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Interesting. And quite sad. I guess Khushi fell in love with Arnav at first sight, and her dad somehow manipulated him into marrying her. How her Jiji's family is connected to this is something I don't understand. But if he has a son with her, how does that change anything? questions, questions
P.S. Will wait for you to update Memories and Second Chances
PPS- will B and you please continue Shades and First Impressions? I love all your works. And Shades is what got me here :)
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People should really think twice before they accuse others. I've never read the said book, but I trust you enough to know that you wouldn't steal the story. As for the concept being similiar- a lot of stories are similiar. It could be because of same life experiences, or preferences, whatever. Every thing doesn't amount to plagiarism . Please continue writing :)

I think I held my breath throughout that chapter. That was just...holy shit, mind-boggingly amazing! I am just...speechless Gargee.

Hey gargee
I dont think this plagiarism as many here have based their stories on movies and books and other concepts of IF authors
Please continue
You're writing is beautiful
And also the person who informed you of plagiarism didn't even mention it nicely...
Anyway, your work and writing is wonderful in itself that you have simply no reason to plagiarise
You are just using the idea of it and not the whole words and words of the author
And after all this is what fan fiction is
And thanks DT for leaving this story open...

Such a wonderful update, loved it

loving this story! cant wait to read more! n the first chapter was just awesome! y so much hatred from arnav for khushi!!

VERY VERY INTERESTING ... i came across ur story first time & what i read , loved it very much. Now i m craving 4 more. waiting 4 update.

Wow... looks like they must have given into their lustful desires and he was forced to marry her !

Please don't discontinue.

Please ladies this is our Arshi version of the story. Looks like a very good story.

Please continue, waiting for a update.

Please don't

Please don't

Please don't

Please don't...😭

Wow, I am hooked on, that was truly dark, did he loose his freedom by marrying her or the love of his life. It was truly dark dark...using her responses and showing her who is the master, and the parting shot as leaving with a feeling of unwanted

But you also mentioned fear, so he wants her here for his own reasons and does not realize yet, why did you mention it hmmm

Please continue...and I can tell it is not plagerized with a big not

And I read the book after you mentioned it

Hope you find your muse so you can continue the other FF

Eagerly waiting for next update