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omg! dat was beauty! d way u blend d past nd present.. it was beyond perfect.. d best bday celebrtion b/w our arshi...

Wow ... that was such a beautiful chapter ...

Dadi as usual playing Cupid ... 😆
Arnav not knowing its her birthday yet making her have a beautiful time ...
buying her a gift ... taking her to a restaurant and making her feel comfortable there ...

Best of all was the rain kiss ... It just seemed so right for them to kiss ...
but the last bit ...
"If you have never felt anything for me, then do me one favour. Kiss me goodbye one
last time, and I will never bring this up between us ever again ..."
and she kissed him goodbye ... 😲
hope he is able to convince her otherwise ...

Thanks ML ... have a great break in Mars ... will wait for the next update patiently ...
Ps... was wondering if we could come along !!!???!!! 😆

Boom Boom Boom my heart is beating so loud and fast. The kiss was amazing, so innocent and the whole scene was so beautifully written. Looking forward to the next part but yes you deserve a break, so see you 'break ke baad'

MOLTEN LA ...PICTURE ABHI BAKI HAI MERE DOST

Originally posted by: Kishmish

Wow ... that was such a beautiful chapter ...

Dadi as usual playing Cupid ... 😆
Arnav not knowing its her birthday yet making her have a beautiful time ...
buying her a gift ... taking her to a restaurant and making her feel comfortable there ...

Best of all was the rain kiss ... It just seemed so right for them to kiss ...
but the last bit ...
"If you have never felt anything for me, then do me one favour. Kiss me goodbye one
last time, and I will never bring this up between us ever again ..."
and she kissed him goodbye ... 😲
hope he is able to convince her otherwise ...

Thanks ML ... have a great break in Mars ... will wait for the next update patiently ...
Ps... was wondering if we could come along !!!???!!! 😆

Originally posted by: Peda

Hi

SILENT READER FINALLY COMMENTING😳

After reading sixteen beautifully well written chapters I finally feel compelled to comment.

After being rewarded with not one but three intoxicating kisses I felt like I was under a starlit sky watching amazing fireworks.

I cannot comment on the ending though cause I'm still deluding myself that my eyes are deceiving me and that I read it wrong or that my brain has joined you on vacation so I'm simply misinterpreting what I read...

PS ENJOY YOUR BREAK AND THANKS FOR WRITING THIS WONDERFUL STORY

Originally posted by: -bazinga-

i knew it ! i KNEW IT! bas pata tha

that you will add some twist towards the end , i know you too well for it 😆

you evil woman ! 😈

and honestly i was expecting this awkwardness after the kissfrom khushi's end

arnav toh apna lover boy hain but khushi has internalized class issues and is seen to be following it at least towards the end

worry not reader this rach will give you few sad updates but then when she will give romantic ones you will have tears in your eyes and i mean it ! i did not have tears in this update 😛

but in the next few ones i will definitely have !

as for the kiss and before that i loved ! simple yet beautiful loved the way you took your own time in describing arnav's emotions and his predicament but in the end he is guy and gave into the temptation

aww i love this naive khushi who cried not because of embarrassment but from the happiness and still cares selflessly for others

i also like dadi's character - witty yet loving !

so be happy rach that you got a big comment and you ! , you going on a break ? 😡

that means no tete-a-tete via scraps ! 😭

great when you will come i will leave after few days for my longish break 😎

i will still pester till you leave so i wont wish you happy holidays right now 😛

and yeah better give us 1,2 updates in between lava

or you know the r button 😡

and in the end

I LOVE YOU RACH! 🤗

The end broke my heart. The whole update had a fantasy touch..Kushi living her dream. Their trip, Kushi treated to a lavish restaurant by Arnav, the rain dancing, the kiss..and then the reality struck her. She knows her position in society and how she will be looked down and also that he is so high up for her..and she does not want to trample her heart again..

A wonderful and amazing update, absolutely loved it.

From start to finish it was an awesome read and written exceptionally well.

I'm loving Dadi's solution to help out Arnav as it is always Khushi.

Arnav's reaction when he saw Khushi in the sari was fabulous, he could not even speak when Khushi sat in the car.

Awww loved the cute flash back of there car journey with both Arnav and Khushi sticking there heads out of the window, it was so adorable.

I can't believe Arnav bought khushi them earrings, hope he gives them to her as a birthday present, that was so sweet.

Arnav took Khushi out for a meal and Khushi was so amazed by the restaurant as it was so beautiful and Arnav even fed her that was lovely,

Khushi was feeling so happy that Arnav was making her birthday special even though he was unaware.

Loved the way Arnav was staring at Khushi dancing in the rain, he even had scandalous thoughts running in his mind.

Wow, just wow, Loved the way Arnav went and kissed khushi, the surrounding and setting was just so beautiful.

Loved the kisses they were described so beautifully and were so passionate, intimate and sensual.

Awww poor Khushi realised that it was a mistake at the end and Arnav challenged her and I can't believe Khushi kissed him, just so they can forget the incident.

Please continue soon, eager to read more.

Don't worry Hun, you take a break and enjoy your time on mars, we shall wait for your updates xx

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