[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 95

Originally posted by: Huma0301

Aaawww nice n cute update
love manvi n vihaans bonding
you make me love virat more n more with each update
hes an adorable bad boy
really wanna kno manvis pregnancy secret
virat ka bacha hai bhi ya nahi... Really wanna kno
eager for next chappy
update soon faria dear 😉

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

This is time i m too late !!!! sorrryy yaaar !!!! first eid preparation n all later college !! everything !!!! psssh :/

chapter 22 _ awwieee viren n manvi convo !!! tat was really sweet !!! :D i m so happy too coz u praised ur boy :P
vihaan ki toh baat hi alag hai !!! he is smart n sweetheart !!!! ❤️ why is viren hiding tat diary !!!🤔

OMG !!! virman in each other arms !! ahem ahem !!! Kya mast scene tha !!!😉
he was playing piano on her bare stomach☺️ yeh kya ho rahaa hai :P my god !!!😳 manvi ko toh hyper honaaa hi tha !!!! :D 😉 ahem ahem !!!! :P

virat reaction was hilarious😆😆 thank god he didn't remember anything !!! :P
tat part was damn funny !!!! lamaao !!!! i m still a man !!!! tat line cracked me up !!!gosh i can't stop laughing !!!!

i loved fatty n viat convo !!! :D it is sweet !!! their bonding is nice !!! :)
manvi ignoring virat !!! lol !! but virat is virat !!! he will never ever give up !!!! :P


Chapter 23_ fabulous update !!!! starting from vihaan n manvi !!! My god !! how much i loved them n their bond !!!! vihaan is really naughty n sweet !! the way he was teasing her !!!! so cute !!!! i loved it !!! awwieee vihaan manofying manvi was super cute !!! Lovely ❤️

wat the !!! who is this varun 😲 thank god manvi ne engagement thor diyaaa !!!!! :D

haww blackmailing manvi !!!! vihaaan !!!! puraa apne chachu pe gayaa hai 😛 now the diary is in manvi hand !! Great :)

ok the dance part !!! tat was awesomely written !!!! i could juz imagine everthing in front of my eyes !!! nice selection of song !!!! lol no one can stop him !!! kya mast character hai !!! :P

abt the pregnancy !!!! i can't see manvi carrying other child !!! so keep ur evil brain aside of let manvi carry virat baccha only !!!

umm abt the age i m 19 !!!!

waiting for next part !!! looking forward for it !!! Continue soon Faria :P :D

Originally posted by: luv_nishal

yayyy..got an update finally...phew...

so lemme think kaha se start karo n kaha end karu...😆

...i liked the way u started n the way u ended..👍🏼...

i liked the taxi wala whole thing a lot...😳

den the way u described virat's pov n manvi's pov...u conveyed their feeling vry well...each n every word conveyed their inner feeling so well dat i was like 😭

bas ab undono ko milwa do..😳hehehehe...

nice update in all...

update the nxt part...waiting for it..😉

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

yeh unres kab hoga ??