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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the chapter. Hope the probs in real life are sorted for now. This story can also be drianing emotionally as a write for you, I guess.

This update was touching. I loved Ranvijay and his friendship with Khushi.

Loved Khushi's date. They accepted each other. But after knowing that Arnav knows about that day, what would be Khushi's response now?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update Rachel.

Rannvijay is turning out to be such a good friend to her.

Arnav and Khushi's relationship is progressing nicely. But Arnav is still unaware about Khushi's marriage proposal as Khushi's unaware of Lavanya.

Khushi flinched...hmm...had a feeling something like this would happen once when he brings it up.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was listening to Lata's song

bachpan ki mohabbat ko ,dil say na judaa karna... jaab yaad meri aaye , milnay ki dua karna...

ghar meri umeedoon ka sunaa kiye jatey hooo... ho ji hooo...
dunya hi mohabbat ki lutay liye jatey hooo..jo ghum diya jatey ho, uss ghum ki dawa karna...

bachpan ki mohabbat ko ,dil say na judaa karna... jaab yaad meri aaye , milnay ki dua karna...

sawaan mein papihay ka sangeet churaaoon gi...ho ji hooo...
faryaad tumhein apni ga ga key sunaaoon gi, awazaz meri sun kay dil thaam lia karna..

bachpan ki mohabbat ko ,dil say na judaa karna... jaab yaad meri aaye , milnay ki dua karna...

and in the back of mind all i could think of was your Arnav and Khushi... so I came back and re read the whole of till now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
updated my cmnt on page 105
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Posted: 12 years ago
Luvd d update... Arshi on a date???? Confession... Waiting 4 more...
Skiran thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome.. Superb writing 😊

Khushi took Arnav on a date to their dream place.
So, will Arnav build a house in field in the future for
his kukku?
Love the way their past is being revealed
in pieces in the present...

Arnav tells Khushi that he knows what happened that
unfortunate day... Khushi flinched but she is complex..
Want to know whats going on in her mind.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Exceptional !!!!!!!!

You are a true writter molten,,,,,, i dont know how
you get dese wonderful imaginations and wordings...
After finishing Mirage and some of my favroutie ffs ,
I thought dere isnt anithing intrsting now buttt your
Writing is truly awsum...,. No body can describe Anyavv
And kukoo's relationship otherthan you each and every,
Word of dis lovely story has a meaning and summary...
Hatts off to u molten-lava!!!!! Plzz if its possible update
Next part soon i will be eagerly waiting for u.

THANXXX
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Posted: 12 years ago
well I'm really not getting words for this update...it was emotional, it was touchy,it was lovely and it was humorous as well...annayav and kukku's friendship something to desire for...and I really love the way they accepted their love for each other...Ranvijay...that guy is really cool and I guess and hope he will be true friend for arshi

i'm kind of scared to think of the past ...well we all guessed it more or less but still...plus you write damn well...I won't be surprised if we all started visualizing...looking forward to reading the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have a strange sense of foreboding...has she blocked it out of her memory
he accepted her.. will she? or is this enough for her..
have a feeling she will back away..either by herself or by coercion


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Posted: 12 years ago
What a beautiful update.

I am so happy you decided to continue with your writing Rachel, esp. since Mirage was the best FF I've read till date...

And this one is just as beautiful.

Can't wait to read what is in store for Annyav and Kuku.

I do hope, that Naina accepts this alliance. She seems a bit on the fence and it's extremely frustrating. And of course, I hope their past does not hinder their present.

Can't wait to read what's next. You are amazing.
Edited by aamir18 - 12 years ago

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