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Atyay

@Atyay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#771

Nice update!!! 😊

It has been imperative from long back that Khushi was raped/ sexually molested/abused being a minor. But after knowing in this update that though Arnav had witnessed the whole sordid deal, has done NOTHING against the monster who did it till now; lessens his value before my eyes considerably.

I understand his shocked state when the tragedy happened, he was young then as well; though I truly wish he should have told his elders; but what about when he became a self made man? What was the use of spending his life in guilt when he had the means to punish that person! At present, am dissapointed with Arnav.

You have presented a very forgiving Khushi; but on this account I don't want to see Khushi forgiving him so easily. And I want Khushi to think from her brain sometimes rather than her heart.

Am very glad that she is getting support from Ranvijay and Dadi.

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#772

Awesome Update...

Glad Arnav and Khushi are coming closer once again...But what effect is this truth going to have on their blooming relationship...

Waiting for next update...

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sree_dey

@sree_dey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#773

dat was so so cute...khushi seems to both happy nd.. also a bit sad??, i m loving dis story mre and mre...nd DW we cn wait 4 ur updates patiently 😊

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#774

ranvijay is quite the cupid's helper here!

loving setting for his proposal. i wish they would open up to each other about the past and their feelings about each others roles in the past.

but whenever you are ready...

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#775

This was beautiful: perfectly initiated by Cupid, perfectly planned by Kushi and each one of them acted perfectly in this perfect place! You spun some magic with this chapter, starting from how scarred Arnav is by what happened to her to the Eden they found to build their dream house. He is ready to take her out of the sapnon ki duniya and make it real. I love how their conversation flowed so freely without inhibitions but the key step that they need to clear before being fully ridden of the past was not achieved. He tried to talk to her about it but they get interrupted by his damn phone. Why was this stupid thing invented? Grr. I know Kushi may not be as ready as he is to address this issue but it will have to be dealt with.

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melonie

@melonie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#776

Hi,

Beautiful update. Arnav realized that he in love with his best friend and also asked her to be his forever. That confession really made my heart melt and I loved Khushi answer too. She has always been only his :) Ranvijay seems to be a good character. He is helping Khushi and she also seems to have complete faith in him. The vibe that he gave him in the first 2 updates were different and as the saying goes 'First impression is the best impression" I am still not able to completely trust him.

Their childhood memories and dreams are so warming to read. I always love the italic part of your update. There is something so uncomplicated and simple about the flashbacks. I love it.

They both realize their need for each other and even their relationship is progressing but somewhere I am scared.I am dreading the day La will show up and then what will Khushi feel. I mean it's like she was spending intimate moments with someone else boyfriend. I hope Arnav can clear that. In his new found joy he should not forget there is La.

I am happy that he decided whatever situation comes he will stick with Khushi. That confidence is really needed because their acceptance between, family, friends and society won't be easy.

Pls cont soon...

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#777

I like this but Khushi has let go of her inhibitions rather quickly.. It was a huge class divide... Is she letting free the moment... Maybe just letting go not thinking of future.