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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

it was beautiful...im dead...not the kiss, the whole update...was just magical...

for a girl who just blew the candle all alone thinking that the witnessing nature wishes, this was a dream come true...and the best part was he forgot that its her b'day and did all that as her own Annyav...do i have to say more...i love these two...

the lunch at the five star and then buyind the diamond studs for her...and then letting her dance in the rain...then finally the mind blowing magical kiss...it was beautiful...

so will she kiss him or not...i have a feeling that she will run away from him...and i know you will do the best but please please let khushi have her happiness...

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kushipugly

@kushipugly

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

just finished reading all the chapters.

once again, a blockbuster ff from a very talented & gifted molten.

i am always being a very boring reviewer, so just want to say loving every bit of this ff.

Something bad happened to khushi & it had happened in arnav's house & that too in a short spam of time when arnav left her alone ...

Buaji is trying to persuade khushi to aggree for the proposal as someone cant wait to marry her. Is it shyam? i hope its shyam as a story of arnav khsuhi without shyam is is is a bit incomplete.

Buaji works in raizada mansion but khushi is in RM to give company to dadi, just to help in wedding preparations & other related works, then why does does she cleans table after dinner & brings ice for drinks...

The last chapter 17, i m just proud of khushi. Arnav was out of India for more than 15yrs so he is unaware of indian society n culture but khushi knows the gravity of their actions .

& this is what molten's ffs are all about as she handles every single bit of difficult life situations perfectly.

just cant wait to see how the story unfolds as not only khushi doesnt belong to arnav's society but she has a haunted past too witnessed by arnav & if this happened in RM, who was it??

my nominations for this year awards

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83250042

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-HEAVEN-

@-HEAVEN-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

OMG!!! 3 times!!!!! Ok let me digest this chappy then i ll try to write a lamba coment. This chapter deserves a nice lamba coment ;)

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Natasha

@no_username

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

fab update!!!!!!😊

poor khushi...nobody remembers her bday...

arnav bought the earrings she liked...without even remembering her bday he bought her a gift...😊

the kiss was really awesome!!!😳
kissing in rain...so romantic!!!!
thar was just magical...

but khushi is suppressing her feelings...first of all she considers herself just a servant...second of all she is getting married...wonder if she's gonna tell arnav abt the proposal...if she does what will he do???

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

That was beautiful!
I loved the restaurant part...sooo cute!
And i absolutely love dadi...wat a sweet and charming character...!
I always have a very soft and special
Corner for annyav and kukku i just love the flashbacks they are so damn adorable!
And she is kissing him by herself 0_0
The kiss was also beautiful!
The video aint playing so ill try later...
Great update! Loved it!
He brought her earings...cant wait to see when he gives it to her...

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

wonderful dear...

arnav really kissed her...

and asked her to give a last goodbye kiss...

thts really gonna be tuff for both of them to stay apart...

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NILOUFER

@BARUN-myladdu

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

i ws soso so so happy to read up d chap BUT in d end it all went sour...kyu kyu kyu...i can understnd dt u need a break too but...arrgghh at dis point of d story/.??srsly???

u js want us to die outta curiosity hai na??

in mirage 2 i remb it very well...buaji had dt call dt khushi ws out wid some criminal n she died den n der n khushi ws out wid arnav on a vacation n it ws den u had taken d break...

i m nt angry sweetie ...all dis is out of love for dis ff...

anywyz...

bou dis chap...

LOVED IT...i m sure dis is gona b wana of those chaps of mirage which i ll end up reading million times..

wat a bdy gift khushi got...

khushiz so head strong ...inspite of all d feelingz n confusion she ws sure of dis dt der is no future for dem n so d good bye kiss...

bt of course dtz nt gona happen,...*plz god no*

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: molten_lava

🤣🤣
No we'll nominate you for the Missing author 😆😆
and We may send CID to find you and force you to give us an update 😈😎

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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Beautiful update. Khushi always looked the best in a sari in the show and I am sure she looks beautiful here also. I can't blame Arnav for being completely mesmerized by her getup.

Arnav is throwing subtle hints in her way but that makes me wonder on what he plans to do with Lavanya. We are not very familiar with his equation with Lavanya or how deep she feels for him or what kind of bond they share but I feel if he wants to pursue Khushi he should come clear with Lavanya. She is also a girl and maybe she has her dreams with Arnav and I don't want her to hurt :) I feel it would be very mature of Arnav to let Lavanya know what's in his heart With Khushi taking all his attention, I am not sure how much he is thinking about La or their relationship.

Arnav teaching Khushi how to eat in a hi-fi restaurant, buying her diamond earnings and his birthday wish to her was all written exceptionally well.

Their kiss was wow and you captured that scene so beautifully that I read it a few times already ;) Arnav and Khushi will not be able to let go of each other how much ever they try. Khushi's reasons are very valid and lets see how Arnav takes this situation.

Pls cont soon...

P.S. Have a safe and wonderful vacation :)

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Broke my promise (that I won't read this til the end of my exams) to myself and read this beautiful story. Just couldn't help it. I promise to write a better comment soonish. But just know that, I loved it. You are a wonderful writer and your each word holds deep meaning. And the best part is...you know what you're writing. Okay, it's almost 3 am... promise to be back with a better comment.