TaaRey SS- Meri Jaan Ho Tum (Last Part 9 updated)

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NSohi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Aww very emotional ... Poor Taarey :(
Plz update next part soon ...

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Reytanni4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Wow dear beautifully written
Poor taarey can't see them in so much pain
Update soon

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Ayesha, really sorry for the late reply dear..
I am a bit busy thats y. Just now read chapter 2.
I loved the way u presented that chapter.reys blindness, taanis pain , sharons care, taarey outburst, sharons outburst all where so perfectly written .. Loved the entire chapter. Cant use smileys as i am not at home n i am using my phone n its quiet old but a 100claps from me for writing so beautifully. Will read part 3 soon n wud definitely comment
stay healthy n keep smiling n keep writing

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Sonya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Awesome update.

Fed up with this touji though.

continue soon.

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

part 3 was really emotional.. Wanted to smash taujis nose.hitler!! Hitler!!😡..
It was so beautifully written, rey realizing his mistake n sharon was a good friend here .. Poor taarey really felt sad for them n the song added to the intensity of the situation..
Lovf the update ayesha

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radhika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

wowww really amazing loved it very much n very emotional 😭😭 do continue it soon n pm me

Edited by radhu-taarey - 12 years ago

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Ayesha Hasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u
Ayesha, really sorry for the late reply dear..
I am a bit busy thats y. Just now read chapter 2.
I loved the way u presented that chapter.reys blindness, taanis pain , sharons care, taarey outburst, sharons outburst all where so perfectly written .. Loved the entire chapter. Cant use smileys as i am not at home n i am using my phone n its quiet old but a 100claps from me for writing so beautifully. Will read part 3 soon n wud definitely comment
stay healthy n keep smiling n keep writing

No, dear..Plz. Don't be sorry...😛😛

I am really glad that you could comment...

Thanks for liking it...

Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago

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Ayesha Hasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Natasha.
Omg this tauji is too much, why don't he shoot himself with his gun bloody Hitler. I was teary reading this chapter bits so sad poor Taarey I feel so sad for them. This chapter was wonderful...love the way u expresses Taarey pain and how hurt they are. Plz reunite them

Thanks a lot...I am really glad that you liked it...

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Ayesha Hasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: patie
aww it was so emotional 👍🏼

Happy that you liked it...😛😛

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Ayesha Hasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY
Rey realising his mistake,Sharon pushing him to go & speak to Taani ws commendable.Gosh! Taani lft hm! Flashback,Taauji slapped her,It ws a shock fr me.Yet again fr Rey's rescue she is sacrificing.Rey is flng so vulnerable.I hope everything sort out sn.By d way d sng selection ws apt.

I am really happy that you liked it...😛😛