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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter-3❤️

New Friend!

|Manvi's POV|

What the hell? What is he doing here in front of my house? Is he not even gonna spare me on Sunday's now? "Vir…ra..rat!? What are you doing here?" I asked. I can see the same confused expression on his face as mine. "Well what are you doing here Manvi?" He asked back not bothering to reply to my question. "Ugh, this is my house" I replied. I could see his expression changing from confusion to surprise to shock and then he screamed "WHAT???? No this can't be possible how can you be my neighbor??" He asked. Now it was my time to get shocked. "WHAT??? Neighbor? You?? Is some crazy game going on?" I asked. "Well I am supposed to say that" he mumbled to himself. "You what?" I asked not able to hear a single thing. "Vira do you know each other? Are you friends?" asked a girl about my age. Must be one of his new dumbshit girlfriend. "No way Jeevs she is nothing to me except trouble" he said with annoyance on his face. "and you are nothing more than a dog poo" I replied loud enough for him to hear. "What did you just say shorty?" he asked coming closer to me. "Woah cut it guys!" the girl interrupted our little heated discussion by coming in between us. "Vira you aren't supposed to treat your neighbors like this" she said glaring at Virat. He huffed and then I thought maybe it's won't look good if someone sees me talking to a guy and then maybe tell it to my dad or mom about it, so I invited them inside. They came in and Virat fell on the sofa and spread himself as if it is his own house where as the other girl sat down politely on a chair. "Hi I am Jeevika, Your new neighbor and this is Virat my brother." As soon as she said that I clicked my tongue and felt guilty about assuming her to be his girlfriend. "Hi Jeevika, I am Manvi" I said offering my hand to her and she politely shook it. I actually like her. She is so different unlike her brother. "Hi I am Virat and not pleased to meet you." He said annoyance clear in his tone. "Same here" I replied with a fake smile. "So you and my brother know each other?" Jeevika asked. "Yeah we are very good enemies" Virat said. "Virat!" Jeevika shouted at him punching his arm. "What I am just saying the truth" Virat replied rubbing his arm. I giggled at how hard Jeevika punched him and soon Jeevika joined in.

~After an hour~

"It was really nice talking to you can I have your number?" Jeevika asked and we immediately exchanged our numbers. "We should definitely go out for shopping one day! Boy! We've got similar ideologies" She exclaimed and I giggled nodding. "Okay then we will leave so bye take care." She said and woke up Virat who was fast asleep since he wasn't interested in our discussions. "Bye!" I waved one last time before I closed the door.

|Jeevika's POV|

Wow Manvi is so awesome and cool. I don't even understand why Vira hates her. But I am happy that I got a new best friend and we can go shopping ya! Yah I am a big shopaholic but I buy only valuable things. ;) I brought all my bags and stuff to my room. Boy! This room is huge and all mine. It even has a walk in closet. Yay! I love you Mom and Dad. I was in my very own lala land when I heard my cell vibrate in my pocket. I took it out and checked it. It was a message from him. As soon as I saw his name I couldn't help but blush. Oh boy the effect he has on me. But ugh what am I doing no no I am supposed to be angry with him he forgot to reply to my message this morning. Just as I was about to go for a shower I felt arms snake around my waist and hug me tightly. I immediately recognized who it was. It was him. He came close to my ear and whispered "I am sorry Jaan." I turned around and felt soft lips on mine.

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Tried a long update but couldn't caz I am little busy now and my birthday is coming (this Saturday) so out for shopping and stuff……Thank you for comments and likes

Love You All!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...
Thanks for pm nd also for update...
Don't worry... We can understand...
U enjoy...
Nd
update was nice...
Superb one...
Like maanvi nd jeevika...
Continue soon as u get time...
😊
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update Audrey...👏👏...loved it⭐️⭐️...so jeevika and manvi are frds now😃...virat and manvi encounter as new neighbors was nice😉...so jeevikaa has a bf...i guess it viren...looking forward for next update...will be waiting...thank u so much for the pm😊take care audrey😊
wow saturday is ur birthday...🥳

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.love jeevi,she seems very nice unlike her brother.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
doesnt matters will spare u for a short update becaz its ur birthday yayyy!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳 lol the update was awsome soo manvi and jeevika like eachother thts good!!!! and virat rofll he is such a treat to read character 😉 thnx for the pm cutiee update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update!!!! wish u a very hapi birthday in adv. hav a blast.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yaar too good..
Loved it..
Pleasee continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
jeevika and manvi best friend
really luved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...in this update manvi seems to be strong😛...as in clg she was scared of virat...and waow virat is one unpredictable charater...he throw himself soo casually on the couch...n even drifted to sleep🤣
and jeevika is sooo nice to mannu unlike his vira😆
ohh and she also have a bf😉
cont sooon and thanx for the pm😃
happy birthday to u in advance dear🤗🤗

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