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awee.. tat was a cute kiss nd also a superb confrontation frm arnav...
but.. i wished it was a better frm khushi's side.. i dont want any villans to enter in the name of sham...
i wished dis chap cud go on long... 😭😭😭😭

Amazing rabbave + rain scene + red sari!

That was rather embarrassing 😳 and now I'm under pressure to make my review more interesting... kidding 😆 I love writing what I do and I have never commented on anything that didn't interest me. So, it is the writer... you... who has to take the credit for my reviews coz it wouldn't be possible otherwise 👏.

The first thing that struck me while reading this update was that you are very clever when it comes to physical descriptions. As they say beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Of course Arnav is bewitched by Khushi in a sari and you bring out how bewitched he is incredibly without focussing on the external features of our heroine like mind-blowing hazel eyes, porcelain skin, the mouth shaped like a... dah dah dah. This is great Rach 😊 Khushi is the woman Arnav loves, he is stunned into silence seeing her dressed up, and that is the beauty of love for me. This is beautiful because true love transcends physical beauty. Oh! Don't mistake me, for me Barun and Sanaya are always Arnav and Khushi but you are clever to leave it to each reader as to whom they want to visualize in our hero and heroine's place.

I like, ...dash that... love...scratch that too... adore dadi, almost as much as my own grand mother. She is intelligent. " a vintage car" in "original" condition? Dadi we need more people like my granny and you in this world. and of course she is hell bent on getting Arnav and Khushi together and that too while trying her best to make sure that Khushi doesn't get hurt. What a beautiful relationship she has with Arnav and Khushi ...Love how Arnav made her promise to ask what she wants and we know what she wants. She wants Arnav and Khushi together forever 😉

Who needs birthdays when we have a guy in our lives who can make a normal day extra spoecial? And that is what Arnav does for Khushi. Other than saying the three famous words ... yeah ... I do mean ... I love You ... he shows her how much he loves her through out their day together. He buys her what she likes (he could afford better things but no, our Arnav will give Khushi what she wants and it is not about her fitting into his society). Shows her his world (the food he likes and telling her to get used to it) and the best thing calling her Kukku :) Arnav Arnav Arnav ... Why don't we have more like you? I want you but for this janam I'll leave you for Khushi😉 I really love their flashblacks ... they are mmeaningful in every sense of the word and add to the story beeautifully. So, that was the scene that inspired Arnav to taste Mussourie air 😆

This is indeed turning out into an essay and I can't believe it is flowing ...

Her first kiss, his first kiss where he is completely bowled over and together they sizzle 😳. I don't have to talk too much about it. But what I did like was the way, you showed fear in her eyes ... this is so significant coz that defines Khushi. After being scarred in her past, the first reaction would indeed be fear and that was brilliant. Take a bow again rach 👏

Now it is no more a speculation as to what happened to Khushi ... the questions will be who was it? And was it someone in the family?How badlydid it affect Khushi, what happens when she knows that Arnav saw that?😡

I really understand Khushi's predicament coming from her strata of her society. Arnav may understand the implications yet Khushi would be the one to bear the brunt og this relationship.😕

Why do I feel they are going to go all the way now? Arnav is shocked with her kiss but the only way he can ensure that she doesn't walk away would be to make her feel more. That is my next prediction 😉

Wow! If the teaser was climatic, this whole update was out of this world! The realization of her as an adult female, not the child, the guiltiness over appreciating her female curves, the realization that he has rights over her as a man in love, the decisiveness while stepping out of the car and bridging the gap between their 2 worlds- uff, I don't know what to say. I am still trying to come back down to earth. It was beautiful, magical and so so sweet. He showed her and told her how he feels but he keep forgetting that she comes from a different circle where things are not that simple, where there are consequences for girls doing such things. He will have to be patient and erase her fears or sh will be left with no choice but to get married and move away. I do feel terrible for both as he will be crushed if she kiss him t proves he does not care and she is too scared, from what happened in the past and what will happen now if she gives in.

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Kushi got her birthday kiss and how...! Totally singing in the rain...scenario..! Love love the way you defined the sensations when Arnav and Kushi's lips meet...!

What a stunning chapter. Its amazing how you bring out the emotions and turmoil a person goes through..fantastic! Loved how you potrayed Arnav love for Khushi feeling love and liberation as well as possesiveness on kissing her. He confidently claimed her as his challenging her to prove him wrong. And the stunning heatbreak when she met his challenge headon and slipped oyt of his grasp and his life.
I love this ff and I am gonna miss you like crazy. I hope you do get time to give us a coupls.e or more of update

res..congo on d 5000 post...:P

You write so flawlessly 👏 and honestly I am always so lost in reading that I only realize when I see the a note from your end or the like button...

Holy Fish!!!!!! this was freaking AMAZING 😃😃

wat a fantastic beautiful update molten lava ⭐️

it was just perfect nd heartbreaking in the end...!!! Arnav wants to be with her...he is sure of it...wish she din hav to refuse him...

nd Arnav's description of his feelings...just wonderful...the best update so far..

he callin her his Khushi...nd callin her Kukku...tellin her he is her Annyav nd buyin her the jewellery...i had butterflies in my stomach readin the chapter

nd the kiss...was just soo perfect...beautiful writing

loved every bit of it...❤️❤️ your writin is just Brilliant ⭐️⭐️

nd dadi's line wat evr you r upto...😃 amazing

Happy vacations...😊 20 days i'll be waiting eagerly for your updates...take your time no rush 😊

Congratulations for Thread three nd bein a Rockerz 🥳🥳🥳

Thanks for this amazing chapter