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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

It was really very emotional.. This is one of my fave songs and I ahve imagined TR on this song.. I had listened to this song when I was haunted by the thoughts of Swayam separating Tr.. Until those three days passed and Monday came or rather tuesday came.. (22nd jan) I was haunted by the thoghts of swayam separting TR and I kept listening to this song that no matter what Rey will love Taani.. no matter what he'll be with her..


Loved the update!! Do update soon and do pm me!


I too love this song so much...😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Tahira-2013

omg i loved sooo much and i had even tears in my eyes😭😭 poor taarey hates tauji soo much 😡

you are really and brilliant writer 👏
try to update soon 😊


Thanks a lot, Tahira...
Look who is speaking...😆😆😉You are such a brilliant writer...😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Mon_tr

Its emotional,n awesome update..

Thanks a lot, dear..😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Hello my dear friends...First of all thanks a lot for liking and commenting on this story...Love you all so so much...
Here is the next part...Hope you all like it...

Part 4—

After 2 years—

Rey was sleeping peacefully on his bed….He was smiling in his sleep…Taani just came out of shower and saw Rey smiling in his sleep…He looked so cute and adorable, she thought…She could not control her desire to feel him.. she went towards him…She sat near him and caressed his hair softly..Rey felt her touch and was smiling…She moved further and kissed his forehead…She was about to go when he quickly grabbed her tightly…His hands were on her waist and she was on top of him…

Taani—Rey, leave me..What are you doing, Rey??Just leave me…

Rey—Arey, aise kaise chod doon…Pehle to khud aakar mujhe kiss karti ho aur ab jab maine tumhe pakda to tum keh rahi ho ke chod doon.. No ways, Taani…

Taani—Rey, chodo mujhe…Mujhe jaana hai, main late ho jaoongi..Plz..

Rey rolled on the bed with her and now he was on top of her…

Taani-Rey…

Rey---Shhh… Taani..

He placed his finger on his lips….And pulled her closer and closer…His grip around her waist became tighter and tighter…Both lost themselves completely in each other…They were in their own world of love…Their bodies plastered with each other…They came closer…So much closer that they could feel each other's breath….Only an inch gap was left between their lips when.. Taani gave a bite on his cheek and quickly pushed him and Ran away…

Rey—Ouch….Taani ruko, taani…

Taani- Not so easy, Rey….

Rey—TAANI!!!

Rey woke up from his dream….Yes, he was dreaming…That was the only way by which he could meet Taani and feel her presence around him from the past 2 years. He was lonely, he was shattered since the day she left him….He was broken…He had lost his charm….The main reason of their rift… His passion was no more his interest…He least cared about it…Even if he danced, it was to feel her..remembering their first dance together…

He was lost in his thoughts…He got out of his bed and looked around….The room was full of Taani's photos….Gosh!!!He missed her so much…He was dying to see her, to meet her, to talk to her, to hug her…But, he couldn't…No one knew where she is…No one….Not even her own brother….A tear escaped his eyes thinking about her..

He walked towards one of her photoes and touched it..

Rey—Kahan ho tum Taani…Where are you???Plz. wapas aajao… I need you badly…Plz. Taani… Kyun chali gayi tum mujhe chod kar.. Main jaanta hun tum bhi mujhse bohot pyaar karti ho… Plz. Taani, come back.. I promise, main tumhe bohot khush rakhoonga… Plz. Aajao…

Suddenly, he heard someone screaming his name outside his room…he went out to see who had come…

It was Sharon…

Rey—Sharon tum yahan itni subah???Kya hua??Sab theek to hai na??

Sharon—Haan, Rey..Sab theek hai…Main tumhe kabse call kar rahi hoon… Tum mere calls receive kyun nahi kar rahe ho???

Rey—Wo sorry, mobile silent mode par tha… Bolo kya hua??

Sharon---Kuch nahi.. Chalo jaldi apne bags pack karo… Hame London jaana hai…Hume bohot mindblowing offer mila hai…and we can't loose this oppurtunity…

Rey---Nahi, Sharon….I will not come…Tum jaanti ho na ke main…

Sharon—Sab jaanti hoon isiliye keh rahi hoon…Tumhara mind bhi thoda divert hoga…and moreover we need you Rey…Your friends need you and you should support them…Agar Taani yahan hoti to wo bhi yehi kehti…At least us ke liye to chalo.. Plz..

Re y—Theek hai…I will come…

Sharon—very good…Now let's get ready.. We have to leave in the evening..

Sharon had always tried her level best to take care of Rey…She always tried to divert his mind…She was so upset to see her best friend so shattered… Moreover, even she had lost a very dear friend of her…She tried really hard to find out about her whereabouts…But she couldn't…

The whole D3 group left for London in the evening..They had become really very famous and successful..They performed in big events and business parties…Many other changes had taken place.like SwaRon, ViHa, NiMi, RiMar were a couple now…Rey always wished that Taani could also be there by his side…But, it did not happen…

In London—

Taani had become a really very successful business woman…She had setteled in London as her Tauji had told her to..He had strictly told her not to remain in contact with anyone from D3 group, be it Swayam or Rey…Or else, she knew what he could do..So, with that fear in her heart, she never tried to contact any one… She missed them a lot… And, Rey.. He was her life, her soul, everything and At times she wished that she could just go and hug him… But, but, she always remembered Tauji's warning… SO, she controlled her desire…She was a strong woman for the world, but how would the people know that this strong woman was so much in love with someone that she always became weak for him…He was the one who affected her so much that she always forgot herself when she thought about him…

Taani went to a room… Yes, just like Rey, even she had a room full of his pictures…She too felt him around her through his pictures…She took one of his pictures and sat down on the floor…

Taani—Rey, main aap ko bohot miss karti hoon…Taras gayi hoon main aap ki smile dekhne ke liye..Aapko hug karke aapko feel karne ke liye..Pata nahi main aap ko yaad bhi hoon ya nahi… Par main aap se bohot yaar karti hoon…Aur marne ke baad bhi aap hi se pyaar karoongi… I love you… Aap ko pata hai Rey kal wo din hai jab main aap ko chod kar yahan aa gayi thi…Main kal ka din kabhi nahi bhool sakti…Mujhe maaf kar dena aap…I love you..

Suddenly, her mobile rang…It was an important call…She brushed away all her thoughts and received the call..

Taani—Yes, bolo kya hua??

Manager—Mam, jo deal aap ke liye bohot important thi wo hamari company ke saath hone ke chances hain.. Aur clients ne kal Ek business party rakhi hai..Wo chahte hain ke aap wahan jaayien..

Taani(thinking)—Kal to mere liye bohot mushkil hoga..Main apni feelings kaise hide karoongi..But, this deal is very important,,Agar main nahi gayi to hamari company ko bohot loss ho sakta hai..I think, I should go..

Taani—Fine, I will go..

Manager—Ok, mam..Main abhi unhe inform kar deta hoon…

Taani---Krishna ji, plz. Meri help karna.. Mujhe kamzor mat hone dena. Plz…

Next day—In the party

It was a very big party… Many successful Businessman and Business woman had come to attend the party….Taani too reached there… She was dressed in a beautiful gown..She looked just like a fairy who had descended directly from heaven…All eyes were just fixed upon her…Praising her and astonished by her beauty….

The D3 team too reached there…Yes, they had come to perform in this event…Rey felt very restless…He felt that something is gonna happen…He felt good after so many days or we should say years…They proceeded towards the party…

Taani excused herself to freshen up…She felt something different about the atmosphere…

The team's performance was announced and by the time Taani came back, the performance was over…Everyone loved their performance..And today, even Rey was at his best.. He didn't know how, why, nothing…He was so confused by his feelings..He just left the party and went outside…

Taani too was feeling weird and restless so she too went outside to realx herself….

Taani was at some distance from rey…His back was facing her….She stood their looking at the sky, feeling the cold breeze with her eyes closed…Here, rey felt a sudden urge to look back..He felt her presence….

He turned and the next moment what he saw froze him then and there itself… He was seeing the beauty, his, love, his Taani after 2 years…Today, yes, today she had left him…And, today they were here again..Face to face…She looked so beautiful…With the breeze caressing her face and her hair coming on her face…He was just staring at her…Not able to believe what he was seeing…

Here, Taani opened her eyes to see Rey standing there infront of him staring at her…2 years…She was seeing after such a long time…Same structure, same face…Nothing had changed about him…He could make any girl mad behind him…Tears escaped their eyes to them…Unknowingly they started moving towards each other..They so wanted to hug each other so tightly…Slowly, slowly, they moved towards each other…And…

Hello..Everyone...😆😆That's the end...Sorry..Plz. don't kill me for stopping at such a point...😆😆

So, my dear friends..Plz. do like and comment for the next update..Hope you liked this part..


With loads of love

Ayesha...😛😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
res!!

UNRES!!!
First i dint understand ..rey sleeping on bed n taani came out after a shower n i was like .. haww😲.. did i miss any chapter!!! i read the entire para n shook my head n went back to the front page to see whether i missed any chapter .. but no... then i came back n then i found the sentence after 2 years😆 😆...actually , in the first case i was so excited to read it first as soon as u updated n in that haste i didnt find that sentence ...😆 😆..but then after that i started reading calmly..
awww i was blushing reading a cute adorable lovely taarey😳 .. i was smiling through out but again ☺️😳 .. zor ka jhatka .. he was dreaming😒... i thought everything got fixed in the 2 year gap but no!!!!! i was so sad reading that he was dreaming😒...
then sharey part was so beautiful .. sharon takes care of rey... n when i read that sentence thatthey were going to London.. a ray of hope rose in my mind .. i knew they would meet there.. n yeyyy as i expected they met .. wowww the way you described their meeting after so many years .. it was so so so beautiful .. but urggg.. me angry on you ** katti** .. why did you stop there... i was smiling n dreaming taarey meet n urggg came the line that was end .. mmm i wannna read further*** puppy face****

Edited by disismeenu4u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
wowww really amazing loved it n rey's dream was beautiful n hw much he miss taani felt sad for him... n there taani also miss rey a lott... totally amazing update do continue it soon n pm me😊
Edited by radhu-taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Kya yaar story ko ese moment p lake stop kr diya.
Awesome update.cntnu soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u

res!!


UNRES!!!
First i dint understand ..rey sleeping on bed n taani came out after a shower n i was like .. haww😲.. did i miss any chapter!!! i read the entire para n shook my head n went back to the front page to see whether i missed any chapter .. but no... then i came back n then i found the sentence after 2 years😆 😆...actually , in the first case i was so excited to read it first as soon as u updated n in that haste i didnt find that sentence ...😆 😆..but then after that i started reading calmly..
awww i was blushing reading a cute adorable lovely taarey😳 .. i was smiling through out but again ☺️😳 .. zor ka jhatka .. he was dreaming😒... i thought everything got fixed in the 2 year gap but no!!!!! i was so sad reading that he was dreaming😒...
then sharey part was so beautiful .. sharon takes care of rey... n when i read that sentence thatthey were going to London.. a ray of hope rose in my mind .. i knew they would meet there.. n yeyyy as i expected they met .. wowww the way you described their meeting after so many years .. it was so so so beautiful .. but urggg.. me angry on you ** katti** .. why did you stop there... i was smiling n dreaming taarey meet n urggg came the line that was end .. mmm i wannna read further*** puppy face****


Awww...Thanks a lot...You know what you are so cute...hehehe..😛😛
I know. I know..I haven't seen you..😆But you make me feel that...😆😆
Your comment has made my day...
Thanks a lot...
So sorry, for ending it over there..😉😆
Love you loads...😛
Keep smiling...😛
Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Thank you so much,,,😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mon_tr

Kya yaar story ko ese moment p lake stop kr diya.
Awesome update.cntnu soon.


Thanks a lot...😛😛
And sorry, for ending it over there...😆😆

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