[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 87

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Posted: 12 years ago
omggg faria this was suchhh a cute update
loved it 😊😳😳 i reallyyy wana hug u for giving such a cute one and u know the best part is that you give each fan a chance to enjoy be it virman or vv bros or jeeman or karnia or vivaan everyone like each and every person thats nit easy but love u for doing that 🤗 the jeju sali convo was adorable well one mistake hmm seems like its still on the way did manvi saw virat with someone else and believed that he is giving her dhoka and stuff lol lame guess i know lol i will wait...the bedroom scene was awwiieee umm bit romantic i can say 😆😉 but i liked the last scene virat was being cute and nyc hehehe so not him😆😆 but i liked how calm and caring he sounded thank uuu for the pm 😳
lots of love ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
jiju sali convo was superb
loved virman convo
plz cont soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vamps1996

<font color="#990033" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">omggg faria this was suchhh a cute update</font>

<font color="#990033" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">loved it😊😳😳i reallyyy wana hug u for giving such a cute one and u know the best part is that you give each fan a chance to enjoy be it virman or vv bros or jeeman or karnia or vivaan everyone like each and every person thats nit easy but love u for doing that🤗the jeju sali convo was adorable well one mistake hmm seems like its still on the way did manvi saw virat with someone else and believed that he is giving her dhoka and stuff lol lame guess i know lol i will wait...the bedroom scene was awwiieee umm bit romantic i can say😆😉but i liked the last scene virat was being cute and nyc hehehe so not him😆😆but i liked how calm and caring he soundedthank uuu for the pm😳</font>
<font color="#990033" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">lots of love❤️</font>



Small attempt to give everything.. Lol cuz soon there will be Virman Virman n virman!!!! I'm already bored with writing all virman scenes :/ but then writing a psyco part n lmaooo ur girl cries too much man!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Excellent updt...present scene left so many hind abt the past mystery...so manvi is also curious to knw abt the secrets of virats dairy...bcs i think there is something very IMP, very big abt manvis life too...some answers...hmmm intresting...thnx fr the chhotu sa vihaan scene...that even enough fr me...lolll

ahhh loved virats naughty n crazy moves while sleeping...ahem ahem...manvis discomfortness, her nervouseness...superb...cont soon...as d hint fr the next chappi sounds 18+...ulalala...cont asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome..superb update faria
loved it to core
loved the convo between manvi and viren
who is manvi 's present
loved virat
Continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update...!!!
loved it to the bottom of heart !!
plz update soon..!
thnx for PM !!
written very well..!
fab...splended..!!
waiting for nxt...! eagerly!!
update soon..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
faria it was cute update!!
loved it!!
continue soon
thnx fod da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aye hayeee
wat an amazingly cute update
loved viren n manvi scene
end virman scene haawww n aawww
so cute wen he asked for permission to kiss her
mind blowing update before eid (even though eid day still isnt decided here)
update soon faria 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update ...loved it faria 👍🏼👍🏼
the jeeju saali convo virat ki tareeefein ho rahi thi ya burai samajh hi nai araha tha...jo bhi tha bahot maza aaya ...😛😃😃
and wats the little secret viren is trying to hide from all ...wanna know that sooon...
i feel endd is not gonna be happy one thats why yu are soo excited abt it ...
virman romance was fab love yu faria for tht 😉😉😆
and neend mein bhi koi romance karta hai kya haan na humara virat karta hai 😛
am sure alll virman fans will be satisfied now with this awesome update ..😊
waiting for next one ...update sooon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey... awsm updt... loved it to th core dear... Th taxi scene, virat cooking pizza or it would be better to say th dramma with those pizzas... so entertaining (claps)... then drunk virat nd his activities were super hilarious nd th precap ...haa haa haa I already know what he was checking on his chest... this was th best updt of this story... fantastic...pls cont soon nd thnks fr th pm...:)

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