Arhi FF: Unforgettable. Completed!! - Page 13

Originally posted by: Rhysenn

Loved Khushi's reasoning with Lavanya!

Originally posted by: serendipitylove

Really man...that was beautiful!
You have been able to portray the vulnerable side of arnav blended with the unrelenting ASR to make a truly heady combination!!
It makes so much sense...the fact that she feels nothing, ..she doesn't trust him..she moves from his touch..he is like a stranger...Thats how it should considering their tempestous contract marriage... But at the same time his scent and touch feels familiar, d tug at the heartstrings revealing the remnants of an old love...

The fact that she faints when confronted with the past...who would want to face the most lonely and sorrowful and miserable time of their life?

Well i'm glad he forced her to return with him...and i'm glad she's not relenting..and im glad that arnav is suffering!!

Thanks for the PM😊 Update soon!!

Originally posted by: arshi_sravy

Wow! That was intense..

'He closed his eyes wanting to protect his heart from the hurt that came from the blank honesty of her gaze. A scene flashed behind his eyelids.

Tumhe kya lagta hai mein jo khuch bhi karta hoon tumhare liye karta hoon. Tumhe agar lagta hai tumhare hone na hone se mujhe koi faraq padta hai, then forget it. You don't even exist for me'

This part was just awesome. Arnav is getting a taste of his own medicine.

The balance you are maintaining between Arnav and ASR is awesome.

Originally posted by: Maddy1270

It says a lot about the mental anguish and trauma Khushi suffered at Arnav's and Shyam's hands for her not to remember anything about her past or her very identity, despite the shocks she received one after the other! Just loved how you interspersed Khushi's present lack of recognition and trust with Arnav's cutting words, a reminder of just how much he had wronged her and destroyed her very soul! But it didn't stop her gaze from following him, eyes feeding on his tall, lean framework as if she still couldn't quite believe that he was real' the latent desire is still as strong as ever, or so it seems! You've got a real knack for depicting the emotional turmoil of your protagonists, leaving us with no option but to empathise with someone like Arnav who over and over again wronged an innocent! He needed another chance to live, just one shot at life' such poignant words of desperation and despair! Also love the fact that, despite her amnesia and the shock to her system, Khushi is alert and sensible and asking very pertinent questions' This feeling of not knowing him, not understanding him, was not new' such a confusing and frightening realisation to have! An emotionally draining update but well worth the read! I know it's his worry for her safety and his own fear of losing her that's making him force his decisions on her' but bulldozing her into doing what he wants is a repeat of his earlier mistakes' 'But just because he is Arnav Singh Raizada doesn't absolve him from having to explain why all this happened. Why were you alone on the highway. Was there someone else. Where were you going?' Now that is a true friend! 'If I am ever to discover why I've ended up like this,' she said quietly, 'then I have to go with him.' Earlier Khushi had stated that she was a coward, but this is true courage!

Originally posted by: pearl.b

Read all the parts in one go n i must say your are a terrific writer...awsome ff...loved it...nice potrayal of emotions of arshi...do continue soon...waiting...

The FF very interesting.The characters esp. Arnav is very well written.:)

everytime i read your updates, it reiterates the fact that you are an amazing writer and this story is just so beautiful

Superb story.
loved how you showed both arnav and khushi's emotions.
update soon.

I like your story. Its beautiful. The intensity is just fabulous. The way Arnav wished Khushi to hell like hell because in love one tends to become selfish. Love has been a weird mixture of sadism and masochism between Arnav and Khushi. In reality its never the fairy tale thing of happily ever after but, it has more to do with pain than happiness.

Even now Arnav is not telling the entire truth to Khushi just that she was married but didn't yet reveal that it was just 6 months. I just wonder what he is going to do when Khushi shoots him all the questions in her mind, maybe just make up stories. That's okay but what is he gonna do when he realizes its no more the Khushi he used to love (only to realize it very late), the Khushi who would trust even a stranger with her life doesn't trust him any more.

Lovely, just brilliant I don't have more words to describe this I'm really looking forward to read this one. Please continue soon and know you have readers.

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