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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

wow brilliant update 😳

eagerly waiting for the nxt part

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

gr8 update...

really wondering why is arnav behaving in such a way?? what did khushi do??

she has been living with him like this for two long years...!!

curious to know their past

plz continue writing it😊

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zainza

@zainza

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

G please don't stop, please please. You are back to writing after such a long time and if something inspired you there's nothing wrong with it. We all know what a talented writer you are, your other works speak for themselves and if you had lost your muse and now something has triggered you towards writing again then don't let it go.If you don't feel comfortable sharing this story here then you may put it on a blog and let us know.Good luck with your writing :)

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kavzz

@kavzz

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

loved it
donno what made arnav to treat khushi like that
it seems that both hide their feelings from eachother
looking forward to read more
continue soon

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nature-lover

@nature-lover

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

This story see very complex, complicated and sensitive to deal with as it runs high ib different emotions, feelings of both Arnav and Khushi. But I'm just loving the way you are narrating it very maturely.
This update just got me hooked to this FF and very intriguing update making me want to read more of it.
Loving it and waiting for the next update

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

lust from khushi side that a first he hates her and he dose not want to her to leave him he just want her to stay in the marriage to punish her can't wait for the story to unfold awesome update

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sushilkas

@sushilkas

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Awww!!!! amazing story!!!!! very captivating!!! both hiding their feelings!!! arnav trapping khushi in d enticing web of pleasure n desire!!!! great update continue sooon!!!! pls pm me da futre updates!!!

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gmsk

@gmsk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

OH MY GOD... THERE SEEMS TO BE SOO MANY COMPLICATIONS BETWEEN THE COUPLE...

CURIOUS TO KNOW WHY ARNAV HATES HER SOOO MUCH , AND DOES HE WANT TO KEEP HER WITH HIM SELF ONLY TO PUNISH HER..???

LOOKS AND GESTURES CAN BE DECISIVE AT TIMES...

EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE CHAPTERS TO GET UNFOLD...

M THANK U SOO MUCH 4 THIS QUICK UPDATE... 😊 😊

Edited by gmsk - 12 years ago

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libbyferns

@libbyferns

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Nice chapter, well written. Looks like it was lust from both the side and that Arnav was forced to marry Khushi to fulfill it. You also mentioned that Arnav thinks that she is Daddy's spoilt little girl and from this I gather that is she is rich. There was some kind of blackmailing involved from Khushis' family side that forced him to marry her and that makes him hate her. Now this is what, I could gather from the story so far, well I may be wrong.

Inspiration is never harmful or wrong, please continue.