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shreyasonia

@shreyasonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

I loved her justification for hiding him in her house ( wonder what he was expecting).

Will be looking forwards to the next chapter as to where he meets her next.

I should mention that I am probably one of the few people who have not seen gangster movie so am completely unaware of the story line.

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Chapter two was really interesting, but still we have to find out about the man and woman here. Their conversation was, I don't know the words to explain what I felt reading that part. The whole chapter was promising us a lot of things to happen in the near future. Looking forward to read more :)

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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

the mystery continues... yet to know , who the charcters are actually...

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

oh my... from the conversation they had it doesnt look like the girl didnt know him or met him for the first time there...may be she got his glimpses around earlier and got attracted and curious too.. or may be this will turn up as totally my imagination!! we are to find it out in future..

ahhh and we are yet to find out who is who.. are we?? 😉
great going..im totally hooked..

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prpk525

@prpk525

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Loved the update. :) their conversation too.

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Chapter-2

She is smart & confident. She didn't want any violence and blood in the chawl but she still saved a man who could be responsible for violence at many levels. There is definitely more to it.

The tea making scene and the the way you described the silence scene was superb. You bring life to it making it easier for readers to visualise the story.

There must be some truth to what Arnav said about whom she fears. Before he could invade her space more she so politely told him to go.

Loved it.. Brilliant...

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Nice chapter! So they will meet again?

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

wow...so she helped him and they had a chat...i loved it...how he was so direct in her saving him...

who is she by the way...and she lives in a chawl...and doesnt worry about her modesty in order to safeguard a gangster...so is she also related to them in any way...

so he is interested in her...who would not...whatever he is a man nah...and i loved it that he had resolution of meeting her...

he meets her and im worried...i guess the meeting is all about her profession, is it so...waiting for chapter 3...

thanks for the pm and yeah sen you e mail id...would be waiting...

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arshiyakanishka

@arshiyakanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Right now i am more interested in knowing the girl.She has guts...she knew he had gun and was running away from the police...yet she saves him.Then offers him tea so nonchalantly as if he is a known guest and not an unknown gangster!Love the way she corrects him that she didn't let him in but got him in.

The guy is obviously intrigued with her and possibly makes the right guess about the reason for which she saved him.He is also attracted to her...the way he noticed each and everything of hers...beautifully done.

He makes his mind to meet her again and they are gonna meet...but in circumstances he never imagined or wished...now i am nervous and excited.