|Fear, Torment and Loathing|Virman Story Ch6 Pg 38

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Really nice concept. Child abuse n sexual harassment u r connecting two dealt sin into one! Good attempt.. Really looking forward to part 3! Love the povs... Hate the step dad n her mom n my bad boy already falling for her ? Hmm interesting... I wish u write more .. Cuz dil mange more n it's too short ;) do pm me I will
Be waiting <3

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princess84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

what kind of mother is she man feel so bad for manvi but hey atleast now her neighbor is going to be virat can't wait to read more

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titali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

update soon its superb

Edited by titali - 12 years ago

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

this is a superb story... 👏

would love to read it 😃 poor manvi have to suffer from all this 😭 it is very touchy 😭 her step-dad is just a monster for sure 😡 and her mom i don't think so she is her mother 😡 so rude and hate manvi so much for what 😡

her college life is hell and that to bcoz of virat 😕 why does he bully her 😕

but now he is her neighbour 😃 and when they will get to know what will happen 😃

thnk god those monsters went away for a month 😆 a relief to manvi 😊

anyways update asap 😃

waiting eagerly foe the next update 😃 do pm me plz 😃 when u update 😊

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

sounds pretty awesome

the two updates were really nyc

ive sent u buddy

do pm me when u update 😊

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-GayathriK-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Wow!! I just read both the parts! Its very interesting and emotional. Maanvi's fears and emotions are just too sad. The way she is bleeding from inside and had lost all her hopes of leading a better life. The torture she is going through everywhere she goes. It just touched me soo much!

Virat some where or the other is unknowingly attached to maanvi, its just that he is not ready to accept it. He is just blind folded.

All in all i just loved the concept you came up with. Entirely different and new to me.

Continue soon! 😊

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

I am waiting u r story to read update soon

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Sofia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Plz update quick!! Eagerly waiting!!!

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js1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Very good nod how sad for manvi! If you start Pms plea include me thank you

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Wooow an amazinggg storyyy
m luvinggg...it i h8
how virat bully's manvi nd
her step dad my god manvi shud complain actually..
Plzzz update asap nd pm me