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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Respecting him for making her feel clothed when everyone else undressed her with their eyes.

For respecting her when everyone else degraded her.

For protecting her when everyone else wanted to devour her.

For being with her when everyone else wanted to be in her.

Beautiful lines Rae... Just felt so so sorry for Khushi for living this life and happy that Arnav didn't treat her like a piece of meat and gave her respect.

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Now Icahn happily read the story.., some how like a fool I thought u r talking of Shyam...and was put off..all the best

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: msin
Now Icahn happily read the story.., some how like a fool I thought u r talking of Shyam...and was put off..all the best

But didnt I already mention Shyam was the other guy who Arnav asked to run?

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nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Arnav aur Khushi mil hi gaye...

Mamujaan seems like an interesting character ...

Just a thought ... if a face was to be given to mamujaan , who would you choose Rae?

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: nnhk
Arnav aur Khushi mil hi gaye...

Mamujaan seems like an interesting character ...

Just a thought ... if a face was to be given to mamujaan , who would you choose Rae?

The cast till now will be out soon, maybe later tonight :)

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-Emma.K-

@-Emma.K-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

This update was a lot of things.

Awesome because you finally revealed that they are indeed Arnav and Khushi, yay!

Sad because that is the reality of some people, they have to live these terrible lives and are helpless. She is in the tainted part of his world and the feeling of the absolute inability to do anything after recognizing each other was so disheartening.

But the next part was so beautiful. He covered her up and took her home. So beautiful the way you described that he dressed her while others mentally undressed her. That was lovely!

I can already tell that nothing will be easy between them. Will they be able to love one another in their crazy world? Well I'm here for the ride so I might as well just sit back and relax...or at least try to relax, it might be hard because I have a feeling you are going to put us under a lot of suspense!!

Amazing update, this is getting better and better with each one 😊

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zyanah

@zyanah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

You are right this scene and these dialogues were really remarkable.

I can still remember Simran's voice shaking a little when she said it.

I really liked the way you described Mamu-jaan's character.

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emistry

@emistry

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

You know the first person I pictured as mamu jaan is Rishi Kapoor from Agneepath! Great chapter! Ab unkhi kahani shuru hui!!

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Finally the leads unravelled. This chapter was really beautifully written and sort of had a hypnotizing effect. The words that you used to describe the scenes were simply awesome. And, yes we'll definitely wait and see what is going to happen in this Arnav and Khushi story, but for now my wish is that this story will not have a sad ending. Waiting for chapter 4 :)

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A_BA

@A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Comment for chapter 3:

So the identities are revealed! And now we even know a little about their situations.

I thought it was really interesting that Khushi could not look at Arnav in the eyes when he saw her there as one of the girls as she was ashamed, even though she knows that he's a gangster, and should be ashamed of his own profession.

I did like how she felt so protected by him, and not dirty, which is how she probably feels around all the other men around there.

It will be interesting for sure to see how they both came into their respective professions, and where they are going to go from here.

Thanks for the PM...I replied with my e-mail address.

Can't wait to find out how this story unfolds!