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fhussain237

@fhussain237

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Yay another story rae
Im super excited to read this ff
I love de movie gangster
With ur fanstatic writing n a great movie plot im sure this ff is going to be amazing
Pls do add me in the pm list
Cant wait to read more
Continue soon hun x
Ps I hope ur exams went well

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-Emma.K-

@-Emma.K-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

What a first chapter!

The way in which you wrote the conversation, leaves me just wondering and anticipating more! It's as if you revealed so much throughout their convo, yet told us so little!

I loved what happened between these two. Almost as if they were just trying to be nonchalant about it, but secretly hiding something underneath all their layers. Arnav's question made me smile, was she worried about his bloodshed or theirs? I'm sure she was worried about him.

From the description you have given, I am pretty sure this is Khushi! And I adore her, she knows how to answer for herself. Rae please just tell us if this is Arnav, it's killing me! 😆 Gangster is smitten and wants to see her again, I wonder how that will go! *daydreaming about it*

Amazing update as usual Rae! I seriously can't wait for the next one 😃

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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

The conversation was very very interesting.

You don't expect a gangster to behave so normally and offer to make chai in the house of an unknown girl who just saved him from the police. He was so casual ,asking her why she saved him with curiosity and curiosity alone. It caught me by surprise. Not suspicious only curious.

She was intriguing. Treating a gangster like he was a normal person. Justifying her actions saying she didn't want bloodshed. It may have been one of her reasons but clearly she knows him, the annoyance gave her away.

Being annoyed of a gangster who holds a gun. Either she is very brave or she knows that he won't hurt her.

I can't wait for the next chapter. The last lines of the chapter have made me impatient 😊

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Why did she save him? I don't buy her reasons. Their conversation felt so normal and casual, like a regular couple having tea and sharing their day with each other. But they are neither a couple nor normal. He is very observant and caught that annoyance in her eyes. They will meet again but I am dreading it based on your last line. What is she involved in in night time activities? Is she a call girl?

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

You dear, i am glad you dont remember the whole movie otherwise it would not be that fun reading this story!!! The way u write with ur own imagination and twist n turns makes it fun!!
Loved the loved!! Looking forward to next one!! :)

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

I would love to follow the story with your twists and turns...
They had a subtle conversation...they gave nothing..

So he met her again...according to the concluding line, my imagination went wild. I don't know whether I am right or nor, but I would like to be surprised...

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

I am glad I never got around to watching the movies, i prefer reading anyway.. still intrigued and am of the strong belief it is our beloved couple Arshi, such a nonchalant conversation took place over a cup of tea... but so much was observed and described so vividly by him about her... look forward to reading how he visits her each night..