*Awarded* ArHi SS: If Only | NEW Note P43 - Page 22

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Just ound this story and read six chapters at a go.

Your take on situations taken from the serial was interesting.

Loved the way Arnav repented for his wrong doings.

I also loved his equation with Khushi's family.

I do hope Khuhi will forgive him and accept him as her soulmate.

Maybe Anjali will also find a new beginning with Aman?

Originally posted by: deepti1906

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comment for chap 5 edited on page 26..
will edit my comment later for last chap. reasons mentioned in last comment...😆 🥱

Edit-

After 14hrs of much needed sleep, I guess now I can think more precisely...😆

The ending couldn't have been better...👏 A perfect ending I would say...

I'm happy that the scoundrel was no more in their lives... But felt really awful when I read about Kaavya... I can't even imagine how everyone must have felt and especially Anjali...😭 That was another huge blow in her life after shyam but I'm glad she found Aman...😊

Arnav and Anuj were absolutely adorable together...😃 Anjali wouldn't have come to know about Anuj 'Baat Ta' because it sounded more like the brand 'Bata'... So Arnav need not to worry about that...😆

And Arnav has created a lill minx.. now, had he?? That part was... was *Ahem*...😉☺️ I guess by now Mr. Raizada must have taken 'contol' of Khushi's sleeping patterns...😉🤣

Amongst the list of many, I wanted to she Khushi's Babuji fit and fine but the show ended before that...😔 But everything is fine now...😊

Her Babuji has recovered from paralysis, Anjali is Happy with Aman, Arnav beleives in God

and Arnav-Khushi are together forever and are going to have their little bundle of Joy...:')

That was really really Awesome...👏

Thank you for such a wonderful SS...🤗 But I'm really going to miss it now..😔

So, when are you planning to write more, my dear sista...??😉 I am hoping to see you posting your wonderful work soon...😃


P.S- I'm glad that your result was good...:) Keep Smiling and Kepp Writing...😊

XOXO 🤗

Originally posted by: aman3354

LOVED...LOVED...LOVED..the ending...end better than this is impossible...You did a wonderful job 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...when i was reading this update i was thinking that whether you will write about Arnav's faith in God or not ? U wrote about it & that also so BEAUTIFULLY...LOVED it..a lot..🤗Till now i had read stories where arnav bowed in front of God when Khushi is in ICU..U know that type of emotional scenes.. This was toatally different..!! 👍🏼 For this wonderful ending i want to say 3 words in my native language- 'KAMAAL KAR DITTA...!!'
Daily...when i return home from my classes..the first thing i used to do was to open ur bookmarked thread..!! Oh God..!! I will miss this story very very much..!!
I just want to know that whether u r going to give us another os or may be a ff..!! If u r.. I'll very happy...!!
Yaa..we will stay connected..!!
Lots of Love..!!❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

Wow beautiful journey of our lovable arhi
loved it
mindblowing ending
thanx for the pm
Twinkle

Originally posted by: yappingduck

😃

Originally posted by: kajribarunsobti

awsm yaar
I mean wowxxx
ahem part was awsm☺️

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Wow. Just wow.

One word to describe that update, BEAUTIFUL!!!

From start to finish the update was amazing and brilliant and written perfectly.

Awww loved there sweet and adorable encounter at the start, Khushi teasing Arnav and leaving him turned on was fantastic.

So happy Anjali married Aman and there youngest boy has learnt Arnav's signature word "bhaat taa" so cute.

The flash back was so emotional and touching Arnav finally admitting to the truth and apologising to Khushi, it was written exceptionally well and in my opinion the best part of the whole update.

Wow the last part at the poolside was so hot and passionate, written beautifully.

Loved the way khushi described Arnav at the end it was amazing.

Honestly this story from start to finish has been outstanding and mind blowing, each update has been a brilliant read.

Amazing writing and thank you so much for writing the story, appreciate it very much.

I disagree with you, where you have mentioned in your note at updating the story at stumbling pace, you updated this story at a very fast and super pace, lol!!!

Thank you so much for the PM's

Looking forward to reading new stories from you in the near future xx

Originally posted by: sk2405

The way Khushi answers back to all his innuendos is hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing.

Then the kids are simply cute.

Khushi's flashback where she remembers the confession night clears all the things because I was wondering what actually had happened. So you cleared it there.

And then their private moments were described so decently (most of it is for the reader's to imagine 😉).

And then her announcing the arrival of the baby and him visiting the Temple.

There couldn't be a better ending. 😊

Well written.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Originally posted by: soophie

That was an lovely story...came across this ff today itself n read all parts in one go...

Simply loved the ending...beautifully written

Thanku for such an amazing story

Stayblessed

Originally posted by: soophie

That was an lovely story...came across this ff today itself n read all parts in one go...

Simply loved the ending...beautifully written

Thanku for such an amazing story

Stayblessed