[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 88

hey...thx for the pm...the updte was amazing bit short😭...its ok...viren. manvi convo was really gud...just wondering wat is viren hiding fr everyone...nd luved virats tactics during sleep😳😳

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Small attempt to give everything.. Lol cuz soon there will be Virman Virman n virman!!!! I'm already bored with writing all virman scenes :/ but then writing a psyco part n lmaooo ur girl cries too much man!!!

awesome update

Originally posted by: teenaalexi

hey...thx for the pm...the updte was amazing bit short😭...its ok...viren. manvi convo was really gud...just wondering wat is viren hiding fr everyone...nd luved virats tactics during sleep😳😳

continue soon..cant wait

DID U JUST CALL MY UPDATE SHORT????? :O :O :O :O where is my stick!!! Gonna whack u hard lol jk!! Aap ke liye big updates next part mei jarur pesh kiye jayenge ;)

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">awesome update ...loved it faria👍🏼👍🏼</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">the jeeju saali convo virat ki tareeefein ho rahi thi ya burai samajh hi nai araha tha...jo bhi tha bahot maza aaya ...😛😃😃</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">and wats the little secret viren is trying to hide from all ...wanna know that sooon...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">i feel endd is not gonna be happy one thats why yu are soo excited abt it ...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">virman romance was fab love yu faria for tht😉😉😆</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">and neend mein bhi koi romance karta hai kya haan na humara virat karta hai😛</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">am sure alll virman fans will be satisfied now with this awesome update ..😊</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">waiting for next one ...update sooon😊</font>

Vo Jo karta hai na vo koi nehi karta :p making him exception from each n every angle !!!

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Hey... awsm updt... loved it to th core dear... Th taxi scene, virat cooking pizza or it would be better to say th dramma with those pizzas... so entertaining (claps)... then drunk virat nd his activities were super hilarious nd th precap ...haa haa haa I already know what he was checking on his chest... this was th best updt of this story... fantastic...pls cont soon nd thnks fr th pm...:)

Lol Chk pg 119 already updated

Loved it..!!! did get ur hints to some extent and the book has answers to it...Virat is no more as per their conversation..thats clear..or u may surprise us...but like Virat's way to check if hez stil a aman,,.😆Loved it...Nice Precap,.Waitin for next n Thanks for the pm.>1

evil puttar ji what an update yaar..i must say aaj toh tumne dil khush kar ditta yaar😳 lol..i loved and enjoyed the each and every bit of this update..loved the whole karnia scene and it was a treat to read. their talk about virat somehow proves that may be virat is somehow a phsyco case😆 but as you are a writer so you know better than us😳 oh ho they were praising so much about virat omg faria are you serious i mean in one update you gave us so much and u didn't even use your evil brain :p

Originally posted by: Syed695

Loved it..!!! did get ur hints to some extent and the book has answers to it...Virat is no more as per their conversation..thats clear..or u may surprise us...but like Virat's way to check if hez stila aman,,.😆Loved it...Nice Precap,.Waitin for next n Thanks for the pm.>1

Did u just kill my boy? :O :O jallad!!!! How cud u? Rofl

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

evil puttar ji what an update yaar..i must say aaj toh tumne dil khush kar ditta yaar😳lol..i loved and enjoyed the each and every bit of this update..loved the whole karnia scene and it was a treat to read. their talk about virat somehow proves that may be virat is somehow a phsyco case😆but as you are a writer so you know better than us😳oh ho they were praising so much about virat omg faria are you serious i mean in one update you gave us so much and u didn't even use your evil brain :p

coming to the present it was hilarious and lot of fun like last part.. haww virat is good boy yeah yeah we all know that how much he is good :p overall enjoyed the whole part

am so sorry for not giving long comment as am used to give actually running from short time but when i'll have free time i'll make sure that you will fall from your bed while reading my comment :p

thank u so much for the pm

cont soon

Lol don't worry abt late feedback! As long as u give one I'm happy!!! Waise Bhi expectations won't be high cux it's really boring story n u gonna hate it!!!