[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 97

it was amazing

amazing update

Originally posted by: Faria12345

.

u update a '.' ?????

Awesome Update...I loved it a lot...

i am literally banging my head!!!!

Originally posted by: virmanhus

i am literally banging my head!!!!

i lost track and i cant find where to start anddd faria there are alot of things going on in the story

which am i to talk abouttt?????

um freaking out here

- the court scene,, u just made virat to come out vt an excellent and handsome prosecutor

- manvi was never raped... dat i thought before as a doubt nd yet chose to not ask u and even now everything if fishy

see the thing is the moment i tell u my doubts and guesses u make it a big fat NO in ur next chap,, so not going to give u dat chance

u have opened alot of stories in ur story,, nothing is finishes and all are paused.. u play a little here a little dere and leave us confused yet damn interested and get us sticked together vt ur story.. its such a brilliant quality of an epic writer

the brilliance in this story is dat 'one vl never get anything cleared unless or otherwise the end of the story' its soo interesting!!

- still watever happend between virat and dat girl, i cant remember her name is fishy and hidden, i dont know if u chose to never tell it or are saving it.. let me wait

- the present whereabouts of virat!! better to keep my mouth shut and never demand and never question u in dis,,, coz u vl becom evil and do something vt his disappearance!!

- manvi isnt carrying virat's child?? who's her fiance? why is she breaking up vt him? let her be a surrogate than bearing some other's child!!

- vihaan,, naughty yet smart boy!! his quick answers are hell enjoyable!!

- wats v goa and virman?? such attachment??

thousands of questions are barging in and i cant place my finger on the exact things as i lost track..

vl constantly comment and may put things dat i remember in future!

till denn take care!!

same queries I have bt the problem is even I Dnt want to ask faria anythibg...she will turn evil...n make sumthibg else...hehe isliye i keep my mouth shut...I thing is confirmed...she has manages to keep ua hooked to dstory...keep up faria...

Originally posted by: virmanhus

i am literally banging my head!!!!

i lost track and i cant find where to start anddd faria there are alot of things going on in the story

which am i to talk abouttt?????

um freaking out here

- the court scene,, u just made virat to come out vt an excellent and handsome prosecutor

- manvi was never raped... dat i thought before as a doubt nd yet chose to not ask u and even now everything if fishy

see the thing is the moment i tell u my doubts and guesses u make it a big fat NO in ur next chap,, so not going to give u dat chance

u have opened alot of stories in ur story,, nothing is finishes and all are paused.. u play a little here a little dere and leave us confused yet damn interested and get us sticked together vt ur story.. its such a brilliant quality of an epic writer

the brilliance in this story is dat 'one vl never get anything cleared unless or otherwise the end of the story' its soo interesting!!

- still watever happend between virat and dat girl, i cant remember her name is fishy and hidden, i dont know if u chose to never tell it or are saving it.. let me wait

- the present whereabouts of virat!! better to keep my mouth shut and never demand and never question u in dis,,, coz u vl becom evil and do something vt his disappearance!!

- manvi isnt carrying virat's child?? who's her fiance? why is she breaking up vt him? let her be a surrogate than bearing some other's child!!

- vihaan,, naughty yet smart boy!! his quick answers are hell enjoyable!!

- wats v goa and virman?? such attachment??

thousands of questions are barging in and i cant place my finger on the exact things as i lost track..

vl constantly comment and may put things dat i remember in future!

till denn take care!!

I'm so glad to see u again!! How r u girl? Hope things r right in ur side :)

Virat n the other girl/Kristina u will know about her in next chapter n whatever happen Btwn her n virat u will know soon (virat will tell manvi :p) :p
U sud not stop do the critic n point out the things u know cuz sometime u all remind me that I have to unfold that part :) n sometimes gives a head start to evil mind for making it worse :p
Manvi n baby.. Forget te baby.. Like I said b4 it won't do any harm :p
Thank u for ur feedback appreciated a lot!!!! xo Xo n yes one of the answer for a mystery u already answered in ur comment :p it's just u don't know which one haha :p n I'm gonna play a bit :p
Next chapter end of rape case :)

Originally posted by: luv_nishal

same queries I have bt the problem is even I Dnt want to ask faria anythibg...she will turn evil...n make sumthibg else...hehe isliye i keep my mouth shut...I thing is confirmed...she has manages to keep ua hooked to dstory...keep up faria...

R u scared of my evil stuff? Don't be cux I will do it anyways whether u like it or not :)

Awsm updt...I want jeremy to burn in hell for eternity... arghhh.. cont soon nd thnks fr th pm...:)

TEASER

He tilted his head from left to right like a psyco patient, scanning her facial features cooly
"so where we gonna do this? Garage? Hotel room or just here? Save the time n start the entertainment?" asked her in Casanova style.
She was still startled n was watching him without blinking. He removed the hairs from her shoulder n put it aside " Forget about the past events n meet me at the hotel room.. U cud be my play girl so meet me at the hotel room. 1 n 2 I'm gonna undress u... 3 n 4 u undress me.. Mmm wait I can do that by myself.. n then we gonna freak the night. I will make this one night stand so meet me at the hotel room.." n he kissed her neck n started to whistle the rest of the song. (hotel room by pitbull)

Doesn't make sense i know but it will in the update :p