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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

hey i woke up n thot y didn't i get ur pm...lol...

m addicted😆

u deserve it sis...

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Luna

@luv_panipuri

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

read all the chapters in one go. Loved it. Thanks for the pm.

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Deepti

@deepti1906

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Madam ji, you write so awesomely that comment to karna hi padta hai..😉

will be waiting for the update...

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
Heliii<3 So I'm too lazy to quote and I'll just reply the points that need replies :) I LOVE YOU DAMNIT<3 And I'm always confused about ASR! Lol, I mean you make me want to hate him, but come on! He's ASR I CAN'T hate him. Also whenever someone hates him they don't think of the why behind his actions! I mean his anger does lead to bad things, but think about why he is always so anger and why he always look for a chance to run away from emotions like love.
But don't get me wrong, I don't feel any different from Khushi. Both are uber dynamic characters :)
And yippee *mwah* for longer updates :)

Hehehehehe

Main hoon hi lovable! Hain na? 🤣

Hum bhi aapse.. I love you dammit! ❤️

I don't HATE ASR, honestly. And I agree with you, absolutely.. That people tend to disregard the story behind the facade.. So even though I don't say he is right, I think he is redeemable and deserves love.

After all, Arnav needs our love.. *drooling* 😉

Longer updates=sore fingers

But me too likes!! 😆

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
LOL! It's amazing how I comment right under my res without realizing it :P

Anjanaji, tussi great ho! Tohfa qubool karo!! 🤣

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

@Anarocksick:

OK, your replies were too long to be quoted without incurring the wrath of the forum-codes, hence I decided to just reply..

For the comment on Page 9:

Zombies do sleep.. After they are full, done eating, burped and all that.

Which brings me to the question, what/who did you eat?

Your vishesh tippani merited a vishesh mention. Hence the follow up!

I agree, Khushi should have given him more cold shoulders. You know? Bhaav khaana and all?

ASR is the mask Arnav built not only for his face, but his soul, to protect himself. Its as if they co-exist in the same breadth, sometimes Arnav is let out, while most of the time ASR is unleashed to the world.

For the one on page 11:

I know Arnav is dumb, but please mujhpe toh bharosa rakho! *Hint hint*

I am not a wonderful writer..I just write what I genuinely feel. And good people like you appreciate it! Doesn't make me good, just makes me loved 😊

When a fellow is so attached to his mother and loses her, it doesn't make sense that he doesn't respect or even love Khushi's parents! That part in the show had bugged me a bit, and I decided to change it.. He is human, after all. What he never got from his own parents, he got from hers.

He is a guy, in the end. Adam. Up against Khushi's delectable Eve. A better man could never resist! So he "gives in" to his desires 😉 but not totally, other wise Khushi would have started wearing bags to cover herself around him!

I know that song! I really admire Shubha Mudgal ji, and that song is really really beautiful!

I am so happy that my update, MY UPDATE reminded you of that song!!!! 😃

Originally posted by: Anarocksick
Finally edited my comments. Sorry for being late...

Comment for chapter 2 on page 9
Comment for chapter 3 on page 11

😎

Done deal, babes! 😆

*sorry, I just wanted to try saying that, once*

Edited by hmtxyz - 12 years ago

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

@kajulove:

I am really glad you liked the update!

Shyam shall pay..don't worry. Karma exists in my world at least! 😆

Next update shall be up in a couple of hours, so you'll find out soon!!!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

@aman3354:

That part was close to my heart, too. Many a times there is a lot going on that we hide within us, and funnily, life puts us in such circumstances that we have to confront what we feel, but cannot reveal it to the world..This was one such situation!

Thank YOU, for liking what I write!! 😃

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

@cheesemad:

Thank you Komal!!!

I wanted to show a slightly different side of Arnav.. and I am glad you caught on to that! You know, you need to get in line for hugging him and all..

He is hot property!!!

Suraj toh bhaiya East se hi nikala hai, parantu Arnav bitua zara der se uthe hain!

Originally posted by: cheesemad
yup helee u r absolutely correct...i follow american standard time here in india😆...obsessed with winchesters specially the big brother😳

Haay! I love Dean!!

And I should call you resident-NRI! 😆

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

@Deepti1906:

🤗

She loves him with a love that sees no flaws, find no fault, knows no bounds...

So true!!! But isn't that what we know to be true love?

No ego, no complains.. just.. love!

The day Mr. Raizada decides to take "control" of her sleep patterns, I doubt Khushi will get ANY sleep at all! 😉

As I said in an earlier comment, Arnav is not a monster. He is mightily flawed. But I don't think he is not redeemable. This is my attempt at his redemption!

Wait for the next update to know if the last line means something 😆 *evil laugh*

P.S.: How were your exams?

P.P.S.: I am a sucker for compliments, you give them, I take them with wide open arms!!! 😃 😳

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

@P4rveen12:

Thank you so much!

Khushi wears a mask of happiness and craziness, Arnav wears one of hatred and indifference. Both their masks slip at times, usually in tandem. And that's when the their chemistry shows!

Him calling Garimaji amma, I always wanted him to do that on the show, so now I get to do that in this story!!!

Arnav shall be hit with the truth soon. What's left to be seen is when exactly, and how he reacts to it.

Thank you so much for a wonderful comment, and your love and support for me!!!