[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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anamica5

@anamica5

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#921

it was nice... the part of manvi nd vihaan was really nice!!

loved da update.. thnx for da pm nd continue sooonn

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#922

Superb updt...fab...i enjoyd every bit of it...but ur quotations were missing this time

ahhh my baby vihaan...he hs a answer fr everything...all thnx to his chachu n his holy book...lolll...i m sure his mumci will also learn something frm this...virat secret of life is going to open in front of her soon...

Now the big Q mark is on manvis pregnantcy...again whose baby she is carring inside her...if that baby is virats then they must hv met few months back...but i dont want to think abt it much...bcs i knw there is no point either...i m sure reality will b far away frm my silly assumption...bcs i cant compete with ur evil brain...*hands down*:p :p

loved the dance scene...song selection was awesome...pls carry on this ignorance v/s attention game bit more...i loved when heroin ignores her hero...ehahaha...obviously girls cant surrender themselves so easily...bhav khana toh ladkiyonki speciality hai boss...i want to c virat like those awara, pagal, diwana ashiqe...

Cont soon soon soon...waiting fr the next

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negha

@negha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#923

Amazing Amazing chapter...Dear...Loved it...Vihaan and mauci...Convo..Virman Dance awesome...Loved it..Thank you for PM

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itsfate

@itsfate

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#924

awesome update

love manvi and vihaan

superb virman scene

update soon

thanks for the pm

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#925

Awesome Update..!!! Vihan is so cute...and she is simiar to Virat is some ways..and Virat seduced her twice n she fell for him..Waiting for next n Thnks fo rthe PM.!

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#926

YO GUYS!!! List ur ages when u post a feedback! Cuz soon u will read some awkward dialogs for which I have to hide my face so do me a HUGE favor let me know ok?? Thank u

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#927

amazing update

loved vihaan and maanvi's convo

loved virman part

thanks for the pm

plz cont soon

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#928

Vihaan is so cute awesome update

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ashfaqmiyaann

@Anees.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#929

What an update farryyy

it was simply amazing

mind-blowing n blowing

omg maanvi pregnant bt who's baby??

n virman scene ws cute yaar

nn awww vihaaann just love tht boy yaar

n i am 13 😃

UPDATE SOONEST

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#930

As usual I'm extremely late, blame it on my boss.

The Vihaan and Manvi parts were really cute, its like she sees Virat through him.

Interesting no one knows where Virat is and you have made Manvi preggy which means that if Virat was out of her life for 10years then he couldnt be the father. Or could he ??

The present parts with the Manvi and Virat cuteness is really nice to read, finally after all this time you are giving some passionate scenes for them. Forgot to tell that loved how you put that Virat asked permission to kiss manvi i know you mentioned in my thread that you thought that writers always go for the kiss rather than ask permission. Love how you are writing things that you always want to read.

Ok so instead of the mystery getting solved we're getting into more mystery now the question is what happened to Virat and who's the baby daddy. Know the whole weird convo on fb but that would be so weird if he had you know what stored and please don't make Varun the father.

where the hell did he come from

update soon, you might not see me much around on FB but hope to be back soon.

take care

Love ya

Nush