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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Love the ending nice update write some more OS,FF in Future. Thanks for pm

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Lovely ending. Do write again !

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Wow beautiful journey of our lovable arhi
loved it
mindblowing ending
thanx for the pm
Twinkle

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damon fan

@-damon-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Hey, I'm commenting again 'coz ur end was mindblowing that i couldn't stop myself from saying about it..!!
Coming to rest of the chapter..as always it was superb..!! 👍🏼
Anjali & Aman got married..they had a son & she's expecting 2nd...hmm...too fast..!! [=)]
Payal & Akash's daughter Piyaali..i loved the name..!!
Conversation b/w arshi behind the pillar is 2nd best thing that I loved after ending...
The poolside scene...it was Hot..!!
I LOVED the whole part..!!
Lots o Love..!! ❤️❤️

Edited by aman3354 - 12 years ago

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

beautiful!! what a perfect ending where the atheist sees god in the miracles of life through his love for his wife...

beautiful and truly a lovely insight in to the characters we all loved and lived with...

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

awesome finale !!! 👏

the change in Arnav, Khushi's love and its all so perfect !!! beautiful work dear !!!

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chocodilla

@chocodilla

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Beautiful!
The way he asked her forgiveness is heart touching!
The end is perfect!
Loved it!❤️

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

wow loved the ending dear 😳 beautifully written...

finally ASR bowed his head in front of the Lord's idol... and there starts the new journey...

keep writing

thanks for the PM

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

awsm yaar
I mean wowxxx
ahem part was awsm☺️

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Wow. Just wow.

One word to describe that update, BEAUTIFUL!!!

From start to finish the update was amazing and brilliant and written perfectly.

Awww loved there sweet and adorable encounter at the start, Khushi teasing Arnav and leaving him turned on was fantastic.

So happy Anjali married Aman and there youngest boy has learnt Arnav's signature word "bhaat taa" so cute.

The flash back was so emotional and touching Arnav finally admitting to the truth and apologising to Khushi, it was written exceptionally well and in my opinion the best part of the whole update.

Wow the last part at the poolside was so hot and passionate, written beautifully.

Loved the way khushi described Arnav at the end it was amazing.

Honestly this story from start to finish has been outstanding and mind blowing, each update has been a brilliant read.

Amazing writing and thank you so much for writing the story, appreciate it very much.

I disagree with you, where you have mentioned in your note at updating the story at stumbling pace, you updated this story at a very fast and super pace, lol!!!

Thank you so much for the PM's

Looking forward to reading new stories from you in the near future xx