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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome dialogues,everything is amazing dear plzzz update soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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IT WAS A VERY EMOTIONAL UPDATE.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Your thought r unique yaaar!!!!!!!
u making this more interesting ...
Now can't wait long plz do early as u can.
Good job
Some people have to read this and learn from this.šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ajaved

Great chapter loved it cant wait to read furthur update soon wanna know reys reaction :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shamanbk

Awesome update

what will Rey do now
how will he convince Taani that they have a future
please update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha

Really awesome chapter, I'm really glad that Rey found out everything ... Now I'm really waoting to see Rey's reaction ..
Pls do update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: natali1999

hury up yaar update and pm me when u do

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natasha.

Emotional update... It was beautifully written u did a wonderful job can't wait to read.more

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks a lot, everyone... I am really very happy with your likes and comments... Thanks a lot for encouraging me to write further...I am really sorry that I am not able to reply to all of your comments.. But, I am really very thankful to you...
Friends, here is the next part... Again, it will be emotional... Plz. don't kill me for this...I hope you like it...

Part 3---

Rey was shocked' His anger was replaced by utter guilt' He was numb'He just couldn't think about anything else other than Taani' He remembered her tears'He could feel her pain now' he thought that how could he be so blind that he could not see his love struggling'He cursed himself for not being with taani when she needed him the most'Instead of supporting her and being with her in those difficult times, even he blamed her, shouted at her'

He was crying'He was very angry at himself'He was not in his senses at all..

Rey(crying)-Sharon main aisa kaise kar sakta hoon.. how could I sharon' Main use apni jaan se bhi zyada pyaar karta hoon aur maine hi hurt kar diya' I did not believe in her.. I blamed her, shouted at her, argued with her when she was not at all at fault' I called her selfish' Jab ke usne meri khushi ke liye apna pyaar sacrify kardiya'Main ne ye kya kar diya Sharon' Maine use kitni takleef di hai na' Us ne mujhse itna pyaar kiya aur maine use badle main kya diya.. Bas takleef aur dard aur kuch nahi' Maine use kabhi samjhne ki koshish hi nahi ki Sharon' Bas apne bare main hi sochta raha.. Kabhi hamare bare main nahi socha..Kabhi uske bare main nahi socha.. Ye tak janne ki koshish nahi ki ke wo aisa behave kyun kar rahi hai.. Aur maine kitni aasani se break up ki baat kardi.. Ye tak realise nahi kiya ke is sab ka us par kya effect hoga'Kitni rudely baat ki hai maine us se' Mujhe is ki punishment milni hi Chahiye' Maine apni Taani, Apni zindagi ko kitna hurt kiya hai, to main khud ko bhi punish karoonga, yes, I will punish myself'

Rey had completely lost his senses' He started hitting himself'He threw all the things that were around him in frustration..Broke all the glasses..And in the process, he was badly hurt'

Rey(Crying+hurting himself)'I'm sorry Taani.. I am really very sorry.. I know ke maine tumhe bohot hurt kiya hai' Plz. Mujhe maaf kardo'Itna sab hone ke bad tum mujhse nafrat karne lagi hogi.. But, plz. Mujhe maaf kardo, plz, Taani'plz'

Sharon who was seeing all this was astonished' She saw Rey who was totally broken'He was very guilty'She saw how deeply he loved Taani that he was punishing himself for hurting her'

Sharon tried to stop him from hurting himself'He was badly injured'His hands were bleeding'

Sharon'Stop it, Rey' Just stop it'What's wrong with you???Have you lost it??Look at your hands..You are bleeding badly'

Rey'I deserve it Sharon..I totally deserve it'I hurt her.. She was right.. I am a very bad human being' who can give only pain to others and nothing else'I..

Sharon'Shutup Rey!! What do you think you are doing?? You are gonna hurt her more by hurting yourself'This is not the time to do all this'You should go and talk to her right now'God knows what condition she might be in at the moment.. You should go to her Rey..Just go'

Rey-But, Sharon after what I have done with her, I will not be able to face her'

Sharon'So, will you be able to live without her?? Answer me??

Rey'No, I cannot live without her.. I just can't..

Sharon'Then??

Rey'I think you are right' I should go to her.. Thanks Sharon'Thanks for making me realise my mistakes..

Sharon'Stop it Rey, I am your best friend and it's my duty to show you the right path.. Now, stop crying and wasting time upon me.. Just go'

Rey runs to TaaYam's house..He rung the door bell, but nobody opens the door.. So he goes to Taani's room through the window'

But, there was no one inside the room.. Infact, the room was empty' He didn't find the things that were usually kept in the room..The teddy, the photos, nothing'For a moment he felt blank.. But, he then quickly moved towards her cupboard to check.. And, he was shocked.. There was nothing, other than Rey's corner.. His eyes were filled with tears reflecting the pain which he felt inside him' She had left' She had left him'He stood there like a statue'

Rey'Taani, you left me.. You didn't even give me a chance to apologise for my mistakes.. Why Taani, Why????

Here with Taani'

Taani was walking on the road'. She was completely broken from inside' She was going away from her life'

Taani(crying)'I am sorry Rey.. I have to go away from you.. I can't put your life in danger just because of me'I love you Rey.. I love you..

Flashback'

Taani reached her home after her break up with Rey'.She directly went to her room and was crying a lot'Her eyes were red'

Taani(crying)- Maine aaj aapko bohot takleef di hai Rey.. Main bohot buri hun.. aap bohot ache ho' Main aap ka pyaar deserve hi nahi karti'.I am sorry..

Just then she heard the house of the door being closed by a loud bang.. She got scared'

She quickly wiped her tears, though pain was clearly visible in her eyes'And ran outside..

She saw that her Tauji was really very angry and was screaming her name at the top of his voice..

Tauji(shouting)'TAANI!!!! TAANI!!! KAHAN HO TUM!! BAHAR AAO ABHI!!!

Taani(scared)'Tauji aap?? Aap itne angry kyu lag rahe hain?? Kya baat hai??

Tauji'Tum ne mujhse jhoot bola'Tumne mujhse ye baat chupaayi ki tum Rey se pyaar karti ho..Pyaar!! wo bhi ek dancer se'

Yes!! Tauji had come to know the reality'

Taani was shocked' She couldn't speak.. She didn't have words..

Tauji(angry)-Taani answer me..Maine tumse kuch poocha??

Taani(scared)-Wo Tauji'wo

Tauji'Answer me'

Taani- Haan Tauji Rey ek dancer hain aur main unse Pyaar..

That's it.. Tauji couldn't take it anymore and slapped her'

Tauji-Tumhari itni himmat'Ke tum ek dancer se pyaar karo..Aur us Rey ko to main nahi chodunga'Usne mujhse jhoot bola..Mujhe dhoka diya..Aur to aur usne tumhare saath'

With this he went to his room and took out a gun.. he was really very angry'

Taani-tauji plz.Isme Rey ki koi ghalti nahi hai.. Maine hi unse kaha tha ke..

Tauji'Tum chup baitho taani' tum ne mere Bharose ka ye faiyda uthaya.. Main tum dono ko..

Taani'tauji plz. Aap ko jo saza deni hai mujhe de do plz. Rey ko chod do' Plz. Tauji Plz..

She was crying badly..And was pleading to him..

Tauji'Theek hai.. Main Rey se kuch nahi kahoonga' par tumhe meri condition maan ni hogi..

Taani-Tauji aap jo kahenge main karne ke liye tayyaar hun.. But Plz, rey ko kuch mat kijiye..

Tauji-To theek hai tumhe abhi Mumbai chod kar jaana hoga main jahan bhi kahoonga tum wahin jaogi.. Aur tum Rey se door rahogi' Samjhi'

Taani --Ji Tauji..

Flashback ends..

With Rey---

He was crying badly'

He saw one photo of Taani and took it.. He was caressing the photo'

Open this link for the song plz'Plz. Do play it in another tab for the effects..Plz.I request...(I personally love this song very very much. So I am using it here..)

URL= http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0p-KrloMDPY( Do play it)

Tu jahaan main wahaan

Sang sang yu chalu tere

Jaise tera aasmaan

Tu jahaan main wahaan

Sang sang yu chalu tere

Jaise tera aasmaan

(Rey was crying badly looking at the photo.. He was missing her badly.. He wanted to meet her..)

Jo dhup nikli chaya ban jaaunga

Jo ho tu akeli saaya ban jaaunga

Jo uljhan mein ho mann main behlaaunga

Tum aa gaye ho toh jeena aaya hain

Khushiyo ka tumne ye jaal bichaya hai

Khoya hai khudko ya sab kuch paaya hai

Tu jahaan main wahaan

Sang sang yu chalu tere

Jaise tera aasmaan

(He was remembering all the beautiful precious moments he had spent with Taani..The way he had promised her to always take care of her and support her'He remembered the mitwa sequence where he had fought for her..He cursed himself for failing to take care of her'He still remembered how she had hid behind him when the boys were speaking about them.. The way she looked at him as if telling him that now that you have come everything will be fine.. He still remembered her intense gaze while he was fighting.. He could feel it')

Ho gham ke baadal mujhpe tham jaane de

Bechainiyo ko mujhse takrane de

Dukhti ho koi baat mujhpe aane de

Dil sochta tha ke koi apna ho

Koi raaz na ho jo uss se rakhna ho

Aankhein na kholu main shayas sapna ho

Tu jahaan main wahaan

Sang sang yu chalu tere

Jaise tera aasmaan

(Taani was also remembering Rey' She was also thinking about their memories.. The way he consoled her and supported her when Shivam was man handling her.. The way he stood for her and fought for her.. Their beautiful valentines moments' The way they felt complete with each other'She saw Rey smiling at her.. She walked towards him forgetting all her pain.. She moved her hand to touch him.. But he disappeared.. She was imagining him')

Both fell on the ground' They both were shattered' They were incomplete without each other' They wanted to be with each other'. See each other and feel each other,, But couldn't'

Both screamed..

Rey(crying+screaming)'TAANI'.

Taani(Crying+screaming)'REY'.


Hope you like it...Plz. Don't kill me for this..As I had said in the beginning, This is gonna be emotional and painful..Even, the ending will be sad..So, Plz. cooperate...Plz. Hit like and comment..You all encourage me a lot...

With loads of love

Ayesha...

Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg this tauji is too much, why don't he shoot himself with his gun bloody Hitler. I was teary reading this chapter bits so sad poor Taarey I feel so sad for them. This chapter was wonderful...love the way u expresses Taarey pain and how hurt they are. Plz reunite them

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