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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

wow..
i just loved it
you did complete justice to this story..
beautifully written!!

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

The way Khushi answers back to all his innuendos is hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing.

Then the kids are simply cute.

Khushi's flashback where she remembers the confession night clears all the things because I was wondering what actually had happened. So you cleared it there.

And then their private moments were described so decently (most of it is for the reader's to imagine 😉).

And then her announcing the arrival of the baby and him visiting the Temple.

There couldn't be a better ending. 😊

Well written.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Hey...

Nice update...

Oh no.Last chapter...

Hope u write more new stories !!!!!

Thnx for the PM though !!!!!

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Blondiexzy

@Blondiexzy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Wow that was awesome beautifully written enjoy reading it.

Thanks

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soophie

@soophie

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

That was an lovely story...came across this ff today itself n read all parts in one go...

Simply loved the ending...beautifully written

Thanku for such an amazing story

Stayblessed

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SAM32

@SAM32

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

just came accross ur story!!! awesome!! u picturized all the scenes sooo well.. loved it

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

one word SUPERB!
loved the ending Arnav going to temple i didn't see its coming amazing.
This was beautiful Helee all the loops were properly closed specially Shashi Gupta's.
Good to see Anjali getting married again she deserve to be happy and we can trust Aman with it.
oh before i forget makeover of Mamiji by her grand children too good.
Loved "Baat ta" talks of kidies exactly how it would have been.
Thanks for the best version of ipk.