jealous taani...she try hard not to think about rey but she cant help it. i love the last scene of taarey...cute lovely update...

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Lavender_Luna

@Lavender_Luna

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#256

awww...

so cute update...

loved their bond and taani's jealousy.

and abhi tak i dint gey why is rey is so close to shilpa???

and pls update soon with a promising

and blooming love story ahead...

love you, and

update soon!!

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Shivangi

@peraltagasm

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

-Res-

-Unres-

Gosh! Kitne dino baad aapka update mila! Bola tha na jaldi update karne ko? 😡 Acha now daro matt i'm just kidding here 😆 U know na paagal me 😆 Actually thi mai aapse thodi gussa for not updating 😡 but saara gussa paani mein dhul gaya 😆 after seeing this super fabulous heart skipping beats wala update 🤗

Acha now, i'm loving Swayam and Taani here! And I guess i know why Swayam smiled at her before going to the kitchen to bring food 😆

I hate Rey's and Shilpa's equation! Ho kya rha hai yeh? Waist pe haath rakhna and use cheeks pe kiss karna! mujhe rona aa jayega 😭 😡 😆 and also shoulder pe sar rakhna 🤢 acha yeh chodo. Shilpa or Rey ke equation ke baare mein i'm totally conbhused 😕 😆 paagal me 😆 🤢

Acha, I'm loving my Taani's POV! So so so much! 😳 In love with Ms. Tsunami now! 😆 And not to forget Rithvik You put him here in the best possible way! 😃

I completely loved this part but this makes me even more conbhused! 😆 😕

"Tsunami...long drive par chalogi mere saath?" I stared at him.

"Rey are you mad? Sham ho chuki hai...the sun is almost setting!"

"Haan toh...long drive ka maza sham ko hi aata hai. Chalna please!"

Rey shilpa ke saath inta.. You know 🤢 and now he is asking Taani to come with him on a long drive! 😕 Lols 😆 Jo bhi ho I loved their entire conversation!

Now i know why u have named this SS as " Convoluted " coz everything is so convoluted! 😕

I loved the fact that both of them shared their secrets with each other! WooHooo they are so good friends now. I simply loved this line too

Somewhere you filled up the space that Kriya left behind

But I am still confused about Shilpa and Rey. Gosh i literally want Taani to ask Rey about it! 😆 Poor me! i'm burning inside now coz of Rey-shilpa 😆 I'm in love with this Rey I guess 😆

Acha now please update soon coz I'll keep irritating u like this with my lambu comments! I love doing it! 😆

And haa.. Take this for this lambu update ( aap bologe ki paagal ladki baar baar aake pappi de jati hai 🤣 ) update soon and do pm me 🤣 this monkey is way too funny 🤣 haa haa now i know u are banging ur head on the wall coz of my comment 🤣 so tata bye bye see ya soon 🤗 coz i'm not going to leave u alone for long na 😈 🤣

Edited by Shivangi_Taarey - 12 years ago

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Prasanna

@PRASSI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

Amazing update dear!!!!

It was really vry cute n sweet at first!!!

Nthen at the point where they shared their feelings!!!!

It was emotional!!!

But loved the way their bond is growing!!!!

Thanx for the PM n do update soon😃

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nithi_newlife

@nithi_newlife

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

This was the best part for me cozzzI always personally believe it...We can never understand the intensity of a situation unless we feel it...Ecxited to know I have a buddy who actually portrayed my feeling...It really made me feel good..Thank you!!!

And the update was neat and perfect...Loved it!!

You are really an amazing writer!!😊

Just loving the ff after every passing chapter...