|Fear, Torment and Loathing|Virman Story Ch6 Pg 38 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice update i like it
wow virat and manvi are neighbours now
excited to know how that will go
please continue soon and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update I like the jeeman combo... Virat being virat hope to see more fun n challenging scenes... N drag that one month a lot more thn it's needed ;) happy birthday in advance hope u have a great bday enjoy have blast... And when u r done with ur bday hangover do write n update soon.. N ya pm
Me too will be waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great again 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update ...
so jeevs and mannu frends now thats nice
and virman knowing they are neighbours there reaction was fun ...
and he dozed off wen jeevs and mannu were talking 😆
but here virat didnt seem to be soo insulting ...whats with that now..
update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was an awesome update. I guess now burst will annoy her more now since they are now neighbours now plzzz continue soon with more romance
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Edited by pink1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter-4❤️

Shocked!!


|Virat's POV|

"Mom I am going to Manvi's house bye." I shouted to my mom who was busy in the kitchen. "Bye Love and no fighting" she said. "Yeah whatever." I mumbled and closed the door. Confused aren't you? No way. What you guys are thinking is absolutely wrong. I and she are not friends. We are still the same old enemies. Well what do I say the professor in my college called me and Manvi this morning and told Manvi to give me Math classes everyday caz I get horrible grades in Math. And obviously since Manvi is the class topper she was asked to give me tuitions and also the fact that the whole class got to know about me being her new neighbor. It was so embarrassing everyone were like "Ooo The popular guy next to a Nobody eh?" Whatever I just ignored all of it.

|Manvi's POV|

~In the shower~

Wow! Excellent! God I never knew the fact that you love to give me surprises/shockers. First Virat turns out to be my neighbor and next I am supposed to tutor him. Ughh! If can anybody please lend me a poison bottle? Well I shouldn't be cursing my luck so much now! I turned off the shower and wrapped a towel around me. I checked the time. Still half an hour more for the devil to come.

I came out of the bathroom and heard someone say "Aye Shorty!" I knew who it was and screamed a lot and lot until a hand covered my mouth and pushed me to the wall. "Wow you do look sexy in a towel'..Towel Girl" he said smirking. I pushed him back and he fell on my bed clapping his hands like a retarded seal and laughing. "That wasn't so funny" I said. "Now what the hell are you doing in my room? Don't you have any manners and why are you half an hour early?" I asked irritated. "Well I had nothing to do at my home so just thought of walking in here and irritating you for sometime before the class starts" He said still laughing. "Now get the hell out of here I need to change." I said. "Hey hey cool! It's okay if you even change in front of me I wouldn't mind." He said smirking. I pushed him out of the room and locked the door. Disgusting!

~After 10 minutes~

I opened the door and invited him in. He came in and started examining my clothes. "Ew you have no taste in fashion" He said. "I don't have to look beautiful near you" I said with a fake smile. "Whatever" he mumbled and sat down on my bed. "Okay so now I am gonna start with the very first basics for you since you know nothing" I said. He glared at me and nodded. "Do you at least know the basic algebraic formulae?" I asked. "What's Algebra?" He asked confused. "God this is disgusting you don't even know what's algebra how do you expect me to teach you everything from the beginning." I asked highly irritated. "How did you even ace your school?" I asked very much surprised about the fact. He had an expressionless face which made me more irritated. Okay Manvi calm down calm down. "Okay so first let me teach you the formulae" I said talking a marker and writing down the formulae.

~After two hours~

"Virat that's nice you surely have got some brains but you just don't use it." I said happy about the progress he made just within one day. "Yeah Thanks" He said smiling and the next second frowning "Did you compliment me or mock me?" he asked and I laughed this time knowing I did both in one statement. I checked the time and it was almost 8. "Virat I think you should be leaving now its 8" I said. He nodded and got up from the bed and collected his books. "Tomorrow I will conduct a test for you in what I taught today so come prepared" He frowned but any way's agreed to it. "Bye Towel girl" He said smirking. "Bye Mr. Idiot" I said smirking and shut the door on his face. He is so weird!

~

The Next day morning

I was searching for my car keys but I couldn't find them anywhere. Where did I keep them? I opened my cupboard and a huge pile of clothes fell down. I am already late and now this. I bent down and picked up my clothes. I didn't bother to fold them I just threw them in my wardrobe like that. That's when my eyes fell on a huge old album. I opened it and I saw my dad and my mum's wedding photos. They were looking so happy. Dad was looking so dashing in that Tux. Mum she was looking gorgeous too in that creamish colour dress. They were so happy together. If they were so happy then why did mom had to leave dad? Why did she have to leave me? I them found some letters on the backside of the album. They must have been written a long time back since it looked so old. I opened it and started reading them one by one and that's when I got the shock of my life.

What The f**k????

How is this possible? I can't believe it!!!???

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OMG what happened to Manvi? What did she see? But I know what she saw! ;)

But you guys will have to wait for looong time to know what s it!

I am thinking about making a banner for my story can anybody help me out with it?

If you can then please contact me through pms or scraps!

The next chapter I am gonna update on the the 25th page!

Wow 62 likes is seriously awesome!

Keep commenting and liking like this!

Bye Love You!

h-e-r- m-o-m i-s f-a-k-e


Guess what i just revealed a part of the truth!

Yes I did!

Where?

Just right above the statement "Guess what i revealed the truth!"

Couldn't find i right?

That's because i painted it White! Muhahahaha!

I am evil!

LOL!

but that's true!

and if you read it don't tell it out keep it as a secret! shhh!


How is this banner guyss???


PLEASE DON'T COPY OR STEAL OR SHARE MY WORKS

Edited by Eleanor.Audrey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
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sorry for late unresing...
Abt the updates..
It was awesome...
Liked this one also...
Thanks for pm...
Ur story going to fab...
Waiting for page 25...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMgg!!!!! her mom is fake !!!!!!!my god!!!! that's y I was thinking how a mom can keep her mouth shut knowing what is happening to her daughter even though it's her husband molesting her but no mom will bear it! loved the update! Viru - mannu are on the way of being frenemies! lol! loved it and ya I know more suspense in the store! love hope u update soon!
super upd8!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lol I got ur white mark lettering H-e-r-m-o-m-i-t-a-ke buahahhaha I was thinking that tooo! Yay virat getting tuition from her woohoo nice now he will be nice to her! N towel girl ROFLOL... It was cute BUT SHORT 😡 Plz update soon!!!! Hope ur 25th page reach soon

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