TaaRey SS- Meri Jaan Ho Tum (Last Part 9 updated)

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Hey! Guys... I am Ayesha.. And, I have decided to write a SS on Taarey which is on the current track...This is my first attempt.. Hope you like it...

PART 1-----

Sharon walked through the girls locker room. She had just read the comments made on the college website about Taani.. She was fuming with anger..She understood the reason as to why Taani was behaving like this.. But, she was stopped by some voice'She wondered who could it be'She peeped in to see Taani speaking on her mobile.

Taani - No, Tauji, my decision won't change now. I have already told you that I don't wanna marry rey'..I don't love him..

She saw the painful expression on her face when she said that'She was shocked.. How could Taani tell that.??? There were many questions running in her mind..

While she was pondering on her questions, she heard loud voices from inside'She saw a shattered Taani on the ground crying loudly..She could see the pain clearly on her face

She immediately ran to her and hugged her.. taani was shocked with the sudden hug' She saw that it was Sharon.. She tried to control herself but she couldn't.. She broke down' She cried her heart out.. Sharon was really worried to see Taani like this..

Sharon- Taani, what happened??? Tell me?? Trust me you will feel better.. Plz. Tell what happened?? I just heard you talking on the phone' Why did you say that you don't love Rey?? Why Taani?? Answer me God damn it.. Answer me..

Taani-(Shouting)-I did it for Rey's sake. I want him to be happy.. I don't want him to lose his passion, dance all because of me.. I love him Sharon, I really do' But, I am not selfish to become an obstacle for his passion'

Sharon-Taani plz. Tell me everything'What happened??

Taani-(flashback):

Taani was at home thinking about all the events happening in her life.. Tauji came..

Taani- Tauji aap, iss waqt..Kuch kaam tha??

Tauji- kyun kya main tum se milne nahi aasakta kya??

Taani- Arey nahi Tauji aisi baat nahi hai.

They sit and chat for a while..

Then..

Tauji- Maine tumhari maa se waada kiya tha ke main tumahara khayal rakhunga..Tum kab itni badi hogayi pata hi nahi chala..Ab bas tumhari shaadi ki fikr hai mujhe..

Taani(thinking) Tauji se Rey ke baare main baat karke dekhte hain.. but Taani you have to be careful..

Taani-Tauji, kya aap mere liye ek dancer ko pasand karenge'

Tauji(angry)- No ways, Taani.. Aise kabhi nahi hosakta,, Samjhi tum'

Taani- Agar wo mujhse sacha pyaar karta ho to??

Tauji(Angry)- To use tum se shaadi karne ke liye Dance chodna hoga to main approve karsakta hoon' But, why are you asking this?? Kahin tum'

Taani- nahi tauji, aisa kuch nahi hai..

Tauji- Waise Taani, Main soch raha tha ke tumhari shaadi agar Rey se hojaye to???

Taani(thinking) Agar aisa hua to Rey ko dance jo ke unka passion hai wo chodna hoga.. And I can't do that.. yes, I do love him a lot. But, I can't be selfish..

Taani- Nahi tauji, Main Rey se shaadi nahi karungi.. I don't love him..

Tauji- Thik hai beta, Par tum ek aur baar sochna iss bare main..

Flashback ends..

Taani (crying)- I can't do this Sharon. I can't.. Main unse bohot pyaar karti hoon.. Unhe agar Dance se khushi milti hai to main unse door jaana pasand karungi laikin I can't bear it that he has to lose dance because of me..

That's why, since these many days, I am acting like a girl with no passion, no dreams and no aim in her life other than becoming Rey's wife' Like, that's the only aim of my life' A selfish girl..So that Rey hates me and goes away from me..

Sharon(crying)- Oh! My God Taani, You have been bearing so much all alone from that much time.. I am sorry that I called you selfish. But, you are so self-less that you are even ready to lose your love only for his happiness'.

Taani- Sharon, plz. Promise me that you won't tell anything about this to anyone especially Rey..

Sharon-But Taani..

Taani- Plz. Sharon..

Sharon- O.k, but on one condition..

Taani- what?

Sharon- You have to come to my house now. I can't leave you alone in this condition right now..

Taani- no Sharon..

Sharon- TAANI!!!

Taani- O.k, as you say..


So, here it is... How was it??? I know there was no TaaRey in this part.. But, in the next part, they will be there..

If you want me to continue, plz do hit like and comment...

And, one more thing, it's gonna be a sad and an emotional ending...Sorry.. But, it will show the strong love of TaaRey...

Forgive me for my mistakes...


Index

Chapter 1 - page 1

Chapter 2- page 5

Chapter 3- page 9

Chapter 4- page 12

Chapter 5-page 19

Chapter 6-page 27

Chapter 7-page 35

Chapter 8-page 45

Chapter 9-page 54

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i loved it pls continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvvrimar

i loved it pls continue 😊


Thanks a lot, dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was really what I would call OMG !! Like every twist in the story ... Taani saying no to maary Rey and she purposely pretending to have no passion was like WOW ... Thank God Sharon found out everything ..
This is really exciting ... I wanna see how this unfolds, Please do continue this
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res/unres
Nice part 1 was sad looking forward to read some happy taarey scenes
Edited by TaareynSwaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
I loved it finally Shaani connecting the way the should be, as Taani is Swayam's sister and Sharon is Rey's BFF
please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

This was really what I would call OMG !! Like every twist in the story ... Taani saying no to maary Rey and she purposely pretending to have no passion was like WOW ... Thank God Sharon found out everything ..
This is really exciting ... I wanna see how this unfolds, Please do continue this


Thanks a lot, dear for this lovely comment... I am glad that you liked it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shamanbk

Awesome update

I loved it finally Shaani connecting the way the should be, as Taani is Swayam's sister and Sharon is Rey's BFF
please update soon

Thanks a lot...😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ayesha love the concept, I wish something like this happen in D3. Amazing start plz continue... I feel so sad for Taani
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hurry up yaar continue asap and pm me

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