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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

What was that

OMG it was huge huge surprise though you gave us teaser I thought you will end the chapter with teaser but no

What arnav will do now

He needs to convince her

But khushis right on her judgment

They will need to cross hurdles over hurdles to make this dream a reality

Its getting interesting with each passing day

And you gave after shock

Your on longish break for 11,22,33,44 days

Nahiii

But im glad as u said u won't abandon us in the middle

Yeah we will be happy if you g iev us one three chapters in between , me to gona be busy with brother in laws marriage so that would be helpful for me too. He he

I know im selfish

Ha song choice was superb

Laakh roka

par ruka na

Ishq yeh sarsor hai

Apni chahat

Aur kuchh hai

Ishq ki kuchh aur hai

Tere mere bas mein kya hai

Ho raha hai

Jo lika hai

Is lamhe ki khwaahishon mein

Zindagani ki raza hai

Yun hi re yun hi re

Milte rahein hum

Yun hi re yun hi re

Milte rahein hum

PERFECTO!!!!!!

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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

really a magical update.so romantic.the best birthday gift she could ever get .and the diamond earrings are thee too 😆 .but the end .hope he wont let her go .

your writing is so amazing .you are really blessed .

happy holidays .enjoy

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

rach dat was a flawless updt

oh i so love dadi she a d sweetest sweetheart... she knws hw 2 play her trumpthcards vry well

love d bond dat arnie n dadi share - khuhsi n dadi share...

d car eg vch dadi conveyed arnav n dn arnav sayng

"Dadi, promise me that when you need my help you will ask me without any hesitation okay? I'm your grandson and I have full right to know about your problems." Arnav murmured hugging his grandmother. ---- loved it

arnav s clean bowled js lukng at hs kukku... he js cudnt tke hs eyes of her while drvng ...

d fbs wre awsum .. u knw hw much i luv d fbs...

he bought her d earngs she liked dats so sweet of hm...

arnav envelopng her dr fingers entwining ... arnav winding hs arm aroung hr waist vn she held hs arms tightly...dse small gertures of arnav wr precious fr khushi n shws hw much he cares n luvs her

dat bng her fst tym dr n arnav asuring her dat he wud teach her n infact fed her

n also making her comfrtable n finally telling her in no nonsense tone

" 2 get used 2 ds"

rain alwyz does wonders no mattr wt...d way u potrayed arnav in dat cn was fab...

dn dadi calls hm bringing hm out of hs thoughts... n dn hm knwng abt her bdy...n vn he s actually standng b4 her 2 gv her an ear full evrydng js washed away

n dn dr "FIRST KISS"😳 n dn SECOND😳 n hm vshng her HAPPY BIRTHDAY n dn

"THIRD KISS" dat did wonders!!!!!😳

last bt nt d least d challenge by arnav !!!!!

nw d questn she wud nt kiss hm!!!!!!! wud she???????

dats so unfair rach stopng at dat point ...leavng vth a cliffhanger

wud she kiss hm n he wud js let go her????? wt wud hs kukku do nw ???? n if she does nt kiss hm wt wud arnie reactn b ?????? he wud kiss her?????😳

i js cant wait fr d nxt updt ...

i luv d sng yuhi re yuhi re

P.S : enjoy ur vacation rach...

Edited by diyadivya - 12 years ago

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rima

@rima

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

A salute to your powerful writing

It always makes my heart dance with joy when I see good writing

as I am from that industry (not story writing though) and every time I see someone write so beautifully I feel so full of admiration

I am so happy to be reading your work

I have heard about your Mirage but since a gangster story never held much interest for me to try it

this one comes as a welcome opportunity to taste your awesome writing

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Sarah

@devilindisguise

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Arnie hit jackpot
jab mohabbat hoti ho barish bhi hoti hai
u go ur wel needed brk
v undstn cz v also go on breaks
tc njy d trip

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

have a good break - see you when you get back .

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nnhk

@nnhk

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

This was beautiful, Although, he had forgotten her birthday he still made her day special.

Ap break lijiye janab apka haq hai, bass ab hum intizaar karein gay jab bhi aap update karein.

enjoy!

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esk1990

@esk1990

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

pfft. everyone s gng on breaks. :/

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Omg..the kiss was magical...
M imagin barun nd sanaya in u r description perfectly..
Btw...my guess is comin true lava..
Khushi was definately molested or raped by someone..